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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aman93

when u gonna update it


not now dear
plz w8
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Applef

poor asad...hmmm😭


is that is asad?? lets see in nxt update😉

update soon..sorry but not soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice story...
just read all in one go...
loved the concept...its sad but u portrayed so nicely...
Asad & Zoya's heart broken state...they try to hate each other but can't...deep in their heart...love still is alive...they can't hate each other...so emotional & heart touching...
loved ur writting...
I hate that sofia..😡
zoya is in india now...hope no more mu's...(but i feel that sidra introduced mady as her papa...ohhh nooo !!!!!)
plz continue soon...
Plz pm me when u update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: skavya

nice story... thanx

just read all in one go... thanks again for taking time
loved the concept...its sad but u portrayed so nicely... thanks the thrd time
Asad & Zoya's heart broken state. hmmm sadest part 😭..they try to hate each other but can't...deep in their heart...love still is alive...they can't hate each other...so emotional & heart touching... i knw very sad
loved ur writting... 😃
I hate that sofia..😡 mee too 😡
zoya is in india now...hope no more mu's...(but i feel that sidra introduced mady as her papa...ohhh nooo !!!!!) OMG mind reader
plz continue soon... i'll try to...m very busy
Plz pm me when u update 😊 sure

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

just working on it
will try to update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
thankyou guyz for ur lovely comment ❤️
Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry guyz for not updating it with the other four...i read al ur comments and replied many of it...well here is the next part


recap:-asad cried infront of ayaan, after one week at mohsin's party mohsin proposed her due to zeenat's force. after lots of protest zoya agree the proposal and divorce with asad and for all farouqui's with mohsin's family came to india, rashid with dilshaad came to recieve them, at the same day mohsin and sidra went to a park and sidra met with a minor accident when mohsin was'nt there

Part 6:-

he took her to the hospital...doctor bandaged her leg and now she was resting in hospital room...he moved towards her and before he say something she started "hello" she said with a thankful smile maybe for saving her "hi...how is u feeling now? is it paining much?" he asked "i m feeling much better...it's paining but not much" she said "hmmm, brave girl...btw what's your name little princess?" he asked "my name is sidra...annd ur uncle" "my name is Asad Ahmed Khan" "Ya ALLAH..." she said widening her eyes "it's very long...shall i call u Mr.Khan...short and sweet" "ahh, not a problem...well give me your address so then i should drop u at ur home...ur parents must be tense for u" he said "address...i don't have my address Mr.Khan" she said with a sad face "why?" "i just came to india this morning...i don't know the address" "ohhh...plz don't be sad...do u remember anything else?" "let me think." "no problem take your time" he replied...she was busy in thinking but asad was just staring at her may be she makes him remind someone...someone he loved alot ...someone for whom he cried...someone who betrayed him and that someone is non other than zoya...the way she said "Ya ALLAH" is totally like zoya.."what the hell is going in your mind asad...just stop thinking about zoya...she is no more in your life, don't u remember he left u all alone and too at tht time when u needed her the most" he thought to himself and then was brought back to reality with sidra's voice

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he just came back in the park with a bunch of balloon and then what he saw made him shocked...sidra was not there...his grip get lose and those balloons flew away...not believing that sidra is not there he ran close to the bench..."YA ALLAH where had saddy gone...what should i do..." he thought and search her in the whole park...she was no where...he ran outside...search here and there...he was looking for her since half an hour...tension was written all over his face...he was still searching her when he got a call

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"yay i remembered" she shouted bringing asad back into his sense..."wow that's great...now tell me what u remembered?" he asked and she moved her hand towards him and said "this" "what's this...what will i do with your palm?" he asked with lots of confusion "oh ho Mr.Khan i mean this number written on my hand" she said and he looked at her hand with full concentration "oh yes...so who's no is this?" he asked "it's my mama's no...when we came to india my khala give this no to my mama, i was having a pen in my hand so i just wrote tht number on my palm it" she replied "ohkay so lets call ur mama" he took his mobile and dialed the number but before someone recieve the call and he talk with her mom she snatched mobile from him "i'll talk to mama" she said and he nodded...

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zoya was still lying on her bed when she got a call...it was an unknown no, she thought for a while but then she recieved it

"hello...who is this?"

