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Posted: 11 years ago

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finally i wrote chapter 9...did'nt red it after writing and everything depend on your views...so do tell me how is it? and yeah before starting let me clear one thing that in my story only KSG is Asad and no one else...so lets start

Recap;-asya shared a little moment in store room till yaseen came to help them and then after some days there was a new entry alizah who was asad's friend since 3 years, zoya felt jealous of her and later it revealed that she is yaseen's childhood friend

Part 9;-

next 4 days zoya kept herself busy with her hectic schedule, and during this ignoring yaseen and asad was most important for her and she did it very well but unluckily it was sunday and she knew it that she have to tolerate yaseen's presence for a very long time during the whole day...

they were having there breakfast silently, zoya knew that yaseen was glancing her again and again but she did not bothered to look at him...door bell rang and one of the servant went to open the door...zoya and yaseen were sitting on the couch, zoya reading news-paper and yaseen enjoying t.v with his milky coffee when asad and alizah walked in with whole gang...zoya was surprised

zoya;-oh my God, tum sab bina bataye...kaisa ana hua? she said hugging najma and then nikhat and totally ignoring asad, najma was giving her a confused look

nikhat;-wo hum sab movie dekhne ja rhe the to socha tumhe bhe bula llain au...and najma interrupted her

najma;-aur yeh kai hum bina inform kiya nahe aye yaseen knew that we are coming to pick you guyz

yaseen was trying to speak but was hesitating seeing zoya glaring at him like a hungry lioness;-umm, yeah mai...mai tumhe kabse...ya..yahe batana cha raha tha

zoya forcing a smile;-oh acha lakin tum nahe bata pae to isiliye hum nahe ja rahe

najma/nikhat(shouting);-Q

imran placing his hand on his ears;-are chilao to nahe

zoya;-wo darasal kuch days mai yaseen ki sister sara yahan a rhe hai to mjhe uske liye shopping karne the or mai pura week busy hote hun to mainne socha sunday ko he sare shopping karlun but you guyz go and enjoy

alizah totally excitingly;-oh wow sara yahan ane wali hai, zoya plz mai bhe tumhare sath shopping par chalun mjhe bhe uske liye kuch lena hai...plz plz

zoya;-mjhe to koi problem nahe hai par tum sab movie k lliye ja rehe the na?

asad;-that's not a big problem, hum 12 to 3 ka nahe balka 3 to 6 ka show dekh lenge so now we have a lot of time for shopping it's just 11;30

alizah;- thankyou so much asad

alizah hugged asad happily

asad;-any thing for u yr... asad said hugging her back and eyeing zoya who was looking sad seeing them together and very close

najma;-yeah it's fine too, ise bahana thodi shopping bhe hojaege, ab chalo huma late ho raha hai

zoya;-acha let me go and change...she ran in her room and it took 15 mins for zoya to come back after getting ready while yaseen just took 5 mins in getting change...she was wearing a red colour top and a short skirt looking beautiful as always

ayaan;-acha ab lets go

at shopping

they all were there at almost 12;10 and as soon as they enter inside everyone get engrossed in there shopping, najma and ayaan were having a discussion for buying some gift for there parents, nikhat and imraan as usual lost in there romance, asad and alizah were totally busy with there cuchi cu moments while zoya was concentrating them from the corner of her eyes showing others tht she is busy in shopping and yaseen was busy in getting zoya's attention as usual...

asad understand what he was doing and what was it's reaction on zoya, he can understand her feeling when she saw him with alizah because according to him she loves him a lot and she feels in the same way what he feels when he saw her with yaseen, overall he was doing it intentionally and some one was also aware of all his plan...guess who "alizah"...alizah who was doing very well according to the plan to bring zoya back to asad was also noticing yaseen fell face while zoya was ignoring him and she felt guilty for doing this to his childhood friend even she shared the same with asad

FLASHBACK

asad and alizah bit good bye to zoya and yaseen after exiting from the restaurant and were walking towards there car when asad stopped and turned towards alizah

thankyou so much alizah for helping me...asad said hugging her and she hugged him back, she was guilty and asad sensed it

asad;-hey,,,what happen you look sad?

alizah;-asad wo...wo

asad;-ye wo wo kya kar rhe ho kuch bolo bhe uske agaa...

alizah;-when you ask me to help for bringing ur love back to you, i agreed bcz tum mere bht ache dost but yaseen mera bachpan ka dost hai mjhe ye sab karna acha nahe lag raha...uske baton se mjhe ye realize hua k wo zoya ko bht pasand karta hai

asad;-par zoya nahe karte, kya tum apne bachpan k dost ko ek aesa rishta mai judte hue dekhna chahte ho jahan usse wo mohabbat na mila jo wo deserve karta hai.??

alizah;-i know he deserve someone who loves him in the same way but...

