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Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER 9

After the dance competition was over, everyone headed

towards the joint house being Farooqui Villa and Khan Villa. Girls

entered towards the FV while boys to the KV.

Dress code:


Girls in red

Boys in black

Boys got ready in just an hour and when Aayan called Humeira

after getting ready, she asked him to leave with the other boys

and the girls would reach the venue on time by themselves.

Dresses worn by the boys.


Venue : 7 PM


Armaan : "How long are they gonna take more yarr! I'm dying to

see her." He said dreamily.

Asad : " Even me. " He said without thinking.

Aayan : " Asad bhai... after whatever happened today...you are

still waiting for that bitch." 😲

Armaan: "" Yeah Asad. We know you don't like Tanveer, but still

why do you hang out with her?" πŸ₯±

Asad : " Woah!! Wait wait! Who said I'm waiting for Tanveer??

Out of all people..Tanveer?? Guys..."

Aayan : " Then, who are you...wait..." He looked at Armaan. πŸ˜›

Armaan : " Are you thinking what I am thinking?" πŸ˜ƒ

Aayan/ Armaan : " ZOYAAA!" 😲 They asked shocked, to which

Asad just blushed and turned the other side. 😳

Armaan grabbed him by his wrist and pulled him into a huge hug,

which was later joined by an equally joyous Aayan. πŸ‘ πŸ€—

After pulling Away,

Aayan : " Bhaijaan, I am so so so happy!! Really Zoya is the

perfect girl for you. And I am 100% okay with her being my

bhabhi."

Armaan : " Yeah dude! She's just superb! Absolutely your type.

So bata.. when are you gonna propose her??" πŸ˜‰

Asad: " Today!" He grinned. πŸ˜ƒ

Armaan/ Aayan : REALLY?? 😲 πŸ˜ƒ

Asad just smiled. 😊

Aayan : " So how you gonna propose?? Any plans??" πŸ˜‰

Asad : " Nothing special. I just want to spill my heart out. And

she is a simple kind of girl, so she will be happy with it." 😊

Armaan : " But she was looking HOT today while she was dancing

with you." And he started laughing. πŸ˜†

Asad : " She is your soon-to-be-bhabi. Ridzz ko bulaoo kya??" πŸ˜†


Armaan : " Oopss Mr. Possessive boyfriend. It's okay."

Meanwhile Aayan's eyes were glued in the entrance door. πŸ˜•

Armaan : " Oye! Aayan kya huwa?" πŸ˜•

Aayan : ( Still in his dreamland) Aare sab bullets lag rahe hai

yarr."

Asad : " Oye! Pagal, who are you talking about??"

Aayan : " Aare turn around and see yourself."

Both Asad and Armaan turned around and they were awed. 😲

Asad : "Are they??" 😲

Armaan : "Yeah man." 😳

Zoya, Riddhima, Humeira and Najma were entering the hall

looking dead drop gorgeous in those red sarees ( Zoe and Ridz)

and night gowns ( Najma and Humziee).


Dresses worn by girls


Najma


Humeira


Riddima

Zoya


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They waved in the guys' direction but the boys were in no

condition of returning the gestures as they were busy admiring

their lady loves. 😳

Zoya : " Hey guys!!! Where are you lost!!" πŸ˜†

Armaan : " On you guys?" πŸ˜ƒ

Ridzz : " Sorry??" πŸ˜•

Asad : " Ridzz? Tu kabse saree pehenne lag gayee..woh bhi aise

sexy wali??" And he started laughing. πŸ˜†

Ridzz : " Shut up!! BDW this was Zoya's idea." πŸ˜ƒ

Aaayan : " Zoya..bha... I mean by d way..tum NY mein bhi proms

peh saree pehenti thi??" πŸ˜ƒ

Zoya : " No, no.. it's my first time." πŸ˜ƒ

Najma : " Humziee chalo yaha se, hume toh koi notice bhi nahi kar

raha." She said faking sadness.

Aayan : " Aare Humeira begum...Aap to iss dil ki mallika ho.. aap

ki toh tareef bhi karne ki jaroorat nahi hai.. chalo let's go and

dance! Will you please?" Aayan said giving his hand to her. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜‰

On getting an assuring smile from Asad-Zoya, Humeira joined

Aayan to the dance floor.

