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salam, i am here with the second last chapter of this story😃😭, well i know i am updating very late but this is a long update...enjoy😃

Part 9;-
during iftaar time at sidduiqui house

all the ladies were busy in arranging the dinning table when the door bell rang, nuzhat went to open the door, there was a man in his early twenties standing at the door with a wide smile

nuzhat;-ji ap kon hain?

guy;-ji hum vikram hai...

nuzhat hidding her smile;-vikram...kaun vikram?

vikram;-ji hum rajni ko lene aye hain, bohat poch tach ki hai humne or huma ye khabar mile hai k humare patni rajni yaha reh rahe hai

nuzhat;-ji wo...before nuzhat could complete razia reached there

razia;-kisse gappa laga rahe ho nuzhat, jaldi ao

nuzhat turning towards razia;-momani wo vikram ji aye hain humai...mera matlab ha rajni baji ko lene k liye

razia placed her hand on her chest and whispered;-ALLAH

as soon as everyone heared it they all gathered towards the main door

gaffur;-kon ho tum or mere bete ko rajni kyun keh raha ho?

vikram;-maaf kijea ga magar mai yahan sirf apne patni rajni ko lejana aya hun

ayaan(angrilly);-wo tumhare biwi nahe hai...nahe hai wo tumhare biwi...wo mere humaira hai samj...

but before he complete his sentence they heard rajni voice...rajni shouts vikram's name as soon as she saw vikram and ran towards him...he holds her hand and says;-khuda ka shukar hai k tum huma mil gaye jante ho humne kitna dhonda tumhe, kitne yaad a rahe the huma tumhare..

rajni;-huma bhe apki bohat yad a rahe the, ab ap a gaye hain na ab huma yahan se lejae...hum humare ghar jana chahte hain...ap zara rukiye hum abhe ate hain

and with that she went inside her room, nikhat following her

inside the room

nikhat;-pareshan na ho humaira bhaijan tumhe jana nahe denge

humaira;-par baji agar ayaan ne mujhe nahe roka to mai kya karunge??? agar wo ab bhe ye accept nahe karenge to kya hoga?

nikhat;-tum fikar mat karo humaira...tum janti ho na ke humne sab soch kar he ye plan kya hai...agar wo nahe accept karenge tabh bhe hum tumhe kise na kise tarah rok lenge

humaira;-bus abto maine sab kuch ALLAH par chod diya hai

nikhat;-ab jaldi chalo warna sab andar a jaenge

and humaira carried her laugage and they both walked towards the living room...outside everyone were panic...especially ayaan and razia...gaffur was pacing here and there in the living room when rajni came with her laugage...she took blessings from all elders and bit good bye to youngers and start moving towards vikram only to be stopped by ayaan who hold her hand and pulled her towards him with a force that she perfectly landed in his chest...they stared in there eyes and were totally losted when vikram called rajni

vikram;-rajni chala huma wapis dheradon jana hai

ayaan still staring humaira;-wo kahin nahe ja rahe

rajni trying to free her hand from his grim;-ayaan ji please huma chordan huma jana hai humare vikram a gaye hain

ayaan(shouts);-wo apka kuch nahe hai, or na he ap rajni hai

rajni;-ap itne yakeen se kaisa keh sakte hain, apka humse kuch rishta nahe...samjhe ap ...she shouted back

ayaan;-rishta hai...mohabbat ka rishta...mai apse mohabbat karta hun humaira or ye mere mohabbat he hai jo mujhe ye ehsaas dilate hai ke ap mere humaira hain

humaira(smilling);-agar itne he mohabbat karte the to kabhi iqraar kyun nahe kiya...kyun mujhe itne takleef de apne ayaan kyun?

ayaan;-ap...ap huma...humaira...he asked emotionally and she nodded in return and in an instant he took her in an bone crushing hug totally ignoring everyone present in there surounding...they broke the hug after a minute wipping her tears humaira looked towards that guy

humaira;-apka bohat bohat shukriya ashar sahab...ap ki wajah se aj ayaan ne apne mohabbat ka izhar kar liye

ashar;-shukriya kehne ki zarorat nahe madam...i was just doing my job acha ab mai chalta hun

rashid;-han han bilkul beta...i promise mai tumhare group ka act dekhne sab ko sath lekar aonga

ashar(laughs);-ji ji zaroor uncle, ap sab ki entry free aur nikah mai bulana mat bhuliya ga huma

humaira;-ji zaror

and then ashar left humaira looked at everyone except nikhat, nuzhat and rashid all were quite confused

humaira;-ap waqt a gaya hai ke mai ap sab ko sach bata dun

ayaan;-kaisa sach

humaira;-batate hun...