asad;-tum mere bat samajh nahe rhe ho, mai zoya ko ye ehsas dilana chahte hun that she loves me only, or agar aesa nahe kya na maina to mere sath zoya aur yaseen ki life bhe spoil hojaege

alizah;-par tum itne yakeen se kaisa keh sakte ho that she loves you

asad;-because wo karte hai, wo mjhse utne hi mohabbat karte hai jitne mai usse karta ho aur bht jald ye bat humara samne ajaege to please tab tak mera sath dedo, or agar usne ye khd mjhse kaha k wo yaseen se mohabbat karte hai to i promise mai hamesha k lye uske life se dor chala jaonge

flashback ends

asad noticed where alizah was lost so he placed his hand on her shoulder and with a sweet smile on his face and she smiled back...soon after finishing there shopping they left for the movie...after reaching asad and yaseen bought tickets and came to the rest of the group

asad;-well guyz, we all can't sit together

imran;-kyun?

yaseen;-huma alag alag seats mile, 4 front mai and 4 in the back

nikhat;-ohh...mai backside par bethunge aur najma bhe...haina najma

najma;-yeah yeah waisa bhe mujhe mere job bhe karne hai

zoya;-job?

najma;-yeah razia aunty told me to be with nikhat so wo aur imran akele na ho you know kuch time inke shaadi hai or inhe akela chodna khatre se khali nahe

said najma hitting nikhat playfully and nikhat turned totally red

ayaan;-stop this blushing session nikhat...ohkay i am your partner in this so it's decided that mai, imran, najma aur nikhat back side par bethen ge so asad tum zoya, alizah or yaseen front par beth jao

yaseen;-ohkay no problem

asad;-yeah, it's fine

alizah;-ab jaldi chalo warna movie start hojaege

after buying popcorns they all went inside and settled on the decided seats...in front yaseen sat first while zoya after him and asad and alizah after zoya...inshort asad and zoya were sitting together

movie start and everyone concentrate on the movie accept two peoples first zoya who was busy noticing asad and alizah and how asad was behaiving as if zoya did'nt exist and asad was busy working on his plan...when the movie was going to finish there was no stop on zoya's emotions, it seems like if she did'nt leave from there that instant she may start crying that moment, so giving a very strong ex-cuse of going to wash-room she left from there

as soon as she came out from the theatre she ran towards the ladies washroom and sat on the floor with her head resting on the door and crying continuously, she was'nt used to asad ignorance, it's true that they never in past 5 years but it was'nt like they don't want to meet...

Jaane Tu Mera Kya Hai

Jaane Tu Mera Kya Tha

Tu Hi Mera Har Pal

Tu Hi Har Lamha Tha

she remembered there past, there friendship there concern for eachother

Jaane Kaisi Kasish Hai

Jaane Kaisi Khalish Hai

Kyun Yeh Saans Thami Hai

Ankhon Mein Kyun Nami Hai

the way they used to show there feelings, trying to understand the other one that what they felt for each other

Hai Dosti Humko Yakin Tha

Dost Aur Kuch Bhi Nahi Tha

Hai Yeh Kaisa Dard Naya Sa

Kyun Dil Lagta Tuta Tuta Sa

and then she hide her face with her hand and her eyes closed and she remembered all the times alizah close to asad, she cried more

Hai Jaana Dil Jaana

Kaise Mene Na Jana

Ke Pyaar Yehi Hai

Yeh Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na

Jaana Dil Jaana

Kaise Tune Na Jana

Ke Pyaar Yehi Hai

Haaan Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na

Jaane Tu Mera Kya Hai

Jaane Tu Mera Kya Tha

Tu Hi Mera Har Pal

Tu Hi Har Lamha Tha

and then she was out of her thoughts and painful memories with the help of her mobile ring tune, she looked at it, it was a call from yaseen, wiping the tears from her face and controling her shaky voice she answered his call

zoya;-han yaseen kaho

yaseen;-where are you zoe, you movie finish hone wali hai in 2-3 mins or tum ab tak nahe aye?

zoya;-actually yaseen mai 5 min mai tum sabko theatre k bahar millte hun, ek important phone call karne hai mujhe

yaseen;-zoya are you fine? he asked understand something fishy

zoya;-han mai theek hun...will meet you in 5 mins

yaseen;-ohkay and he hunged up

zoya looked at the mirror and washed her face, trying to hide all the stains of her face

zoya;-why am i behaiving like this? was'nt i always wanted this that asad move on... par kya mai wo akele the jo asad se mohabbat karte the kya usne kabhi nahe ki mujhse mohabbat more tears form in her eyes...no no no i can't cry like this, it was my decision that hum kabhi ek na hun, usse kabhi ya na malom ho ke mai usse mohabbat karte the...mai ab kya karunge, par mai is tarah ro nahe sakte...i need to be strong i need to show asad that i am happy for him that he had choosen alizah, yeah it's right mujhe aesa hi karna chahie,yahe sahe hai, ab mai nahe ronge, after all mai bhe apne life mai aga barh chuke hun.

