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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 9

Asad stood there quietly listening to all this! Betrayal! Her dad had also betrayed her mom! He was mad! He couldn't believe that someone would leave such a cute daughter like Zoya behind! Did he just say cute? She isn't cute! She's beautiful!!! She's an angel!
An angel that came into his life and changed his life for ever! He realized that all this time, he wasn't looking for an answer, he already had the answer, he was just in denial, because it seemed like the easiest thing to do! But no more!
He is going to face the fact that he loves Zoya head on and take care Zoya when she really needs him. As if he had heard Asad's inner monologue, Shehry came up to him and said, it's now or never mate! It's time to prove yourself to the best friend how well you can take care my Zoya! Let's see if your worthy of her!
Asad opened his mouth to say something when Shehry said, "Uh-uh !
Zoya's more than a best friend to me! She almost like my baby! N just remember if you ever hurt my baby even unintentionally, you will have to face a lot more than you can imagine! And if you want something as priceless as my baby, then you HAVE to prove yourself worth! If you can't handle and comfort her in tears, then you don't deserve her smile either!"
Saying that Shehry walked off and Asad just stared at him in disbelief! Just as he was going to turn around and go give Shehry a piece of his mind, he say Zoya crying n about to fall! He forgot everything and ran!
He got to her in time n caught her! "Zoya! Zoya! " she had barely opened her eyes to see him when the tears and pain came back to her, and she stared yelling!
"Mr. Khan! How could he do that to Ammi! That heartless bas***d! How could he do this!? He burnt my Ammi alive!!! I'm gonna kill that bas***d!! Mr. Khan! Mr. Khan'.."
And she fainted in his arm! He kept her in his arms for a while until he calmed himself and stopped his own tears! This couldn't be happening to his Zoya, but no matter how much he wanted it to be a dream, it was true! N at that moment he himself wanted to find the bas***d and kill him with his bare hands!!!
Finally after composing himself a bit he picked her up in his arms and took her to her room. He had just laid her on the bed when she stared coming around saying "Mr. khan" he looked at her and she looked completely devastated.
He quickly sat on the bed and took her in his arms, as If finding solace in his arms, Zoya led out all the tears as Asad stroked her hair and placed a few kisses on her head. After all the crying, Zoya had seemed to calmed down so Asad asked her, "Zoya, app thik to hai?" "Patta nahi Asad, ki kya humme Ammi aur apne liye dukhi hona chahiye ya phir uss insaan pe gussa hona chahiye Jisse ne Hamara sab kuch chin liya!"
"Aap ko patta hai Zoya jab Janaab Rashid Ahmed Khan Ammi ko chod kar chale Gaye the to mujhe Ammi bohot mushkil se bapis Le kar ayyi thi aur tub se Lakar app ke samjhane tak Maine sirf unse nafrat ki hai! Lakin app ne mujhe realize karvaya ki past ko to hum badal nahi sakte Lakin future to hamare bas me Hain!
Aur gussa sirf uss future ko kharab kardeta hai aur aap ka gussa bhi us insaan ke kabil nahi hai! You don't worry! Shehry ko zaroor kuch clue to hoga ki Vo kaun hai, aur hum plan bana kar use usike jaal me phanse ge! I'll hve him hanged for this!" Zoya hugged Asad and whispered while crying, and if she hadn't been so close to his ear, he would have missed what that whisper carried!
That's all folks!
Edited by goyalprey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AsyaManic

cont soon. Seems intrstng

thaku so much ... its updated till part 8
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome plz do continue soon and pm.
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awesome plz do continue soon!! šŸ‘
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Part 10

