OS:- KABHI ALVIDA NA KEHNA (updated part:-1 on page:-2)

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Hey guys :-) hope you guys doing well here want to write a short story on Asya. This story is not only a story its someone's real life and i love it so want to share with you guys :-). PROLOGE :- Humera asked zoya " zoya are you sure ayan likes me". Zoya smile looking at her and said "humera are you mad he stared at you in whole class and bese vi humera asad and ayan are popular boy in our school so every girl want to be gf of one of them if you dont want then i told ayan that you dont like him".So here you saw the prologe, update after a while :-)Here is the link to my another asya os :- i want to be with you http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3586331&TPN=1
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nice start😊
update soon
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Originally posted by: spoorthi

nice start😊
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thank you :-)
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Originally posted by: risingsea101

Sound nice

Continue it :)

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nice start update soon and plzzz pm me the next update😊
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thank you :-)
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Originally posted by: nuts_22

nice start update soon and plzzz pm me the next update😊

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Will give update in 2 hour sory for late :-)
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nice start update soon and plzzz
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PART:-1 :- Zoya , zoya utho beta dekho tution time hogaya hai and avi abbu vi jayenge toh wo bohot gusa karenge ki zoya tak ghar pe kyun hai tution kyun nei gaye said zoya's ammi. Zoya cant bear more sound of her ammi and went to the washroom for freshenup. She look at the clock and realised actualy she was very late then she pack her book and remember that she didnt complete her task. She hit her forhead and thnk "allh miya whats wrong with me main task complete karna vul gaye and ab toh ammi ko vi kuch bahana nei bata sakti wo toh mujhpe he chilayenge". Suddenly something come to her mind and her face lighted up she think "haye meri bestie and school ki toper humera kab kam ayege". Then she complete her breakfast and headed to the background for take her cycle. Her cycle is bff for her infact sometime she share some of her wory with her cycle. She enjoy the morning beauty of nature as now there is no trafic no crowd , the time was 5:45am. Some people had morning walks. Then suddenly she heard one familiar voice call her name "zoya,zoya ruk ja oye tej talwar itni jaldi kidar ja rahe hai ". Zoya smile looking at him it was ronak her childhood best friend. They meet for the first time they were 3 years old. After the first meet they were became friends and till now the friendship remains strong. Zoya look at him and said "aj tu tution itni jaldi kaise ja raha hai bese koe na janta bt i knw tu 6 baje se pehle nei uthta thats why tu late hota hai". "han toh kya hua aj toh jaldi uth gaya na tu vi na taunt marne ka koe mauka nei chodti"said ronak. Zoya look at a house at the road side as she try to find something there then she lowered her eye and asked to ronak "what about your best friend". Ronak look at her confusingly and said "my best friend and who?" zoya heat his arm and said "zyada smart banne ki kosis mat kar i am talking about asad". Ronak's confuson clear now he said "oh acha asad toh tu name bolti na mere toh do do best friend hai asad and ayan toh confuson toh hoga he. Bese asad apne mamujan ke ghar pe gaya hai kuch bat hai kya?" zoya get upse and said "oh acha mamujan ke ghar gaya hai par itna din mamujan ke ghar toh wo kavi nei jata and usko kitana din ho gaya hai school nei agaya". Ronak give her a smirk and said "kya bat hai aj kal koe asad ko bohot miss kar raha hai hai". Zoya give him a glare and gave punch on his arm which make ronak "auchhh pagal hai kya kitana jor se mar rahe hai". Zoya said "tujhe aur zor se mar khana chahiye and bese vi koe miss biss nei kar rahe hun main usko bas as a friend i am wory that agar attendence short hua toh exam dene main problem hoge". Finally they reach at their tution then ronak said "han han samajh gaya main". Zoya look at him with a evil smile and said "aj school chal beta aur vi ache tarah se samajhaunge". At the break time humera and zoya walking in the garden and zoya said "thank you so much humera aj agar tu meri help na karti toh mujhe vi iss ronak ki tarah murga banna padta sory murgi. Then she look at kneeldown ronak and show him tongue. She notice humera is tensed today so she asked "humera what happend , are you ok". Humera look at her and said "zoya are you sure ayan likes me ". Zoya smile at her question and said " humera are you mad you also saw that ki ayan always stare at you in the class and with that dreamy look hayeee mar jawan but yahan you confuse. Bese you know na ki asad and ayan are 2 famous boys of our school and every singel girl want to be their gf but jab one of them and the play boy of our school ayan want you , may be you dont like him na? Ohk i tell ayan today". Humera said panicly "are are zoya tu pagal hai kya i like him and i like him from the day one". Zoya smile at her cute friends confeson and said "dont worry sab kuch thk hoga ab chale break khatam hone wala hai". Humera smile and said chalo. In the school everyone standing for morning speech. Asad,ayan,zoya,humera,ronak all are selected for the special student seat and they stand at their special place. Asad was missing from last 5 day . Zoya look at her side place that was asad place and that was empty. She again get sad and look at ayan and humera who stare at each other very romanticly and talk with each other. But suddenly she felt someones present beside her and she turned her face. Her face lighted up now. But she show him fake anger and said "itna din kahan tha tu pata hai na attendence short hua hai and btw padhai ka kya karega tu itna course age badh gaya hai". Asad wink at her and said "tu hai na and bese vi ronak bol raha tha bohot miss kar rahe the tu mujhe." zoya wave her hand in air and said "kaun main aur tujhe miss karun pagal hai kya, chal ab chup chap khada rahe nei toh dant sunna padega ". She is very happy that he is back but she didnt want to show her happines to himSo guys here is the 1st part hope you guys like it :-)
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