and finally with full determination she walked out of the washroom and met whole gang, no one understood about zoya's situation accept who did'nt took a second to realize that she was crying and it too brought tears in his eyes which he hide rapidly ab to atleast accept karlo zoya that you love me

so did you guyz found it good because i think i did'nt wrote what i actually wanted to...so do leave your precious views and yeah sorry for any mistake

P.S;-pm's will be send later

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Part 4:-

"i hope mai use bata dun k us din hua kiya tha" she thought

~flashback~

she came home with her trophy but was freezed when she saw her father lying on the floor lifelessly, without wasting a second she took him to the hospital it was a mild heart attack and what she needed was 3 lakh for opearation she can't arrange it by her own so she decided to call some of her friend and the first name click in her mind was none other than asad she took out her mobile and start dialing his no but she stoped in middle when someone came and stand infront of her her he took some money from his pocket and gave it to her

"ye lo beta ja k doctor ko dedo"

she took the money without thinnking a while and ran towards the doctor gave him money and now the opearation is started she came back to him

zoya:-thankyou so much rashid uncle ap agar waqt par na ata to najana kiya hojata

she said innocently without knwing his intension

rashid:-ara ye to maine apna liye kiya hai

he said giving a smile

zoya:-apne liye

she asked confusingly

rashid:-mjhe nhe laga tha k tum itne bholi hoge, plz ye natak mere samne mat karna jo larki itne bara buisness man k bete ko phasa sakte hai uske chehre par ye masomat, nahe nahe" he said "uncle ap ye sab kiya kaha ja raha hai" she was so serious and hurt "kyun kia galat kaha maine kiya ye sach nahe k asad tumse mohabbat karta hai? mai janta hun sirf mai nhe sab janta hai han wo karta hai or tum...tum jaisa do core ki larki to sirf ameer larko ko phasati hain, tumhe sirf uska paisa chahie

this time he was loud very much this make zoya hurt she can't bear these words for her, she is not like that

zoya:-uncle plz, mai aese larki nhe ap mjh par aesa ilzam mat lagaye

she said crying

rashid:-tumhara ye bholapan ka jadu asad k samna chalta hoga mere samna nahe

he was rude,very rude

zoya(confident):-agar ap mjhe itni hi ghatya larki samajhte hain to phir ye paisa apne kyun diya mjhe?

rashid:-kyun k mai tumse wo karwa saku jo mai chahta hun

zoya:-kiya matlab hai apka?

rashid:-matlab saaf hai in paison k badla tumhe mere ek baat manni hoge

zoya:-kaise baat?

rashid:-chale jao...hamesha hamesha k liye asad ko chor kar, kabhi mor kar mat dekhna, dekhlo agar tumne aesa na kiya to tmhare abu hamesha mere karzdar rahoge or agar tumne asad ko kabhi kuch bataya to tum sabit kardoge k jo mai tumhare bare mai sochta tha sab sach tha

he said and left without waiting for her answere and zoya she was still standing there, she was numb and broken

zoya(to herself):-chale jao, asad ko chor kar, ye to bata kar jata ap k kaisa, kaisa koi apne zindagi ko chor sakta hai, bus kaha or chala gaye...YA ALLAH mai ye kaisa karunge"

she sat on her knees and start crying, that day she cried alot, she stayed in hospital till her father get discharge and then left for delhi without visiting at her home just for once bcz she knows someone was waiting for her. in delhi she got a job in her uncle's office "ilyas uncle" he was rich, zoya and her father start living at there home like there family and now she is in bhopal handling one of her uncle's company"

~flashback ends~

she was back to reality by a call it was ilyas uncle call

zoya:-salam-o-alikum uncle

uncle:-walaik-um-asalam zoya...kya hal hain? kaisa chal raha hai kaam?

zoya:-sab theek hai uncle or waisa bhe buisness k jis kam mai hote hun woha gadbad ka kam(she said in a bossy tune)

uncle:-ye to hum sab ache tarah se jante hai beta

zoya:-par apne call Q ki the wo bhi is wqt?

uncle:-ara wo beta yaseen ana wala hai

zoya(shock):-yaseen? kab? itni jaldi kyun?

uncle:-ara heran kyun ho rhe ho, tumhe to khush hona chahie, wo kal ya parso U.S se ayege or direct tumhare pass hi ajayega

theek hai?

zoya:-ji ji uncle, u don't worry i will manage

unclel:-like always acha ab mai rakhta hun

zoya:-ji khuda hafiz

uncle:-ALLAH HAFIZ

zoya(to herself):-yaseen yahan bhopal ayega, YA ALLAH mere dosto ko pata chal gaya k wo kn hai to???

