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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: mozhli
oye hoi...lovely

thank you😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I'm not first this time 😭

Anyways, this was so beautifully written. So eloquent and intricate!

I could imagine the whole scene with their faces - which btw is a big thing because I never never never imagine stuff like that with faces. Whenever I read an erotica the faces are blank for me, other kind of story plots - yes if it matches their personality I do see their faces and them doing the stuff... but erotica types - never. I just can't imagine them.

But with your ts, I could picture them, and I could picture the scene. It was not out of character - except just the my cherie thing, but other than that it was like a movie playing in my head.

How beautiful 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: iaddiction
res
unres.

I'm not first this time 😭

Anyways, this was so beautifully written. So eloquent and intricate!

I could imagine the whole scene with their faces - which btw is a big thing because I never never never imagine stuff like that with faces. Whenever I read an erotica the faces are blank for me, other kind of story plots - yes if it matches their personality I do see their faces and them doing the stuff... but erotica types - never. I just can't imagine them.

But with your ts, I could picture them, and I could picture the scene. It was not out of character - except just the my cherie thing, but other than that it was like a movie playing in my head.

How beautiful 👏

hahahhaa i am not planning to make this as an erotic story...but if my plot demands it then i might just add it...

i am a person who imagines everything , even the minutest details...so yes i kind of have an effect with reading them...

about not being first...tats perfectly okay!! you will have many more chances 😉.

being intricate well i am planning on that ...though thank you for the comment...its always a pleasure people appreciating your work 😃 ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: zoas91

hahahhaa i am not planning to make this as an erotic story...but if my plot demands it then i might just add it...

i am a person who imagines everything , even the minutest details...so yes i kind of have an effect with reading them...

about not being first...tats perfectly okay!! you will have many more chances 😉.

being intricate well i am planning on that ...though thank you for the comment...its always a pleasure people appreciating your work 😃 ❤️

I hope you move on from ts to ss 😛
And its good to know that your plans are working out for the story - it's having the effect you desired😊