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paagal_

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Posted: 12 years ago

Sadie, amazing update once again! I for one hope the nights not over lol! :p cont soon

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Pasya

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Posted: 12 years ago

omg... 1 more update... Lve u 4 that...!! Plz updte tjmv i am w8ng 4 that also...!!!!

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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 2 and 3 were amazing

I loved ur version of the song

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JASLEEN

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Posted: 12 years ago

After reading this I just wanna say "LAG JAA GALLE" to u dear...loved d whole part...beautifully written...read it 2 times...AsYa moment was so dreamy...

Thanks 4 d pm swthrt n want next update very soon...

~JAZ~

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Dee

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved it. Even I thought Lag ja gale had a very little Asya.. I always wanted more of them.And, its such a beautiful track. I guess you did complete justice to it. Thanks for the pm and the scrap.

Do continue soon!!!

Dee

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cherryfrasier

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Posted: 12 years ago

Please continue. Very well written...

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Another great update! 👏
I loved the "Lag Ja Gale" part! ❤️
It was super-cute and romantic.
Beautiful! 👍🏼
Continue soon! 😛
-Fari 😳 ❤️

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Ayra Nuzhat

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Posted: 12 years ago

Your version of Lag Ja Gale was Awesome!! thanks for the pm

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sneaky-aj

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Posted: 12 years ago

awww!!! the last scene is beautiful!!
Asad does need to learn to let go of his control..only then will he find true happiness

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DiVirgo

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Posted: 12 years ago

Omg just started reading! Loved it! Sorry for not reading before ! If possible cud you pm me plZ?! Tks!

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