AsYa FF: Raabta Chapter 12(Updated 28/8/13) Pg. 33

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

I don't know what to say.. or what to feel. It was just after the last second update I thought poor zoya and I was swearing on Asad.. Wacking him over 100 times mentally.. But, now after this update its like poor Asad , especially the last line where he is cursing his fate..

Well, I am clear about one thing Asad needs to leave his insecurities for once, ask his insecurities to take a back seat. And, except the fact that he is in love with zoya, so is zoya with him. And, when two people love each they should have the courage to except it and unite. Zoya has that , Asad needs to get that.

Don't tell me I am Rashid Ahmed Khan's daughter.. Hahaha.. Asad zoya's bhaijaan that is too weird to even imagine. But that cracked me...

Loved the update.

Continue soon.

Dee

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

superb one.
Waiting 4 nxt part.

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

This asad and Zoya are more to the real QH..

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Hey tis is superb...
Wonder y she never talk with him n straight left after her father with so many question...
Hopefully everything will be fine between them...
Beautifully written...
Thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

That was a Wow up-date...

I am so close to cry myself...Asaddd...God, poor him...But she will come back...he should know that...That Gaffu Sidi isnt standing there for her with open arms...Cant wait for the next up-date...!!! 😊

Originally posted by: bruno567mars

Hahaha are you sure? 😉

🤣

Oh...I was wrong...only because this up-date was longer then usual...😆 But thanks for letting me think for a sec that I was right...!!! 🤣 lol

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Gudduluvs

@Gudduluvs

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

wiw..awesum writng..just read ur ff in ine gi n luvd it.plz di add me n om me wen u uodate nxt..plzx

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

really well written- especially asad's reactions

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Ruchika

@bruno567mars

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Thank you all. I just reread the chapter and oh god so making mistakes. If only I read them before posting😛 but i write for fun, I mean this is not a writing forum right? Thank you once again for ignoring all my mistakes and still reading this story.

I love you all ❤️

<3 Ruchika

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-Everglow-

@-Everglow-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

part was great...update soon and thanks for the pm!!

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#180

read all d chaps in a go...its an wonderfulll ff..omg poor asad or zoee?? Dnt kno whm shall i feel bad fo??? Bth r equally vulnerable...updatee soon n plzzz pm mehhh