next morning, dilshaad construction

"asad fast, meeting start hona mai ziada time nhe, ilyas sahab ne bataya unki bhanji time ki bht paband hai" rashid entered in his cabin in an angry mode

asad:-mai ready hn abu bx kuch files sign kr rha tha ab chala

they left and reached at there desired place in 20 minutes, they enter in office and directly ask from the receptionist about meeting room she told them and they left, they reach at the meeting room but before they enter varun came out, he saw them and understood

varun:-sir kya ap dilshaad company se aye hain

asad:-ji

varun:-sir ap 5 minute late hain

asad:-we are sorry for this, can we go in?

varun:-ya u can but mam should be angry

asad:-lets see.

they enter inside, she was siting on the opposite side but a voice came "5 minute late"

asad:-sorry mam.

mam:-apki sorry se mere jo itne important 5 minute waste hue hai wo mjhe wapis mil sakte hai?

asad(mumbled):-akdu

mam:-kuch kaha

rashid:-nahe kuch nahe, hum meeting start karain?

mam:-ya sure waise bhe mere pass waste krne k liye or time nhe.

she gave a little force to her chair and turn, it make everyone shock

asad/rashid:-zoya

zoya:-asad or uske abu

they looked eachother for a long time rashid and zoya were more shocked

rashid(to himself):-zoya farouqui jo apne abu k ilaj k 3 lakh rupe nahe bhar sakte the aj itne bari company chala rhe hai.

zoya(to herself):-rashid ahmed khan 3 lakh rupe mere mun par mar kar gaye the aj 3 crore ki deal k liye mere samne bethe hai, kismat bhe cheez hai

~finish~

so part 4 finish here

finally i update actually the reason is i was ill and m suffering from urine infection so i gave u a very late update and those who r waiting for my other 7 update plz wait a little more i'll update them too and ya i gave u the reason that y she left and how she became rich now start thinking that who is this yaseen till nxt update😆

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

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salam all😳 hope you guyz are fine... so you can see that i am here with part 11.. hope you will enjoy...

banner credit goes to my nino (Niya_789) thanks 🤗

Part 11

Next morning yaseen and aliza reached at the highway and with the help of that shop keper they reached at the place where asya were staying... Yaseen jumped in the house by the main gate and then open it for aliza.. They went in and search for asya, asad was sleeping on the couch in living room while zoya was in bedroom... Aliza wake up asad and yaseen went to bring some breakfast for them..

'here, your clothes go and change your dress while i will wake up zoya' said aliza giving asad his clothes as he had informed yaseen about rain yesterday night and also remind him to bring there clothes... 'Ya thanks...'.said asad grabbing his clothes ... He went in washroom to take a shower and alizah made her way in the bedroom 'zoya...zoya' aliza called her and when she didn't respond she shook her a little 'uhhh... Kon??' zoya wake up with a jerk relax, 'it's me aliza' 'oh.. What are u doing here...i mean we were in Mumbai.. No no actually me and asad were going to mumbai..but this place... Why i m here?? And what are you doing here aliza...' asked zoya taking her head in her hands... 'zoya, zoya... U don't remember haan?? Yesterday yaseen informed you guyz about the face off in mumbai and also that the meeting had been cancelled ...' 'oh haan.. We then reached here... Right..?' 'han but u still look a bit confuse or tense... Is everything fine with you..' 'no i am fine, just a little headache' 'oh.. Wait yaseen is coming soon... He had went to bring something for breakfast.. I will call him and ask him to bring medicine for u if there is any shop or something ' said aliza taking out her cell from pocket.. 'oh no... No need of medicine i am fine.. And it's highway so no chance ...' 'leave it on him ywr, i will come back after calling him.. And yes when asad come out ask him about your clothes and change your dress' 'ohkay' she smiled and left, zoya sat there for a while after which asad came inside zoya 'take this shopper, your dress is in it.. Change it' said asad handling her the shopper 'yeah thanks... I will be right back' saying so She left

After shower zoya changed into her comfortable shalwar suit and was so relax wearing it... That saari was quite uncomfortable...urgh... She made her way outside and witnessed the trio having tea under the shelter, as she made her way towards them, some blurr memories of yesterday night came in front of her eyes and for a moment she was shocked... She can't recognize the faces of those two peoples but she felt something strange and at the same time became confused as why she saw those images.. 'zoe, came here... Eat something... U must be hungry ' she was out of her thoughts when yaseen called her.. Giving him a smile she went to them ans seated between asad and yaseen... They ate what yaseen bought for them... 'you know aliza was so tense for you guyz that she didn't wanted to have her breakfast... So i thought we will eat something here only and i too skipped my breakfast...' 'oh aliza, u think so much... U know na that your asad can take care of everything so why were u so much tense??' asked asad and in result she placed her hand on asad's which didn't went unnoticed be zoya... She felt bad but hide it quickly 'i know it asad but still u are my best friend and i cant take any risk when it comes to u' said aliza emotionally and asad smiled.. They both stared each other 'ehem ehem come out of your dream land you two. Ohkay asad listen, i had called mechanic to repair your car and he must had finish it till now so we should leave...?' 'yeah sure lets go then.' 'yaseen u and zoya go in your car and i will come with asad in his car... Fine na ?' 'umm yeah sure, not a problem lets leave...' they all made there way and left the house