Asad : " And yeah ! my dear lil sister, you are looking like a

princess today. I never knew my lil sissy was so preety. I

guess I should start searching a price for her.. what say?" He

smiled to which Najma blushed and hugged Asad. πŸ˜› 😳

Zoya, Armaan and Riddhima smiled looking at them. 😊

Armaan : " Hey Ridzz, its prom night yarr..c'mon let's go and

dance baby!"πŸ˜‰

Ridz : " Yeah, sure! Come." And she pulled him.


Armaan : " Hey Najma..come lets go." He pulled Najma along and

left after showing thumbs up to Asad. πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ˜‰


Asad and Zoya were left alone, with nno words to start the

conversation... After a minutes of silence Asad spoke.

Asad : " You look gorgeous Zoe."

Zoya : " Thankss.. You too."

Asad : " I'm always." πŸ˜‰ And he winked at her to which she just

blushed. 😳

Asad : " Zoya...woh... I wanted..I..."

Zoya : " Wanna say something?" πŸ˜•

Asad : " yeah I want to say... I jus... ( meanwhile his phone rang)

BAD TIMING (he muttered)

Asad : " Will be back! Wait for me okay! "

Zoya : " Yeah sure !"

After Asad went Kabhir came to Zoya.

Kabhir : " Someone's looking breathtaking today!"


Zoya : " Hahaha..thankss.. You too..not bad haan!"


Kabhir : " Oh thank you! Wanna join me on the dance floor."


Zoya : " Woh I am..."


Kabhir : " C'mon yarr...I'm your friend right??"


Zoya : " Yeah but..i am"


Kabhir : " No buts' no ifs'...come" And he pulled her to the dance

floor.

Everyone was dancing like crazy!


As if it was the last day of their life. As if they weren't going to

get the chance to dance ever in their life again.

After attending the call, Asad came back and when he didn't

saw her, where she was previously, he started searching

around, and that's when he found zoya dancing like crazy with

Kabhir.

He just wanted to punch the guy and beat daylights out of him.

But controlled himself as he had no intensions of creating scene

amongst thousands of people.

He went and ordered a strong wine and drank in a go looking at

Kabhir-Zoya's direction without blinking his eyes.


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After the dance was over, Kabhir grabbed Zoya to one of the

room, saying he wants to talk about something important with

her.

This didn't go unnoticed by Asad, who was staring nowhere but

at HIS zoya, since one long hours.


What raged him more was Zoya being so frank and easy with

that guy.


He ran after them, to make sure zoya would not land in any kind

of problem.

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IN THE ROOM


Zoya: " Hey Kabhir! Why did you bring me here?"

Kabhir: Zoya! I want to say something. I tried to say many times

but couldn't be more courageous.


Zoya: I am you friend na? C'mon say what you wanna. I need to

go, meet Asad as well."

Asad reached there.

Kabhir: Zoya! I LOVE YOU! I really do.

Zoya: Yeh keheneke liye yaha laye the?? I LOVE YOU too silly!

Aab chalo."

And that was it for Asad. He couldn't take it anymore. He

punched the wall, blood oozing out of his hand and then left the

place in a huff.

InSIDE THE ROOM.


Zoya : " Hey what was that??""


Kabhir : " what??."


Zoya : " That sound, followed by some footsteps."


Kabhir : " I didn't hear."


Zoya : 'No...I thought..someone was here..okay leave it. So what

were you saying?"


Kabhir: "Oh! Yeah..I mean Really Zoya?? Did you accept my...I

mean...I was afraid...that you...Asad??"


Zoya: "Wait...wait..why are you surprised. You are my friend, you

said I love you Zoya and I replied I love you too..what's there to

be surprised. And Asad??"


Kabhir: " No..no..I guess, you didn't understand what I meant."


Zoya: "No...I did... Wait wait... Were you saying I love you in

another sense..i mean boyfriend-girlfriend wala sense??" And

she started laughing.

Kabhir: " Here I'm proposing you and you are laughing? You are

really crazy."


Zoya: " Yeah I am. But seriously I said I love you too just in a

friend basis. NY mein toh normally this is said normally and I

thought the same here. So I said you I love you too, just as a

friend. And since I am in a mood of having so much fun today, I

didn't take it seriously."

Kabhir: " But I meant in a serious tone Zoya. I really love you.

Since the day you came and sat with me. Despite what I did with

you on the very first day, you behaved so well with me and I

could help myself."


Zoya: "Kabhir! I am sorry. Please don't take me wrong. But I

always took you as a friend and not more."

