SS:Asad Ahmed Khan's Bachelor Party - Chap 5 pg 42

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

hey

that was awesome

drunk Zoya is so funny and lots of fun to read about

she sang lat lag gayi...haha😆

i can't believe she made him stop for ice cream

and she was standing on the couch😲

and making faces at tanveer...haha

i'd have loved to see that

can't wait for the confession

and to see if Zoya remembers anything

continue soon

and thanks for the PM😊

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Archana

@mysticlover

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Interesting ss...
Would love to read...
Do pm me when you update...

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Bwuaaah! The drunk Zoe, is so darn fun to read. The "Tick-Tick-One" scene was the BBESSSTT! I couldn't stop smiling throughout the Update. And of course, yet again Asad Ahmed Khan could NOT confess! :P

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

This is ADORABLE! For this part I WISH i was playing Zoya just to be in the arms of Asad aka Karan! <3

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Brilliant update!!! Drunk Zoya is shooo adorable!!!! loved this, especially the part where she goes "tick tick one!" Buhahahahaha!!! 🤣

Please please dont end this here! Actually i would love another 10 chapters!! okay...one will do too! But please do update soon!!!

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

really nice..very well written...😊

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beguiling

@beguiling

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!
ONE OF THE MOST ENTERTAINING SS!
GIVE A PAT ON YOUR BACK ON MY BEHALF!

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Payal

@Grenade

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

This just keeps getting better!! 😃

I don't know how but you did it again. Left me utterly flabbergasted, awwing, drooling and emotional all at the same time!

I broke into a wide smile while Zoya was annoying the grumpy, cute Asad with her drunkenness which were way more effective than her usual antics. Asad's reactions made me go just !

And then came my favourite part:

But Asad did not let her finish for he had pulled her into a tight hug.

"Khuda na kare ke aap ko kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho," Asad said while patting her head softly. Her next words made him freeze.

As much as I swoon over cute, confused Asad who just cant seem to get over his fumbling wherever a confession is concerned, I totally die over an INTENSE Asad! Like it gives me all kinds of fluttering, fluffy feelings in my heart! 😳😳

And just then:

And then his stupid phone rang. Great! Just great! Asad thought, running his hand through his hair exasperatedly.

Seriously?

Way to go, Ranjana! You really do know how to drown my heart, don't you?😭

But it's okay. Confession or not, I still love you for giving me such a freaking awesome story to look forward to!

Hmm thinking just one more chapter is left is making me kinda depressed! 😔

Yeah, I didn't miss the part where you said this maybe the last chapter. Not that it'll likely happen because c'mon, even Karma isn't that cruel! 😉

P.S. Sorry to delay this. Updated my previous comment too.(Page 23)

Edited by Grenade - 12 years ago