AsYa SS "Be With Me" Part 1-14 link to #2 pg 1 - Page 35

Created

Last reply

Replies

702

Views

100.9k

Users

123

Likes

1.2k

Frequent Posters

jazsidhu thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
amazing teaser...
thx fr the pm n do pm me for the next part...
pwenCezz_symrun thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!! superb teaser..
continue soonish😊
veenisha thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
Nice teaser😃
Continue soon
asyaarshilover thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
salam all... as you can see i am here for chapter 10... BNHH special and full of asya update... i am late but was busy and now the next update will be in june or after it... lets see what will happen

this update is specially dedicated to riddh1206... i hope you will like it dear😃

A/N;- the dialogue in this story will be in english from now onwards😊

Chapter 10;-


next day was monday, asad and zoya were going to mumbai to attend an important meeting for there deal and after finishing some paper work they left in sometime evening... through out the drive no one utter a word, both asad and zoya are chirpy and bubbly but the difference is that zoya was no more the same because of hurdles she faced but asad was asad, he can't be silent for this long, this situation was killing him and finally he broke his silence

asad;-zoya ...

zoya;-hmmm replied she looking outside

asad;-so you know what is my favorite color?' asked him nervously and the very next moment he realized what a stupid question he had asked

zoya;-what kind of question is that? of course i knw' she said turning towards him

asad;-acha then tell me...' he replied not letting this conversation to stop

zoya;- asad!!!' she said annoyingly

asad;-what? if u know then tell me...' said him innocently

zoya;-your favorite color is red.. the color of love...fine?

asad;-ohkay... u know i also know your favorite color... ' said asad happily

zoya;-whats there to be so happy, i know that you know

asad;-u know that i know

zoya;- what the hell had happened to you, why are you behaving so oddly... huh

asad;-what have i done? i was just saying that your favorite color is golden... the .. the color of achievement and success

zoya clapped her hand forcing an smile;- well done now please drive silently' replied her sarcastically and she again turned her face towards the window

asad;-thanks ... umm zoya can we.. can we... stop somewhere for dinner? woh...woh... actually i am starving' he said nervously

zoya;-yeah why not? what is there to get nervous asad. it's time for dinner only

asad;-ara hann... hehe...' and he faked a laugh... due to which zoya looked at him confusingly but after a minute or so she again turned on the other side

'what the hell is wrong with you man, why are you getting so nervous and behaving like an idiot... your were not even nervous five years back when you were going to propose her...yeah, i was'nt nervous at all, but if i had proposed her five years back then there was no need to get nervous now also, but ALAS i never got a chance to share my feelings with her' he said to himself and his fine mode changed into a sad one not because it reminded her what zoya did to him but because he never ever got the chance to tell her that what he really felt for her and what he even fell now too...

he concentrate back on driving with the same thoughts running in his mind, after sometime he felt a zoya's hand on his shoulder, she was patting his back, basically calling him 'asad... asad' she repeated his name again and again

asad;-han... what happen zoya?...' he stammered

zoya;-what happen to me? what happen to you asad?' she asked

asad;-nothing what will happen to me?

zoya;-acha? then why you did'nt stopped when we were passing from that restaurant?' she said pointing towards a restaurant from back mirror

asad;-umm, it's not a good one... that's why

zoya;-ohh acha?? had you forgot asad its the same restaurant where we guyz came during university time's whenever we were going for outing

asad;-ohhh i forgot sorry..' replied asad looking straight and then at her, he found her looking at him with her hand across her chest with her left eyebrow raised

zoya;-care to explain?' she said totally not buying his ex-cuse

asad;-actually the matter is that i am afraid what if we did'nt got this deal, u knw na that my company is facing some loss from sometime and just because of us you will also lose this deal, it's so important u knw

answered asad of course it was'nt the true reason but it was the truth, asad's company is facing lose

zoya;-hey, nothing wrong will happen, be positive... and don't worry about us because we will get this deal at any cost, i am sure... and always remember that nothing wrong will happen when we are together

said zoya assuring him placing her hand on his and with her dimple smile

asad;-i hope so

zoya;-don't hope, be confident... everything will be fine. Inn Shaa ALLAH... waisa i guess the restaurant had left far behind so we should wait for some other to come

asad;-hmmm

and he continued driving with silence again ruling here... soon zoya got a call from yaseen

zoya;-yes yaseen

yaseen;-zoe, where are you guyz? i hope you did'nt reach mumbai?'asked yaseen tense

zoya;-nups we did'nt reach till now? but why are you asking? and why are you so tense?' asked zoya feeling something was wrong

yaseen;-actually... no zoya give phone to asad...; said yaseen

zoya;- ohkay' to yaseen 'asad yaseen wants to talk to you' she said to asad and handed mobile to him

aasd;-yes yaseen

yaseen;-asad actually there is face off b/w 2 rival parties and the situation is so worst ri8 nw? MR. singhania had also canceled the meeting. please come back right nw

asad;-oh my God.. ohkay u dn't worry, we will be back soon

yaseen;- yeah ohkay

asad;-Khuda-Hafiz

yaseen;-Allah-Hafiz

zoya;-what happen?' asked zoya and asad explain turning there car back to bhopal

after drive of half an hour the car stopped in between with aloud screech

zoya;-kya hua?

