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Akilla

@Akilla

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

i dont trust them, i dont trust malak, i dont trust kesavan, i dont even trust the company. i think the only people i do trust at the moment are Asad, Zoya, Najma and Dilshaad. excellent writing, you have a way with words. please carry on quickly

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Loved this chapter! Absolutely amazing!!! I loved the moments when Zoya stood up for Asad! Malak is complete asshole and same with Nair. ...LOL Nair is a hair removing cream brand xD Ahahaha 🤣

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@daydream.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Read all parts right now! 😆 I love this story, it's different! I'm loving Zoe's computer tech skills! Except I have no clue what she's talking about! 🤣 Jk. So, there are two guys fighting over Zoe, huh? 🤣 Lol, I has this little victory dance going on in my head, when Zoe told that Malak guy that Asad came first! 🥳 Hehehe. 😆 Ugh, that Malak is getting on my nerves! 🤬 He should hook up with Billi! 🤣 Ew. 🤢 Anyways, update soon! 😛
--Me! 😆 ❤️
PS. I sent u a buddy request! 🤗 If u could plz send me PMs when u update, that would be great! 😃 If possible. 😊 And sorry for this extremely long comment, I know I'm probably wasting ur time! Byeee now! 🤣

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Manchalateriore

@Manchalateriore

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

awesome update!! something fishy is going on...

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

hey Paly

i'm in a hurry

but that was a great update😊

i loved Zoya's couplet😆

and the little moment that played out between the Khan family in Asad's office

and that Zoya was inconspicuously included

the best was when she said that Asad is her most valued client😃

great job and waiting on the next one

thanks for the PM😊

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Nazz1992

@Nazz1992

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Thank you for the pm. 😉 I am in love with the way you write, I adore the concept and your personalization of Asad and Zoya character.

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Tanvi

@KulfiBai

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Love this story - it's so very intriguing and exciting and all things awesome! 😃 I really enjoy reading about the other characters you've written about too, I love Malak! You, lady, are gifted 👏

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

tis is really awesome...totally superb...just luv it...

really brilliantly written...

dilshad is really awesome n just luv the way asad n zoya reacted...

thx fr the pm...

please continue soon n eagerly waiting fr the next update..n please pm me fr the next update...

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Lakshmi

@Chipmunks.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

I read the prequel and now this one. Its so amazing😊

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

loving the way the story is progressing! Loved that you included the whole khan family in this chap - Najma and Dilshu are adorable! The scene where Zoys changes and comes out - was written brilliantly! Your writing flows really well and her uncertainty was nicely portrayed!

And then of course I loved to see Dilshaad's protective side! But my favorite scene has to be when Zoys says Mr.Khan is her most valued client! Made a smug smile come on my face too ;) I really like the Zoya in ur FF - she is always so sensible and thoughtful!

Excited for more so do continue soon :)

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