While leaving asad from the driving looked at zoya who was sitting in the other car... They kept staring at each other until yaseen started his car and left the place soon asad too left following them

Do Pal Ruka Khwabon Ka Karvan
Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahan Hum Kahaan
Do Pal Ki Thi Yeh Dilon Ki Daastaan
Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan
Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan

Tum The Ke Thi Koi Ujli Kiran
Tum The Yaa Koi Kali Muskayi Thi
Tum The Yaa Sapnon Kaa Thaa Saavan
Tum The Ke Khushiyon Ki Ghataa Chaayehe Thi
Tum The Ke Thaa Koi Phool Khilaa
Tum The Yaa Milaa Thaa Mujhe Nayaa Jahaan

during this long drive zoya kept trying to remember yesterday night but all in vain and just one scene replayed in her mind which was aliza's hand on asad's and there understanding, even when zoya had decide to stay away from asad she can't stand firm on her deicsion...

Do Pal Rukaa Khwabon Kaa Kaarvaan
Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan

Do Pal Ki Thi Yeh Dilon Ki Daastaan
Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan
Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan

Tum The Yaa Khushboo Hawaon Mein Thi
Tum The Yaa Rang Saari Dishaaon Mein The
Tum The Yaa Roshni Raahon Mein Thi
Tum The Yaa Geet Goonje Fizaaon Mein The
Tum The Mile Yaa Mili Thi Manzilein
Tum The Ke Thaa Jaadoo Bharaa Koi Samaa

asad knew that zoya loves him but still he felt some strange fear that may be next time it would be too late to confess, looks like zoya is going forever... through out driving he tried to brush away those thoughts

Do Pal Rukaa Khwabon Kaa Kaarvaan
Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan

Do Pal Ki Thi Yeh Dilon Ki Daastaan
Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan
Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan
Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan

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Next day

Asad was quite restless after returning from highway... What happened between them that night was not less than the confirmation that zoya loves him and as she realized that she loves him even when she wasn't in her senses at all he but still he want all this confusion to over now... He have to do something, it's going to be his last chance... He have to do something that too very soon... He with all his determination left his home for zoya's office but when he reached there he came to know that she didn't came to office today so he deceded to go at her home...

Zoya's home

Asad rang the bell first time only and the door was opened by a girl in her early twenties 'yes?' 'umm, is zoya at home??' 'yes she is but who are you??' 'i am asad her friend' 'oh please come in' said her and gave him place to enter and closing the door she made her way inside... Asad frowned looking at the house decorated, he thought of asking that girl but before he asked she went to call 'zoya...bhabhi please come out your friend asad is here ' 'tell him i will be there' she came to asad 'she is coming' he nodded 'i will send juicec for u '
After a while zoya came to him 'asad you here?? You should be in office right now?' 'yeah but i want to talk to u... It's quite important' ' han tell me...' she said sitting beside him 'i will ask u but tell me what's going on here i mean this decoration, that girl?' 'oh she... She is sara yaeeen's sister ' 'oh yes i remember u and aliza went for shopping for her only ' 'yes but she didn't came alone in fact our whole family is here... And about this decoration it's.. It's actually...' zoya tried to tell him but nothing was coming out.. Asad kept staring her eager to know the reason.. Zoya was looking down playping with her dupatta 'it's actually..i mean the decorations are for...' 'why are you taking so much time?? Just tell me' 'it's for mine and yaseen's nikah...' blurted out her as she closed her eyes tightly not wanting to see his reactions... And at the same time asad felt as his world has stopped.. It was better to die instead of hearing it that too from zoya and only when he wanted to clear there misunderstadings 'ni..ni..nikah..ah... Wh..when???' 'upcoming friday u mean after 2 days??' he asked scared as if someone had aksed him to give up on his life and she nodded holding back her tears from falling seeing him like this 'but why so soon??' 'yaseen have to leave on the upcoming Monday and uncle wants me to accompany him as his wife this time' asad sat numb for a while and then stood up 'i sho...should go now' 'wait.. U want to talk to me about something important?' 'yes but i guess that isn't important anymore' 'ohkay ' 'you..you wont come to office from now on.. right?? ' 'no actually i will come tomorrow for last time and we will discuss everything about the deal.. ' 'ohkay Allah-Hafiz' he said and turned already leaving while she looked at his retreating figure with teary eyes extending her hand to stop him but knew that its waste so took it back 'i know that am hurting you asad but it's important... Afterall as soon as i will be out from your life you will be able to give my place to aliza with all your heart... I am sorry' *sob*