Kabhir:" Do you love someone??"


Zoya:" I'm not sure, but I think I'm falling for someone. " She

blushed thinking about Asad. 😳

Kabhir: "And if I'm not wrong, is he Asad??" he raised his

eyebrows.


Zoya looked at him wide eyed. " Do you read my mind. I mean

even Asad don't know this." And she started laughing and

Kabhir couldn't help but laugh with her.

Meanwhile somewhere in the streets of

Delhi.

Asad was driving like a maniac. No fears of traffic, passers-by,

approaching vehicles, nothing at all. His mind kept echoing the

words, " I LOVE YOU ZOYA and I LOVE YOU TOO YOU

SILLY"


Why did you do this to me Zoya. WHY!!!!! All those late night

talks and chats, sneaking into your room, morning texts, that

didn't mean anything to you??


And moreover that KISS? What was that?? Why did you do this

to me? Now when I can't dream my life without you, how can I

see you with some other guys??

I hate you Zoya...I hate you...!!!!!!

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IN THE ROOM

Kabhir : " So Asad won once again."

Zoya : " Why??"

Kabhir : " He has been my rival since primary school. And even

today he won the first...no no second...I guess true love of my

life." And he started laughing.

Zoya : " You're funny. "

Kabhir : " Yeah. Okay, you go to Asad. He doesn't like me too

much. So he may feel bad if he finds you with me."

Zoya : " Yeah, okay. But you are nothing like I thought you were

on the first day."

Kabhir : " I am like that only. But I am good with few people."

And he gave a hearty laugh.

Zoya : "Haha.. Okay I am leaving."

Kabhir : " yeah, c ya! "

Zoya : " okay!" She smiled and turned to leave.

Kabhir : " Zoya !"

She turned. " Yeah"

Kabhir : " This won't affect our friendship, right?"

Zoya : " Thappad khaoge kya? You were and are always my good

friend."

Kabhir : " Thanks..and yeah if you need anything I'm always

there."

Zoya : " Yeah... I can rely on you. Thanks."

And she left.

IN THE HALL

It's been an hour, but there was no hint of Asad. Zoya had

searched every corner of the hall, but couldn't find him.


Zoya : " Guys! Where's Asad??"

Armaan : " Why, he was with you only."

Zoya : " Yeah, he wanted to say something, but then he received

a call and I haven't seen him."

Ridzz : " I saw him standing in that corner and staring at you

while you were dancing with Kabhir. After that I don'tknow."

Aayan : " You were dancing with Kabhir?? Zoya!!!"

Zoya : " Yeah, but...what's wrong!"

Armaan : " She is such a dumboo!"

Humeira : " Aapi. Why did you dance with Kabhir instead of Asad

bhaijaan?"

Zoya : " Aare... Asad didn't ask me for dance.And I haven''t got

chance to talk with him as well.

Just then Najma received a call and she shhh-ed everyone

saying it was from home.

As she hanged up she had tears in her eyes.

Armaan : " Hey tamatar?? What happened? Why you crying??'

Zoya : " Najma, what happened, please say." She started

worrying.

Najma : " Ammi...had called..and ...she said...Asad bhaijaan..."

She said between her sobs.


Chapter 10

And it conntinuess...


Early update so no PRECAP..direct nnew chapter..i guess in 2-3 days. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Edited by Aneezarp27 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...
And I guess the precap is Asad met wid an accident since he was drunk and roaming on the road!
Then Zoya comes to hospital and then the proposalπŸ˜†
Update soon.waiting for ur nxt update...πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by manognasai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: manognasai

I read all the parts in one go.And I liked this story!
Pm me also wen u update.
U are updating now na...WaitingπŸ˜ƒ


Thankewww πŸ˜ƒ

Glad u likeddd!!

Buddy meh for PM πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 11 years ago
cliffy.its not fair. plzzz update soon
Edited by sasir - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wowww ohh god asad is soo angryy but i loved it its awsomee
Afr.uu thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
I THINK ASAD DID SOMETHING TO HIMSELF
iTS aWESOME!!!
Love It!!!😊
Edited by ....Asya.... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg!!! what happened to asad???😲

please update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it..:-)
Plzz update it asap..;-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsome update.. The pictures which you add in each chapter are good... It makes the readers visualize the scene..
No pre-cap ... 😭

Waiting for the next update.. Must say.. your story is going in a very good flow..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome yaar. im sure asad met with an accident. plz update fast.
😊

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