asad;-dn't knw, i guess petrol is finish

he got out and checked the car, zoya to came out and asked him

asad;-umm there is some problem, we have to find a mechanic...' said asad and then he saw that there was a small shop of tea and pakkora's ... so they both went there

asad;-ex-cuse can you tell me that where can we find a mechanic here?

man;-sir its difficult to find a mechanic at this hour of night, i guess you guyz should wait till morning

zoya;-morning? Ya ALLAH, what will we do till then asad? i am already very hungry' asked zoya panicked

man;-u can sit here till my shop is open mam and for food u can have these pakkora's and tea' suggested the man

asad;-right, zoya we should sit here and have this, lets see what will happen later

man;-munnu give tea and pakkora's to them...' that man shouted for his worker

munnu;-ji sirji

asad and zoya sat on the bench and then munnu came and gave tea and two plates of pakkora's to them and then left

sham;-munnu, just think again, that plate which u had given to madam are bhang pakkora's

munnu;-i know sham, but if i will tell sirji that pakkoras are finished, then he will eat me up alive, and let that lady eat na, who will know, its already 12 am, and these are our last customer after which that man know that what he have to do

sham;- i think u r right

soon asad and zoya ate it but were sitting there only, while the man along with his two workers closed his shop, soon it started raining and asya were totally drenched, that man came back running

man;-sahab ji, come with me, there is a small house in this way, u both can stay there

asad;-not a bad idea, thank u, lets go zoya

asad locked his car and taking his jacket they both started walking with that man, after the walk of 10 mins, that man pointed at a small but beautiful house

man;-sahab ji u can stay there, no one lives there

asad;-thank u' and they both went inside, while the man went towards his home

inside the house

zoya was feeling dizzy so she just went and lie down on a couch which was in the living room covered with a white sheet, while asad went inside the rooms searching for some clothes, soon he return with a shirt for him and a sari for zoya

asad;- zoya wear this, ur dress is wet

zoya looked at asad and started laughing;- look at yourself u are also wet

asad;-i know, what's there to laugh zoya, u go and change i will also change

zoya;-hehehehe ohkay sweeto said zoya pulling his cheeks while he looked shock at her behaviour, she left 'silly girl' he mumbled 'i heard that'came a voice of zoya from inside and he just shook his head smiling

---------------------

sometime later when asad came after changing he did'nt found zoya anywhere, he got tense and walked outside calling out her name and there she was, in that shelter, between the garden enjoying this beautifull weather asad just went and stood beside looking at front where she was staring...


zoya;-asad

asad;-hmmm

zoya;- i want to tell you something

asad;-acha say, i am listening

zoya;-asad mjhe dance karna hai or...or gana bhe gana hai

asad;-dance? but there is no music

zoya;- oh come on asad, we both know that u sing very well, please ek song gao and we will dance on it said zoya making a puppy face

asad;-zoya, are u mad, how can i and right nw

zoya;-please asad, please

asad;-acha fine

he turned and closed his eyes, all past moment they shared flashed in front on him and he started this song taking a deep breath


Dhaage Tod Laao Chandani Se Noor Ke
Ghoonghat Hi Banalo Roshini Se Noor Ke

Dhaage Tod Laao Chandani Se Noor Ke
Ghoonghat Hi Banalo Roshini Se Noor Ke

sang asad

Sharma Gai To Aagosh Mein Lo
Ho Saaaso Se Uljhi Rahi Meri Saasein

joined zoya
Bol Na Halke Halke
Hooth Se Halke Halke
Bol Na Halke

sang asad turning towards her

Bol Na Halke Halke
Hooth Se Halke Halke
Bol Na Halke

sang zoya making her way towards him

a fresh breeze passed from there, making zoya move with rhythm, asad placing his hand around her waist and pulled her to him

Aa Neend Ka Sauda Karein
Ek Khwaab De Ek Khwaab Le

sang asad staring in her eyes

Ek Khwaab To Aankhon Mein Hai
Ek Chand Ke Takiye Tale

sang zoya caressing his cheeks

Kitne Dino Se Yeh Asmaan Bhi
Soya Nahi Hai
Isko Sula De...

sang asad placing his hand over her

Bol Na Halke Halke
Hooth Se Halke Halke
Bol Na Halke

soon her hand made its way at his lips

Bol Na Halke Halke
Hooth Se Halke Halke
Bol Na Halke

allowing him to follow her hands way

Umrein Lagi Kehte Hue
Do Lafz The Ek Baat Thi

sang asad turning to the other side remembering the moment when he prepared himself to confess his feeling but never got the chance