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He drived continues unknown to the routes he was taking but finally he reached at his destination, he rang bell again and again when she finally opened the door and was totally shocked to find him like this, his hair were a mess, his eyes bloodshot and his condition throughout was worst 'Asad!! What happen to you... Yeh kya halat bana rakhe hai apne tumne???' he just entered inside and sat on the couch ignoring her questions 'answer me damn it' she yelled sitting beside him 'i quit aliza... I quit' replied him closing his eyes and a lone tear escaped from his eyes

so how was it?? good or bad? share your views , i will be waiting for your response and about the song, i guess there was no need of it but still i felt like adding it so...😳 you can't throw jutta's for this😆

and yes Ramadan Mubarak to all of you... stay blessed and remember me in your prayers 🤗

Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago

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salam all... as you can see i am here for chapter 10... BNHH special and full of asya update... i am late but was busy and now the next update will be in june or after it... lets see what will happen

this update is specially dedicated to riddh1206... i hope you will like it dear😃

A/N;- the dialogue in this story will be in english from now onwards😊

Chapter 10;-

next day was monday, asad and zoya were going to mumbai to attend an important meeting for there deal and after finishing some paper work they left in sometime evening... through out the drive no one utter a word, both asad and zoya are chirpy and bubbly but the difference is that zoya was no more the same because of hurdles she faced but asad was asad, he can't be silent for this long, this situation was killing him and finally he broke his silence

asad;-zoya ...

zoya;-hmmm replied she looking outside

asad;-so you know what is my favorite color?' asked him nervously and the very next moment he realized what a stupid question he had asked

zoya;-what kind of question is that? of course i knw' she said turning towards him

asad;-acha then tell me...' he replied not letting this conversation to stop

zoya;- asad!!!' she said annoyingly

asad;-what? if u know then tell me...' said him innocently

zoya;-your favorite color is red.. the color of love...fine?

asad;-ohkay... u know i also know your favorite color... ' said asad happily

zoya;-whats there to be so happy, i know that you know

asad;-u know that i know

zoya;- what the hell had happened to you, why are you behaving so oddly... huh

asad;-what have i done? i was just saying that your favorite color is golden... the .. the color of achievement and success

zoya clapped her hand forcing an smile;- well done now please drive silently' replied her sarcastically and she again turned her face towards the window

asad;-thanks ... umm zoya can we.. can we... stop somewhere for dinner? woh...woh... actually i am starving' he said nervously

zoya;-yeah why not? what is there to get nervous asad. it's time for dinner only

asad;-ara hann... hehe...' and he faked a laugh... due to which zoya looked at him confusingly but after a minute or so she again turned on the other side

'what the hell is wrong with you man, why are you getting so nervous and behaving like an idiot... your were not even nervous five years back when you were going to propose her...yeah, i was'nt nervous at all, but if i had proposed her five years back then there was no need to get nervous now also, but ALAS i never got a chance to share my feelings with her' he said to himself and his fine mode changed into a sad one not because it reminded her what zoya did to him but because he never ever got the chance to tell her that what he really felt for her and what he even fell now too...

he concentrate back on driving with the same thoughts running in his mind, after sometime he felt a zoya's hand on his shoulder, she was patting his back, basically calling him 'asad... asad' she repeated his name again and again

asad;-han... what happen zoya?...' he stammered

zoya;-what happen to me? what happen to you asad?' she asked

asad;-nothing what will happen to me?

zoya;-acha? then why you did'nt stopped when we were passing from that restaurant?' she said pointing towards a restaurant from back mirror

asad;-umm, it's not a good one... that's why

zoya;-ohh acha?? had you forgot asad its the same restaurant where we guyz came during university time's whenever we were going for outing

asad;-ohhh i forgot sorry..' replied asad looking straight and then at her, he found her looking at him with her hand across her chest with her left eyebrow raised

zoya;-care to explain?' she said totally not buying his ex-cuse

asad;-actually the matter is that i am afraid what if we did'nt got this deal, u knw na that my company is facing some loss from sometime and just because of us you will also lose this deal, it's so important u knw

answered asad of course it was'nt the true reason but it was the truth, asad's company is facing lose

zoya;-hey, nothing wrong will happen, be positive... and don't worry about us because we will get this deal at any cost, i am sure... and always remember that nothing wrong will happen when we are together

said zoya assuring him placing her hand on his and with her dimple smile

asad;-i hope so

zoya;-don't hope, be confident... everything will be fine. Inn Shaa ALLAH... waisa i guess the restaurant had left far behind so we should wait for some other to come

asad;-hmmm

and he continued driving with silence again ruling here... soon zoya got a call from yaseen

zoya;-yes yaseen

yaseen;-zoe, where are you guyz? i hope you did'nt reach mumbai?'asked yaseen tense

