ASYA Drabble: My hubby on train..

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guys this is a small drabble i wrote on asya hope u like it...
here it goes...

ASYA DRABBLE: my hubby on train…

Mumbai 5pm

We were at the railway station in Mumbai. This is the first time I actually saw the crowd in the Mumbai local trains.. after hearing a lot about them I just wanted to travel in them at any cost.. and today im here waiting for the train to come.. we don't know where we are going and we took the ticket to the last stop and planned to get back to this station again.. I just wanted an experience of travelling in it and here is my hubby Asad Ahmed Khan fulfilling it though he feels its my bachpana or craziness or madness but he knows I want what I wish for and I knew he will fulfil what I wished..

Atlast got into train with the pushings of the crowds.. with the crowd we were separated and he stood in the middle taking support of a rod and I luckily got a seat and sat adjusting in a small space along with 6 other college girls who were probably returning from their college..

After few minutes I noticed a girl staring at someone and I followed the direction. It was him my hubby..looks like they were fascinated by him.. ofcourse they had to, he was so handsome afterall.. He looks like a greek god with a perfect body abs and biceps and dressing.. today he was in casuals with just a black shirt and blue jeans.. he was looking superb and the rough look of his stubble added more to his charm.. I saw the girl signaling others to look at him… all were mesmerized by him…

They started sharing the thoughts which each other about him.. I enjoyed everything and was smiling at their thoughts.. their words were like this:

He is too hot.. black suits him a lot..

oh God his body his look and the stubble they are just killing me…

I just want such a man in my life.. why someone like him I hope I get him..

He has a perfect body and his biceps.. looks like he is a boxer..(I wondered they could even guess that he knows boxing also great observation)

I just want to see him hiting people I think he will give a deadly look at them..

Im gonna die seeing him like this.. he has killer eyes..

But before I die I wish I get to spend a date with him..

It will be enough if I touch his abs and die..

Initially I was enjoying all the comments and later the way they were drooling at him made me jealous.. he was mine my property and I have all the copy and negative rights on him.. no one can see him like that.. the way they were discussing about his body and abs made me furious.. though he was not giving atleast a look at him they were dying upon him and if at all he looked at them then OH GOD I can't stop them I guess..

When I was in these thoughts the station where we need to get down the last station for the train was nearing and he started coming near me.. I could realize this from the comments of the girls infront of me that he was coming near us and they were damn excited.. one of them got ready to propose him too.. I could sense it and before the girl made a move I ran fastly near him and held his hand at the elbow and locked it between my hand and my body..

The girls looked shocked and their eyes were wide open I turned towards them smiled and said "my husband Mr. Asad Ahmad Khan.." the girls gave a shocking look and they couldnot face me anymore.. I was smiling at their facial expressions and asad was totally confused..

One of the girl said "sorry for all that we said about him".. I replied its ok… and I moved out of the train when it halted and went out of the station.. I was just smiling and asad was totally confused.. what he asked.. what did they say about me to u??

I wont say it.. if I say it u will be on top of the Mt. Everest or will give them a class on tehzeeb and tameez..i don't want both to happen.. I replied still smiling and laughing remembering their words and faces..

Ok wait I will get the tickets to go back.. he said.. "no we will go by taxi no more train journey its enough.. I cant bear that crowd again.." I said..

We moved out and hired taxi and I sat beside him holding his arm and resting my head on his shoulder.. there is no problem with the crowd but I don't want any more girls to drool over him and comment on him after all im jealous as he is my hubby and just mine and only I have all rights on him…

THE END

hope u like it and pls dont throw chappals at me if it is bad..

pls do like and comment if u like it...

with love

Rithz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow
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hahaha i loved dis side of Zoya
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hahaha..Nice one..thanks for the pm
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Hahaha... So short and cute!!!!
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wow...awesome blossom
loved it...its so cute..
i felt like im one of those students...😳
coz im always ready to drool at him..😆
loved possessive zoya...

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WoW this was beautiful, I absolutely love this.

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Hahaha nice one too gud...😊
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Originally posted by: nilusoni

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Originally posted by: AsyaManic

hahaha i loved dis side of Zoya

thank u..
btw i loved ur DP... its awesome...

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