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Posted: 11 years ago
finally i wrote chapter 9...did'nt red it after writing and everything depend on your views...so do tell me how is it? and yeah before starting let me clear one thing that in my story only KSG is Asad and no one else...so lets start

Recap;-asya shared a little moment in store room till yaseen came to help them and then after some days there was a new entry alizah who was asad's friend since 3 years, zoya felt jealous of her and later it revealed that she is yaseen's childhood friend

Part 9;-

next 4 days zoya kept herself busy with her hectic schedule, and during this ignoring yaseen and asad was most important for her and she did it very well but unluckily it was sunday and she knew it that she have to tolerate yaseen's presence for a very long time during the whole day...

they were having there breakfast silently, zoya knew that yaseen was glancing her again and again but she did not bothered to look at him...door bell rang and one of the servant went to open the door...zoya and yaseen were sitting on the couch, zoya reading news-paper and yaseen enjoying t.v with his milky coffee when asad and alizah walked in with whole gang...zoya was surprised

zoya;-oh my God, tum sab bina bataye...kaisa ana hua? she said hugging najma and then nikhat and totally ignoring asad, najma was giving her a confused look

nikhat;-wo hum sab movie dekhne ja rhe the to socha tumhe bhe bula llain au...and najma interrupted her

najma;-aur yeh kai hum bina inform kiya nahe aye yaseen knew that we are coming to pick you guyz

yaseen was trying to speak but was hesitating seeing zoya glaring at him like a hungry lioness;-umm, yeah mai...mai tumhe kabse...ya..yahe batana cha raha tha

zoya forcing a smile;-oh acha lakin tum nahe bata pae to isiliye hum nahe ja rahe

najma/nikhat(shouting);-Q

imran placing his hand on his ears;-are chilao to nahe

zoya;-wo darasal kuch days mai yaseen ki sister sara yahan a rhe hai to mjhe uske liye shopping karne the or mai pura week busy hote hun to mainne socha sunday ko he sare shopping karlun but you guyz go and enjoy

alizah totally excitingly;-oh wow sara yahan ane wali hai, zoya plz mai bhe tumhare sath shopping par chalun mjhe bhe uske liye kuch lena hai...plz plz

zoya;-mjhe to koi problem nahe hai par tum sab movie k lliye ja rehe the na?

asad;-that's not a big problem, hum 12 to 3 ka nahe balka 3 to 6 ka show dekh lenge so now we have a lot of time for shopping it's just 11;30

alizah;- thankyou so much asad
alizah hugged asad happily

asad;-any thing for u yr... asad said hugging her back and eyeing zoya who was looking sad seeing them together and very close

najma;-yeah it's fine too, ise bahana thodi shopping bhe hojaege, ab chalo huma late ho raha hai

zoya;-acha let me go and change...she ran in her room and it took 15 mins for zoya to come back after getting ready while yaseen just took 5 mins in getting change...she was wearing a red colour top and a short skirt looking beautiful as always

ayaan;-acha ab lets go

at shopping

they all were there at almost 12;10 and as soon as they enter inside everyone get engrossed in there shopping, najma and ayaan were having a discussion for buying some gift for there parents, nikhat and imraan as usual lost in there romance, asad and alizah were totally busy with there cuchi cu moments while zoya was concentrating them from the corner of her eyes showing others tht she is busy in shopping and yaseen was busy in getting zoya's attention as usual...

asad understand what he was doing and what was it's reaction on zoya, he can understand her feeling when she saw him with alizah because according to him she loves him a lot and she feels in the same way what he feels when he saw her with yaseen, overall he was doing it intentionally and some one was also aware of all his plan...guess who "alizah"...alizah who was doing very well according to the plan to bring zoya back to asad was also noticing yaseen fell face while zoya was ignoring him and she felt guilty for doing this to his childhood friend even she shared the same with asad

FLASHBACK

asad and alizah bit good bye to zoya and yaseen after exiting from the restaurant and were walking towards there car when asad stopped and turned towards alizah

thankyou so much alizah for helping me...asad said hugging her and she hugged him back, she was guilty and asad sensed it

asad;-hey,,,what happen you look sad?

alizah;-asad wo...wo

asad;-ye wo wo kya kar rhe ho kuch bolo bhe uske agaa...

alizah;-when you ask me to help for bringing ur love back to you, i agreed bcz tum mere bht ache dost but yaseen mera bachpan ka dost hai mjhe ye sab karna acha nahe lag raha...uske baton se mjhe ye realize hua k wo zoya ko bht pasand karta hai

asad;-par zoya nahe karte, kya tum apne bachpan k dost ko ek aesa rishta mai judte hue dekhna chahte ho jahan usse wo mohabbat na mila jo wo deserve karta hai.??

alizah;-i know he deserve someone who loves him in the same way but...

asad;-tum mere bat samajh nahe rhe ho, mai zoya ko ye ehsas dilana chahte hun that she loves me only, or agar aesa nahe kya na maina to mere sath zoya aur yaseen ki life bhe spoil hojaege

alizah;-par tum itne yakeen se kaisa keh sakte ho that she loves you

asad;-because wo karte hai, wo mjhse utne hi mohabbat karte hai jitne mai usse karta ho aur bht jald ye bat humara samne ajaege to please tab tak mera sath dedo, or agar usne ye khd mjhse kaha k wo yaseen se mohabbat karte hai to i promise mai hamesha k lye uske life se dor chala jaonge

flashback ends

asad noticed where alizah was lost so he placed his hand on her shoulder and with a sweet smile on his face and she smiled back...soon after finishing there shopping they left for the movie...after reaching asad and yaseen bought tickets and came to the rest of the group

asad;-well guyz, we all can't sit together

imran;-kyun?