zoya;-nups we did'nt reach till now? but why are you asking? and why are you so tense?' asked zoya feeling something was wrong

yaseen;-actually... no zoya give phone to asad...; said yaseen

zoya;- ohkay' to yaseen 'asad yaseen wants to talk to you' she said to asad and handed mobile to him

aasd;-yes yaseen

yaseen;-asad actually there is face off b/w 2 rival parties and the situation is so worst ri8 nw? MR. singhania had also canceled the meeting. please come back right nw

asad;-oh my God.. ohkay u dn't worry, we will be back soon

yaseen;- yeah ohkay

asad;-Khuda-Hafiz

yaseen;-Allah-Hafiz

zoya;-what happen?' asked zoya and asad explain turning there car back to bhopal

after drive of half an hour the car stopped in between with aloud screech

zoya;-kya hua?

asad;-dn't knw, i guess petrol is finish

he got out and checked the car, zoya to came out and asked him

asad;-umm there is some problem, we have to find a mechanic...' said asad and then he saw that there was a small shop of tea and pakkora's ... so they both went there

asad;-ex-cuse can you tell me that where can we find a mechanic here?

man;-sir its difficult to find a mechanic at this hour of night, i guess you guyz should wait till morning

zoya;-morning? Ya ALLAH, what will we do till then asad? i am already very hungry' asked zoya panicked

man;-u can sit here till my shop is open mam and for food u can have these pakkora's and tea' suggested the man

asad;-right, zoya we should sit here and have this, lets see what will happen later

man;-munnu give tea and pakkora's to them...' that man shouted for his worker

munnu;-ji sirji

asad and zoya sat on the bench and then munnu came and gave tea and two plates of pakkora's to them and then left

sham;-munnu, just think again, that plate which u had given to madam are bhang pakkora's

munnu;-i know sham, but if i will tell sirji that pakkoras are finished, then he will eat me up alive, and let that lady eat na, who will know, its already 12 am, and these are our last customer after which that man know that what he have to do

sham;- i think u r right

soon asad and zoya ate it but were sitting there only, while the man along with his two workers closed his shop, soon it started raining and asya were totally drenched, that man came back running

man;-sahab ji, come with me, there is a small house in this way, u both can stay there

asad;-not a bad idea, thank u, lets go zoya

asad locked his car and taking his jacket they both started walking with that man, after the walk of 10 mins, that man pointed at a small but beautiful house

man;-sahab ji u can stay there, no one lives there

asad;-thank u' and they both went inside, while the man went towards his home

inside the house

zoya was feeling dizzy so she just went and lie down on a couch which was in the living room covered with a white sheet, while asad went inside the rooms searching for some clothes, soon he return with a shirt for him and a sari for zoya

asad;- zoya wear this, ur dress is wet

zoya looked at asad and started laughing;- look at yourself u are also wet

asad;-i know, what's there to laugh zoya, u go and change i will also change

zoya;-hehehehe ohkay sweeto said zoya pulling his cheeks while he looked shock at her behaviour, she left 'silly girl' he mumbled 'i heard that'came a voice of zoya from inside and he just shook his head smiling

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sometime later when asad came after changing he did'nt found zoya anywhere, he got tense and walked outside calling out her name and there she was, in that shelter, between the garden enjoying this beautifull weather asad just went and stood beside looking at front where she was staring...

zoya;-asad

asad;-hmmm

zoya;- i want to tell you something

asad;-acha say, i am listening

zoya;-asad mjhe dance karna hai or...or gana bhe gana hai

asad;-dance? but there is no music

zoya;- oh come on asad, we both know that u sing very well, please ek song gao and we will dance on it said zoya making a puppy face

asad;-zoya, are u mad, how can i and right nw

zoya;-please asad, please

asad;-acha fine

he turned and closed his eyes, all past moment they shared flashed in front on him and he started this song taking a deep breath

Dhaage Tod Laao Chandani Se Noor Ke

Ghoonghat Hi Banalo Roshini Se Noor Ke

Dhaage Tod Laao Chandani Se Noor Ke

Ghoonghat Hi Banalo Roshini Se Noor Ke

sang asad

Sharma Gai To Aagosh Mein Lo

Ho Saaaso Se Uljhi Rahi Meri Saasein

joined zoya

Bol Na Halke Halke

Hooth Se Halke Halke

Bol Na Halke

sang asad turning towards her

Bol Na Halke Halke

Hooth Se Halke Halke

Bol Na Halke

sang zoya making her way towards him

a fresh breeze passed from there, making zoya move with rhythm, asad placing his hand around her waist and pulled her to him

Aa Neend Ka Sauda Karein

Ek Khwaab De Ek Khwaab Le

sang asad staring in her eyes

Ek Khwaab To Aankhon Mein Hai

Ek Chand Ke Takiye Tale

sang zoya caressing his cheeks

Kitne Dino Se Yeh Asmaan Bhi

Soya Nahi Hai

Isko Sula De...