Asad & Zoya

Zoya hugged Asad and buried her face in his neck as she whispered, "I love you, Asad! I love you so much!"
Surprised by his own actions, he stroked her hair again and pressed a kiss into her hair as he heard his own whisper say, "I love you too, Zoya, more than anything in this world."
Shehry had done that on purpose! He knew that Asad needed that little push, and he gave him that little push. Now all Asad had to had was up to him. Lost in his own thoughts, Shehry ran into someone and she dropped something that she was holding and then'..ahhh!, he heard someone say, and then he found himself with her in his arms and him staring into her big pretty brown eyes! She had the most beautiful face he had ever seen! At that moment, he felt like all his existence had found a meaning! Yes! Shehry had found the love of his life! He had found his soulmate! And then all of sudden, he heard, "What do you think you are doing?"
He turned around helping her to her feet his hand on the small of her back, to see Dilshad Phoophi standing there! "Oh I'm sorry Phoophi! I was walking and thinking and I ran into this mauhtarma over here! I'm very sorry Phoophi!" Then he turned around to face her and said, "I'm sorry! Aap ka Sarra khana meri vajja se gir Gaya!"
"The question was asked by me, not Ammi!" He heard Asad behind him. He was holding Zoya's hand so Shehry said, "I already said what I was doing! First you tell me why you are holding my baby sis's hand!?" Shehry smirked as all eyes turned on Asad. Asad blushed crimson red n Zoya quickly took her hand out of his hand. Shehry moved forward dragging Phoophi with him and smiled at Asad and Zoya! Then holding Zoya's hand an placing it in Asad's and then placing both hands in Phoophi's he said, "Just promise you'll take care of her better than I have done! Never let tears in her eyes, and always put a smile on her face!"
"I promise!" Said Asad. The girl ran and went and hugged Asad! I'm so happy bhaijaan! And then, "Zoya!!!! Allah miyan! We went from new walli BFFs to sister-in-laws!!!"
"Calm down tamatar!" Said Zoya.
"Calm down! My tamatar can't stay calm for anything!" Said Asad.
"Bhaijaan!" Said tamatar with a cute pout, making her look even more beautiful than she already was, and Shehry couldn't stop staring at her. Then Phoophi said, "Ok, Shehry, Asad,and Zoya come eat dinner!" "And c'mon Najma! Stop making faces now!" "Oh wait I know that look! You want to try another diet?"
"Ammi, look! I look like a baby elephant! I want to look best in bhaijaan's wedding!"
"But how can you perfect perfection? You're already beautiful beyond words!" Shehry heard himself before he could stop himself.
"I mean you look fine! Najma. That's a very pretty name!" He said awkwardly. While he saw Asad smiling.
That's all folks!
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PART 11 AND 12 - PG 4
Edited by goyalprey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sasir

really nice. continue soon

thankyou sooo much ... nd its update happy reading!!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 10 updated happy reading!

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thanx. loved it. plz continue soon
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Part 11

They had their dinner in small talks. Nothing unusual because even though every one was excited for Zoya and Asad to enter a new relationship, Zoya was still very upset about her recent relegation of her father.

The way Shehry was staring at Najma and being awfully quiet, Asad knew that he surely felt something for Najma! And not in that creepy "checking a girl out" or "teasing a girl" type of way but rather in a very mature "soulmate" type way! It would make sense too! If Asad recalled correctly he was a firm believer in soulmates! He was happy for Najma!

He knew that Najma will make a great wife of her future husband but he always feared that he won't be able to find someone suitable for his baby sis! But now he was relieved! Even though he had only known Shehry for a few hours he knew the second he made up his mind that he would never regret the decision, so he spoke up, "Ammi, vaise Pehle Najma ka nikah mere se Pehle hona chahiye! Vo larki hai!"

Asad fought very hard to hold his laughter as he saw the way Shehry looked up and his face went ghostly white! That proved it! Shehry had only known Najma for about 30mins and already he looked as if his life had been drained out of him!!! Asad actually understood the love at first sight concept first time in his life! Before Zoya he had always believed that, "Mohobaat sirf waqt zaiyar karne ka zaria hai."

He returned from his inner blabber when he heard Ammi say, "Arre! Ye kya baat hui Asad!? Tumhe Pehle dulhan milli isliye shaadi kar rahe ho na?" "Nahi Ammi ese tohda na hota hai," as he looked at his Ammi and told her with his eyes to look over, "Hanna Shehry?" Ammi had looked just in time to see that Shehry was staring at Najma and by the way Ammi was smiling, Asad knew that the seed had been planted in Ammi's mind, as he said, "Shehry!?" While shaking him!

"Huh!?" Said an embarrassed Shehry as Zoya laughed and said, "Tu to Gaya Shehry!" And then turning around to face Najma and saying, "Arre wah Najma, itna jaldi jadoo chal Gaya Hamari BFF mauhtarma ka ki hamare BFF Janaab to hosh mein hi nahin hai!" And then she got up and ran to hug Shehry as she yelled, "Omg! Shehry you finally found your soulmate yaar!!" Najma blushed and ran inside as Zoya said, "Arre! Kitna sharmati ha yeh! Wait let me go see!" Zoya left as Ammi began chatting away with Shehry. Shehry was politely talking when his phone rang.

"Excuse me please." As Shehry got up and left to answer his phone, Asad found it to be appropriate time to talk to Ammi.