Woh Ek Din Sau Saal Ka
Sau Saal Ki Woh Raat Thi

sang zoya also turning to the opposite side, remembering that worst night when that Rashid Ahmed Khan snatched away her happiness, she closed her eyes as her tears made its way out

Kaise Lage Jo Chupchap Dono
Palpal Mein Puri Sadiyan Beetadein

sang asad and walked to her, wiping away her tears shaking his head in no

Bol Na Halke Halke
Hooth Se Halke Halke

sang zoya taking steps towards him


Dhaage Tod Aao Chandani Se Noor Ke
Ghoonghat Hi Banalo Roshini Se Noor Ke

sang asad and stopped in his way
Sharma Gai To Aagosh Mein Lo

sang zoya and also stopped where she was, allowing him to come close to her

Ho Saaaso Se Uljhi Rahi Meri Saasein

he came close to her and they both sang together

Bol Na Halke Halke
Hooth Se Halke Halke
Bol Na Halke
Bol Na Halke Halke
Hooth Se Halke Halke
Bol Na Halke

he leaned down and came closer to her, now there lips were inches a part, she can feel his breath on her face as it was sending shiver down her spine, she felt restless and finally spoke

zoya;-asad

asad;-hmmm

zoya closed her eyes;- asad i...i i ... love...

asad smiled and looked at her to continue and she smilled back but before she continue she doze off with her head hitted on his chest... he patted her cheeks and called her name but no response, sighing he carry her in his arms and went inside the house, he made her lie on the bed and left from there, coming outside he informed yaseen about whole situation and he said that they will come there next morning to pick them up

i guess it was a long chapter...😃, and i hope that you all like it... i am sorry for any mistake coz i did'nt reread it after writing, m very very busy now a days...
do share your views😃
Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago
KaBhiKiBasanti thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
First of ol
Thank u so so so much fr d update
Oh god it was lovely n i lovd it
Oh my god that stupid colour discussion
🤣
My fav colour red n ur gold
Love n success
How stupid he is...😆
He is behaving so weird that not only zoya bt even i was looking like -what-
Awww bt lovd asad's nevousness
So cute😳
Hehe he was so engroosed that he left a hotel behind
Owww zoya remembers the place still
☺️
Aww so cute
I lovd d way she assured asad
Spccly wen she said v r together
Owww so cute😳
Thank god yaseen informed them..
Bt yaseen dont come to take th tmmrw , bttr spend ti e wid ur fren urf lady love
N let them sspend too
This rashid such a devil he is
Go to dustbin u rashid..
😡
Aww thank u so muxh chunnu... no munnu.. no .. chunnu munnu.. whosoever u r
Thank u so much..
Bcoz of u they spent a romantic dance n zoya was almost to confess bt didnt did
😭
No worries will wait
I loved d rain sequence..
Very nicely wriiten
Oww zoya u were to confess bt chunnu no munnu no chunnu munnu.. again whosever u r
Cant u add some more so she can confess..
Duffer
But i lovd this update
Very nice
Awesome
Cute
Lovely
Superb
Wonderful
Thk u so much fr d dedication
N sorru fr my long n boring cmmnt
Update soonish

Love,
Doll

sasir thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
nice.
but i want asya together soon
plz update soon
pwenCezz_symrun thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
ress
unress
aww that was an awesome chapter..
truly beautiful..amazingly penned it was..👏
Asad acting weird nd asking about Zoe's favorite color was hilarious..😆
so our very own Zoya had Bang ke pakodes..😆now its her turn to act weird..
nd that Dance sequence of Bol Na Halke Hakle was just fabulous.it reminded me of old golden QH dayz..
ahh!! we were so close to get a Kiss..but alas..
nd Zoe dozed off too before confessing completely..uff what else shall we expect from her?😆
nywayz marvelous update..do continue soon..

Edited by pwenCezz_symrun - 11 years ago
ToughStuff thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Aroo!!!
Loved it!!!
AsYa & dat bhaang night brings the beautiful memories of their bhaang effect confession!!!
Thanks 4 pm!!!
All d best 4 exams
Prizi thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Luvd their bhang effect confession
Alone111 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow.. Tht was so beautifull.. So so beautifull one... Bolna halke.. It was my one... Kitne baar dekha... Suna... Count bhi nahi karsakte... Jab bhi bore hoti hoon ya travel karti hoon.. Bus yahi bajhta hai... Loved the way u write it... Awesome tht was... Continue soon...

Related Topics

Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove

2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor *New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

1 years ago

AsYa FF ~ Broken Ties (chapter 5 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Unfolding Yesterday

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts. AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's Day contest - A bag full of love . cover : ExoticDisaster aka Shiri | writer :...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".