"hey mama it's me sidra"

"sidra baby from who's number u r calling me?"

"it's my friend number mama"

"your friend in india an...and where is mohsin?"

"umm mama maddy is not with me"

"what do u mean? where is he?"

"mama i m in a hospital..."

"hospital" she stood up from her bed "hospital...why? what r u doing there? why mohsin is not with u?"

"actually mama maddy...balloons...far from...park...so then i saw...butterfly...ran...and..car...hitted me..so" she was scared to speak as zoya was in much anger...zoya sensed that she is scared of her so she calmed herself and then speak

"sidra...baby don't be scared from me...i will not scold u...ohkay i'll talk to u later about it first tell me in which hospital u r?"
she smiled bcz her mom was'nt angry on her

"wait mom let me ask" she remove mobile from her ear and moved toward asad and whispered to him "mama is asking.. in which hospital i m?" he smiled "oh really, tell her tht u r in city hospital" he replied whispering back "ohkay" she said

"hello mama...it's city hospital.."

"i'll be there soon"

she hung up the call and call mohsin...on the other side mohsin was busy in searching sidra when he got zoya's call "why she called, oh God what will i say to her when she will ask about sidra" he thought but then taking ALLAH's name he picked it

"hello"

"hello mohsin sidra is..." he cutted

"zoya me and sidra will be back soon, we are just moving towards the restaurant...she wants to eat pizza"

"mohsin i knw sidra is not with u" he was shocked listening it

"what? u know? how?"

"bcz she called me she is in hospital"

"hospital... what happened to her?"

i will tell u later about it...and now i just want to go there but i don't have any convince so come fast and pick me up"

"yeah m on my way" he hung up the call and ran towards his car

at hospital

it's almost 25 mins since sidra called her mom. asad was talking to sidra, she told her about her parents wedding, at first he was confused but then he think to himself that may be her mother is doing second marriage... they both were enjoying there company when a nurse came there, she gave a slip to asad "doctor had suggested some medicine, plz go and get it" she said and left handing over the slip to asad "hey u take rest i'll be right back" he left too and just after a minute or two zoya along with mohsin came inside,as soon as she saw sidra she ran towards her and hugged her, she was crying and mohsin was busy in consoling and at the same time asad came back he saw that no one noticed him so he put that medicines on the near table and turned towards the exit when she stopped him "wait Mr.Khan" sidra yelled "Mr.Khan" zoya muttered "whom u r stopping jaan?" she said broking the hug and wiping her tears "him" sidra replied and pointing towards her back, zoya wonder whom she was talkng about bcz the name she said was non other than Mr.khan...her heart skip and she turned and then it make both of them shock...they were standing infront of eachother after those longs six years, it did'nt took a second for them in bringing there emotions in there eyes "there love, there sacrifices for eachother, and atlast there betrayal but avoiding the last emotions they took slow steps and move forward reducing the gap between them and in some second they were so closed to eachother and then they hugged eachother and were in same position for so long, they were lost but then were brought back to there senses by sidra's voice "Mr.Khan meet them, my parents" she said and nw they r out from there dream world which made them realise them tht they did'nt move forward, they did'nt hugged they were still there far from eachother like always ..."and mama, mady he is Mr.Khan...he saved me" she added as mohsin never saw asad so he moved to him and thanked him for saving sidra he just nodded his head with a fake smile before he could say something she mumbled "lets go mohsin" he did'nt heared it clearly and then she left avoiding his gaze, mohsin followed her with sidra in his arms...sidra gave him a flying kiss before leaving and he just smiled between his hidden tears

precap:-pyar hai ya saza ae mere dil bata
tutata kyu nahi dard ka silsila
is pyar me ho kaise kaise imtiha
ye pyar likhe kaisi kaisi dasta
ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar



wow finally done 👍🏼 well asya met...i hope the last para made sense as i did'nt red it bcz i wrote it at almost 3:00 am ...plz share ur precious views, it would encourage me to write more

P.S:-Pm's r on the way

Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG WHYYY???? Now im crying tooo 😭 as if the show wasn't bad enough today that u made me cry reading this update too. but no seriously that was so emotional. great update tho. and thank you for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...great update dear
Jst like today's episode was emotional likewise yours made me sentimental
Superb update n thnx for the pm

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