*********FLASHBACK************

nuzhat brought rashid inside the room and till that rajni fainted...as there was no one else in the house, so the trio took her to the hospital...she fainted for almost 2 hours and when she regained concious she was fine

humaira;-baji, phopha ji mai yahan hospital mai kya kar rhe hun? she said rubbing her forhead hardly

nikhat (shock);-Ya ALLAH humaira tumhare memory...tumhare memory wapis a gaye

rashid;-han beta tumhe sab yad hai

humaira;-memory...par baji mujhe kya hua tha?

and then the trio told her everything from the day of accident till the time she fainted

humaira;-itna sab kuch ho gaya mere sath..par mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahe hai

nuzhat;-apne zehen par ziada zor mat dejea humaira baji...kya fiada yad karne ka usse jab apke memory wapis a gaye hain

rashid;-nikhat sahe keh rahe hai beta...chalo ghar chal kar sabko good news dete hain

nikhat;-rukea...mai kuch kehna chahte hun

nuzhat;-kya baji

nikhat;-abu mai sch rahe hun ka hum kise ko kuch nahe bataye, jabse ayaan bhaijan ko malom hua hai ke humaira ko kuch yad nahe or wo apne shohar k pass wapis jana chahte hain unse bardasht nahe ho raha shayad wo humaira ke taraf apne mohabbat ko samajhne laga hain

humaira remembering his harsh words;-nahe baji ayaan humse mohabbat nahe karte wo bus humse ami ke zor dene par shaadi kar rahe hai...wo humare liye waisa kabhi mehsos nahe karte baji

nikhat;-wo kal ki bat the humaira ab bhaijan bhe apse bohat mohabbat karte hain...agar ap sab mujh par bharosa karte hain to please wohi karea jo mai kehte hun

rashid;-theek hai bolo

********FLASHBACK ENDS**********

humaira;-or phir jo bhe hua apke samne hai

gaffur;-or ye larka?

rashid;-ye mere kehna par vikram bana tha...darasal ye ek actor hai

razia;-par rashid mi...rashid interrupted her

rashid;-bhabhi apko jo pochna hai bad mai pochea ga iftar ka waqt ho raha hai

razia;-ji chalea sab taeyar hai

and they all settled on the dining table but ayaan just open his fast and left saying he have some important work to do

at 7;55 pm

asad was already sitting on his place when dilshaad and najma brought tanveer from upstairs she settle on her place...Molvi sahab started reading nikah nama but was stopped by najma who screamed when dilshaad fainting...asad stood up from his place and ran to dilshaad asad and ayaan carry dilshaad to her room and after sometime doctor came and checked her and declared that she is fine it was just because of stress, everyone walked out of the room leaving najma in the room...nikah was postponed and all the guest left but but but zoya got what she wanted

at factory

zoya and farhan were waiting for some one to come but no one camed...it was now nearly 8 and there was no sign of a single soul but as soon as clock struck 8, 2 guys reached there who came and stood infront of zoya, confirming all the information they gave her an envelope and left from there...zoya did'nt opened the envelope

farhan;-zoe what are you waiting for just open it

zoya;-no farhan huma abu ke bara mai pata chal chuka hai ab huma chalke nikah rokna hai

farhan;-theek hai par please ek bar check krlo k is mai waqai kuch hai ya nahe

zoya;-farhan agar maine isse abhe open kya to mai apne apko rok nahe paonge

farhan;-acha tum mujhe dekhao he took the envelope from zoya and checked it and when he was satisfied they left from there

in dilshaad's room

najma;-ara wah ami ap behosh hona ki kitne ache acting karte hain

dilshaad;-mujhe practice hai beta

najma;- practice ?

dilshaad;-han ek bar pehle bhe kiya tha

najma;-kab?

dilshaad;-suno and then she tell her about her act of fainting to force asya to agree for the nikah

najma;-wow ami you are a nice actor

dilshaad;-thank you thank you par najma mujhe ab tak tumne yeh nahe bataya ka mere behosh hona se kya hoga?

********FLASHBACK*******

when Molvi sahab were reading the nikah nama najma whisphere to dilshaad;-kya ap ab bhe tanveer ki jagah zoya ko apne bahi banana chahte hain kya?

dilshaad-han najma kash aesa ho jata par afsos ab ye mumkin nahe

najma;-mumkin hai ami par uske liye apko woh karna hoga jo mai kahunge

dilshaad;-kya?

najma;-ab ko abe ishi waqt behosh hona ka natak karna hoga

dilshaad;-iske bad kya nikah nahe hoga?

najma;-yakeen karain ami nahe hoga phir nikah

dilshaad;-par

najma;-par war choda ami wo karain jo mai keh rahe hun warna nikah hojaega

dilshaad;-acha and with that dilshaad fall on the floor faking unconsciousness and najma screamed

******FLASHBACK***********

ami ap bus dekhte jaye ke ab kya kya hoga...par itna vaada karte hun mai ke sab aaj sab kuch theek hojaega

dilshaad;-par...she started but was cut off by najma's message tune...najma picked her mobile and checked a smile appeared on her face

najma;-chala ami bahar chala apko sab pata chal jayega

outside

asad was sitting on the couch and was so tense tanveer came towards him and gave him a glass of water

asad;-shukriya tannu and she smiled aur i am sorry mere wajah se tu...

tanveer;-koi bat nahe jammy

just then light turned off and then T.V was on which was basically played by ayaan, asad was so confuse and a video started in which all conversation of tanveer and zoya was recorded...saying that asad was shocked would be an understatement he was not believing what he saw and heard on the other side tanveer was sweating badly, she was so shocked and was not able to think something logically as soon as the video was finished light was on and tanveer saw everyone standing in front of her with hatred filled eyes

tannu;-jammy wo...wo da... she tried to explain but was stopped by the slap from asad

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Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago
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superb!!!
finally dat Tanveer 's truth is out!!!
All are gud planners!!!
Asad slapped Tanveer!! dats what she deserves!!!
nw Zoya is gng to knw about her Abbu!!

wats gonna happen???

thanks 4 pm

update soon!!
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Awesome
What a plan & especially dilshad fakely fainted
Everything is out & tanveer got what she deserved
Thanks for PM
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just one word "superb"👏

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