FF: Through The Monsoon #1 - Link to #2 on pg 1 - Page 64

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

Awesome piece of writing..AsadZoya being high..dizzy..struggling with the pleats of the saree was very well written..Asad worrying about his shirt in that state, to which Zoya helping him was fun..

and yes!!! you are very unpredictable!!! here I was thinking that they will be dancing in the rain like in the song in prev chapter..but this was much more awesome!!! You are one amazing writer...I could totally imagine the mood, emotion of your lines...Simply superb!!

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy

I need to hit my head somewhere...like literally!!!

I missed 4 updates!!! FOUR!!! *banging my head*

Loved all of them!!! I was wondering what had happened to the apple that you had mentioned in the beginning and BAM! here it came!

This totally reminds me of the bhaag ke pakodey sequence and awwhhllleee how cute is Zoya trying to wear a sari but failing due to lack of coordination! So like her! And Asad is trying so hard not to have his usual OCD behaviour... but failing!! And now he's shirtless!! ☺️

Can't wait to ee what happens in the next part! Update fast like you do!!! Pleeeaaassee!!!😃

Originally posted by: -KSGsmitten-

Oh this was one of your best! How do come up with such original and amazing and adorable and beautiful and fascinating Mitwa moments, how?? You should write a novel, jokes apart. 😊

Update on Wednesday pleeease.

Originally posted by: jazmeen

Loved it

I enjoyed it so much I would say more den if I would I have watched it on qabool hai

Let me guess everyone will see them in that state and will think they have slept together and stuff lmao

I can literally imagine the scene of the morning by the way they were behaving in this part

Poor them

Impaintely waiting for next part

U said u won't update tomorrow but m still gonna stalk it lmao

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

Ohk that was...i am speechless...i don't know how to describe this update,it had everything fun,

romance,hottness...truly one of your best works so far...well i knew she went to wear a saree and not in a million years would have I gussesd taht she went to asad's room...you are truly genius😃

Zoya standing near aasad's bed stuggling to drape her saree properly and asad saw her in that condition😳i couldn't really believe at first that he actually saw her like that...my god their disorientation and inability to do simple task and lack of eye hand coordination was fun to watch and especially of asad's...and wen asad pulled zoya by her waist and made space to tuck in her plates that was haawwwt😳i know they didn't realise how close they were but i blushed so hard while reading it☺️man they are gonna be so embarrassed wen they remember what transpired between them😉nd asad asking zoya to help him remove his shirt and zoya obliged😳awww mr.ocd can't see his shirt all messed up😆...well so basically they slept together on asad's bed asad half naked and zoya in a saree not draped properly...well its gonna be a treat to watch them wake up to this scene...i wonder how they are gonana react...i cant wait for the next part...and did i tell you how much i love you for this update...i mean i love you for other updates too but this one was truly amazing🤗

Originally posted by: braich_gal

OMG!!!!! OMG!!!! OMG!!!!! OMG!!!! OMG!!!!! OMG!!!!

they are both in bed together half naked...though they obviously are not gonna be doing anything...oh i saw wish tanveer will find them like that...😈 after all..it was her apple that made this happen 🤣