"Ammi, do you think it was a right decision?" "Yes beta! Tumne bilkool thik kiya! You know Asad, Kabhi Kabhi zindgiya bit Jatti hai Lakin hum insan ko nahi pehchan patte, Lakin Kabhi Kabhi Pehli nazar mein hi app ko paras jaisa insaan mil Jatta hai!" "Aur vaise bhi Vo Zoya ka BFF Kum bhaijaan Zadda hai! To phir Tum jiju aur bhai honke ka farz adda nahi karoge!?"

"Ji Ammi," said Asad as he got up to leave. He had just took a step when Shehry came back in the kitchen with a very worried looking face!

That's all folks!

Sorry for a short update, but it's a bit heavy and plus I gotta keep my suspense ! So stay tuned for Part 12!!

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Edited by goyalprey - 12 years ago
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Part 12

Karan with Neha

"Ji Ammi," said Asad as he got up to leave. He had just took a step when Shehry came back in the kitchen with a very worried looking face!
"Kya hua Shehry?" Said Asad
"Zoya."
"Zoya!?" Said Asad as his face went white as paper, "what happened Zoya!? Is she ok!?"
"What?..oh! Right! No, Zoya is fine but I'm gonna KILL her!!!! She phoned and told everyone!!! Could you believe it!? She TOLD everyone and I'm still sitting here eating and I've never even talked to Najma!!! Ever!!"

Asad couldn't stop himself from laughing out loud on this one!! It was true knowing Zoya, it was expected, but not that fast! They hadn't even left the dining table yet! Allah miyan that girl! Did Asad just say that!? He smiled thinking how she always said, "Allah miyan, what wrong with you Mr. khan?" He was use to it by now! He found it annoying at first but now it was like a compliment he got from her telling him that she had been paying so much attention to him that she was actually bothered by it enough to say her famous line.yes! This was the day! When you would catch Asad Ahmed Khan in love and dreaming away.
Shehry had settled down and was finishing his food when Asad decided to go check on Najma and talk to her about how she was feeling.

"Zoya, yeh aap kya kar rahe ho?" Najma was saying trying to hold Zoya hands who was busily tying a blindfold around Najma's eyes.
"Kya yeh Karna zaroori hai, Zoya, I can't see anything."
"That's the point, tamatar!"
"Lakin aap kar kya rahe ho!?"
"Ho Gaya!!! Ok! Now! Think about your future and dreams and tell me what you see!"
"Zoya? Yeh kya keh rahe hai aap?"
"Tamatar! I want to know what you want! Remember that one time where YOU asked how I wanted my future to be, I told you na! Now it's ur turn! Challo time waste mat karo! C'mon tellz me baby!!" Zoya said winking.
"Ok! Fine!"
"Uh.I see him.Zoya unka last name kya hai?"
"What!? Seriously tamatar!? Yaar itna romantic moment ruin kardi ya! Bilkool apne bhaijaan JAISA!"
"Ok sorry!" Zoya Said when Najma made a face, "his full name is Shehryyaar Muhammad Asif! Aur nikah ke baad, Tum ban jayo gi 'Najma Shehryyaar Muhammad Asif!" Zoya smiled as she saw Najma blushing. What was unexpected was what happened next''
Najma slowly raised her hand and touched Zoya's face and told Zoya, hmmm.jaise aap ban jaiyenge 'Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan'! Nahi?" This time Zoya blushed and Najma said, "arre wah! Never thought I would live to see the day when Zoya Farooki will blush!"
"Tumme kasie patta? Tumhara blindfold acshi tarah nahi bandha kya?"

"Arre Zoya aap ke face pe hand hai mera, aur aap oven se bhi Zadda garam ho rahe ho!!" Said Najma laughing and Zoya said, "challo back to work!" Smacking Najma playfully.
"Ok! Uh''I see him'.Asif ji ko Dekh Sakti hu''patta hai Zoya, mujhe hamesha se ek Asia patti chahiye tha Jo ki mujhe mereliye pyar Kare!" Removing her blindfold Najma went on!
"You! You are so beautiful! You are skinny! You eat whatever you want, drink whatever you want, do whatever you want, you're so independent and you're so brave! I always wanted a sister like you, in fact sometimes I WANT TO BE U! And it's not that bhaijaan never let's me do anything it's that'..well'..me'I Donot want to go outside cuz I'm afraid because I can't lose weight that no one will like me! I was always afraid no one will want to marry me, but today, today he made me feel like a princess. Like I was the most beautiful and precious thing he had ever seen."
"Shhh''.Najma''never say that again! You are by far the most beautiful person I've ever met! Phoophi ke baad ofcourse!" Zoya said as Najma smiled.
Asad whipped his tears and went towards the door.
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Edited by goyalprey - 12 years ago

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