Honeymoon Par Jaana Padhe Tho? OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: pkaps

beautifully written... 👏

Though I was execting something on her burnt mark revelations aswell (especially coz' there was a flasback scene)

Originally posted by: lavalina

hey I have a suggestion next should b something under water like sea diving or asad teaching her swimming I want them like in water so PLS u can say sea diving karni pari tho or swimming sikni Pari th0 😉

Originally posted by: Noe123

Bheegi, this was beautiful. The best in your 'To...' series in my POV.

Originally posted by: Didi01

I'm just loving it. I wish writers of the show can take some of the scenes from your OS rather than dragging the stupid Tanveer track. There are simply no words that can do justice to your writing. While reading one can simply relate your scenes with the original story because you depict the original characters so beautifully in your writing. Anxiously waiting for the next part but at I want u to enjoy your vacations, came back safely n give us a beautiful next part.

Originally posted by: avi_12

dat was awesome...👏 and a looong one 😃
i always wished some involvement of rashid. somehow , somewhere i feel rashid as not a wrong guy but a wronged guy, the one not who did not understand what he wanted at that time and cannot now erase what he did, bechara pehle raziya ne fasaya den shirin and now even dilshad lost all her respect she had.
anyways, your update was awesome really loved the boat scene😳. and felt bad for zoya in the earlier hotel scene. your three vacation visit will tooo long for all the readers i guess...😉

Originally posted by: bheegi

There is a reason I have hidden the scar so far...it will be revealed at an appropriate time😉

Thanks dear...u all are very kind.