sang asad placing his hand over her

Bol Na Halke Halke

Hooth Se Halke Halke

Bol Na Halke

soon her hand made its way at his lips

Bol Na Halke Halke

Hooth Se Halke Halke

Bol Na Halke

allowing him to follow her hands way

Umrein Lagi Kehte Hue

Do Lafz The Ek Baat Thi

sang asad turning to the other side remembering the moment when he prepared himself to confess his feeling but never got the chance

Woh Ek Din Sau Saal Ka

Sau Saal Ki Woh Raat Thi

sang zoya also turning to the opposite side, remembering that worst night when that Rashid Ahmed Khan snatched away her happiness, she closed her eyes as her tears made its way out

Kaise Lage Jo Chupchap Dono

Palpal Mein Puri Sadiyan Beetadein

sang asad and walked to her, wiping away her tears shaking his head in no

Bol Na Halke Halke

Hooth Se Halke Halke

sang zoya taking steps towards him

Dhaage Tod Aao Chandani Se Noor Ke

Ghoonghat Hi Banalo Roshini Se Noor Ke

sang asad and stopped in his way

Sharma Gai To Aagosh Mein Lo

sang zoya and also stopped where she was, allowing him to come close to her

Ho Saaaso Se Uljhi Rahi Meri Saasein

he came close to her and they both sang together

Bol Na Halke Halke

Hooth Se Halke Halke

Bol Na Halke

Bol Na Halke Halke

Hooth Se Halke Halke

Bol Na Halke

he leaned down and came closer to her, now there lips were inches a part, she can feel his breath on her face as it was sending shiver down her spine, she felt restless and finally spoke

zoya;-asad

asad;-hmmm

zoya closed her eyes;- asad i...i i ... love...

asad smiled and looked at her to continue and she smilled back but before she continue she doze off with her head hitted on his chest... he patted her cheeks and called her name but no response, sighing he carry her in his arms and went inside the house, he made her lie on the bed and left from there, coming outside he informed yaseen about whole situation and he said that they will come there next morning to pick them up

i guess it was a long chapter...😃, and i hope that you all like it... i am sorry for any mistake coz i did'nt reread it after writing, m very very busy now a days...

do share your views😃

Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

salam all, just came to update teaser, chapter 10 is coming soon

teaser for chap 10

zoya;-asad

asad;-hmmm

zoya;- i want to tell you something

asad;-acha say, i am listening

zoya;-asad mjhe dance karna hai or...or gana bhe gana hai

asad;-dance? but there is no music

zoya;- oh come on asad, we both know that u sing very well, please ek song gao and we will dance on it said zoya making a puppy face

asad;-zoya, are u mad, how can i and ri8 nw

zoya;-please asad, please

asad;-acha fine

he turned and closed his eyes, all past moment they shared flashed in fornt on him and he started this song taking a deep breath

Dhaage Tod Laao Chandani Se Noor Ke

Ghoonghat Hi Banalo Roshini Se Noor Ke

Dhaage Tod Laao Chandani Se Noor Ke

Ghoonghat Hi Banalo Roshini Se Noor Ke

sand asad

Sharma Gai To Aagosh Mein Lo

Ho Saaaso Se Uljhi Rahi Meri Saasein

joined zoya

Bol Na Halke Halke

Hooth Se Halke Halke

Bol Na Halke

sang asad turning towards her

Bol Na Halke Halke

Hooth Se Halke Halke

Bol Na Halke

sang zoya making her way towards him

sowwy for any mistake, updating soon😃

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Note For Pm's

hey frndx it's a note for pm...i want to tell u tht whenever i update any part i send 180+ pm's but the readers are only 40-50...so i had decided tht i will make a pm list before the next update...so those who want pm have to leave a comment...sorry but liking this post only will not work at all...so plz mention in the comment "add me in pm list" like ths so thn i will send u pm for the next update otherwise i'll not bcz it's very difficult and it take alot of time

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Archana

@mysticlover

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Zoya changed??
Asad never got to propose her... what made her go away without telling anyone?? Is Tanveer behind Zoya's sudden disappearance back then??
I'm so waiting for her to come back into their lives!! :)
Continue soon n thanks for the pm...

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safa/fuii

@Splash-ASYA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

first one to comment... :D

it was a greatt update... but didnt understand one thing.. y didnt she got money from her uncle and returned it to rashid and got back to asad... she can do it now also...

and i think yaseen is her fianance...!

thanx for the pm.. and get well soon and update the other ffs sooon... :D

Edited by Splash-ASYA - 12 years ago

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

its not my fault how will i know that u shld tell me that u watch now also cartoon🤣
ohh ok ur grand father also watches now also😡😆😆

Lol
Chma cham u knw new name of mango

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