yaseen;-huma alag alag seats mile, 4 front mai and 4 in the back

nikhat;-ohh...mai backside par bethunge aur najma bhe...haina najma

najma;-yeah yeah waisa bhe mujhe mere job bhe karne hai

zoya;-job?

najma;-yeah razia aunty told me to be with nikhat so wo aur imran akele na ho you know kuch time inke shaadi hai or inhe akela chodna khatre se khali nahe
said najma hitting nikhat playfully and nikhat turned totally red

ayaan;-stop this blushing session nikhat...ohkay i am your partner in this so it's decided that mai, imran, najma aur nikhat back side par bethen ge so asad tum zoya, alizah or yaseen front par beth jao

yaseen;-ohkay no problem

asad;-yeah, it's fine

alizah;-ab jaldi chalo warna movie start hojaege

after buying popcorns they all went inside and settled on the decided seats...in front yaseen sat first while zoya after him and asad and alizah after zoya...inshort asad and zoya were sitting together

movie start and everyone concentrate on the movie accept two peoples first zoya who was busy noticing asad and alizah and how asad was behaiving as if zoya did'nt exist and asad was busy working on his plan...when the movie was going to finish there was no stop on zoya's emotions, it seems like if she did'nt leave from there that instant she may start crying that moment, so giving a very strong ex-cuse of going to wash-room she left from there

as soon as she came out from the theatre she ran towards the ladies washroom and sat on the floor with her head resting on the door and crying continuously, she was'nt used to asad ignorance, it's true that they never in past 5 years but it was'nt like they don't want to meet...

Jaane Tu Mera Kya Hai
Jaane Tu Mera Kya Tha
Tu Hi Mera Har Pal
Tu Hi Har Lamha Tha

she remembered there past, there friendship there concern for eachother

Jaane Kaisi Kasish Hai
Jaane Kaisi Khalish Hai
Kyun Yeh Saans Thami Hai
Ankhon Mein Kyun Nami Hai

the way they used to show there feelings, trying to understand the other one that what they felt for each other

Hai Dosti Humko Yakin Tha
Dost Aur Kuch Bhi Nahi Tha
Hai Yeh Kaisa Dard Naya Sa
Kyun Dil Lagta Tuta Tuta Sa

and then she hide her face with her hand and her eyes closed and she remembered all the times alizah close to asad, she cried more

Hai Jaana Dil Jaana
Kaise Mene Na Jana
Ke Pyaar Yehi Hai
Yeh Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na

Jaana Dil Jaana
Kaise Tune Na Jana
Ke Pyaar Yehi Hai
Haaan Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na


Jaane Tu Mera Kya Hai
Jaane Tu Mera Kya Tha
Tu Hi Mera Har Pal
Tu Hi Har Lamha Tha

and then she was out of her thoughts and painful memories with the help of her mobile ring tune, she looked at it, it was a call from yaseen, wiping the tears from her face and controling her shaky voice she answered his call

zoya;-han yaseen kaho

yaseen;-where are you zoe, you movie finish hone wali hai in 2-3 mins or tum ab tak nahe aye?

zoya;-actually yaseen mai 5 min mai tum sabko theatre k bahar millte hun, ek important phone call karne hai mujhe

yaseen;-zoya are you fine? he asked understand something fishy

zoya;-han mai theek hun...will meet you in 5 mins

yaseen;-ohkay and he hunged up

zoya looked at the mirror and washed her face, trying to hide all the stains of her face

zoya;-why am i behaiving like this? was'nt i always wanted this that asad move on... par kya mai wo akele the jo asad se mohabbat karte the kya usne kabhi nahe ki mujhse mohabbat more tears form in her eyes...no no no i can't cry like this, it was my decision that hum kabhi ek na hun, usse kabhi ya na malom ho ke mai usse mohabbat karte the...mai ab kya karunge, par mai is tarah ro nahe sakte...i need to be strong i need to show asad that i am happy for him that he had choosen alizah, yeah it's right mujhe aesa hi karna chahie,yahe sahe hai, ab mai nahe ronge, after all mai bhe apne life mai aga barh chuke hun.

and finally with full determination she walked out of the washroom and met whole gang, no one understood about zoya's situation accept who did'nt took a second to realize that she was crying and it too brought tears in his eyes which he hide rapidly ab to atleast accept karlo zoya that you love me

so did you guyz found it good because i think i did'nt wrote what i actually wanted to...so do leave your precious views and yeah sorry for any mistake

P.S;-pm's will be send later

😊
Shubh007 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE...👏👏
Edited by Shubh007 - 11 years ago
sasir thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice
feeling bad for asad n zoya.
dont separate them
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...
Dont seperate ny poor asad n zoya
now what is zoya going to do...
It was really a awesome update
continue soon n pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Both knew that they love each other
& both ignore it.
Plz reunite Asya soon
Don't separate them
Do PM me when u update next part
Continue soon
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely
hope asya became one soon
Edited by 11sinal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update...feel very bad and sad for zoya as she is trying to be stronger but situation is making weak to her.😭😭
Hope asad zoya comes together soon.😳
I was waiting for your updates for a long time keep updating dear.😃
Plz update next one soon too...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsum yaar

Asad making Zoya jealous

plz reunite Asya
dnt separate dem



pair up Aliza & Yaseen

plz


thanks 4 pm

update soon

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