Asya os . Love Eternal , part 4 , pg 24 (7 oct) up - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey😊..first of all thanx for the pm...and my result was also good, so i m back to reading ffs..i got 83% though i expected more but all in all i m happy..

coming to the update, it was amazing👏⭐️ dear.. finally, we got to know the whole truth and thank god zoya is alive but in coma from 4 years..poor asad suffered so much in that time.😭..and that billi😡 got what she deserved, how dare she came there with her fake sympathy, she should thank god that asad didn't kill her and on top of that, she has the gut to say ill about zoya that too infront of asad & dilshad..she got 2 slaps for that, par use to jute padne chahiye the..but i am satisfied with the slaps only...asad stole the whole update, his pain, his agony, his love for zoya, everything touched our heart..my heart literally went out for him...asad confessed his love but this time zoya is not with him to hear it out...he has devoted his life for zoya completely, can't see him in this condition anymore..update the next part soon and make zoya completely fine...

one request can't u add two more chapters ..u said u r gonna finish it in the next update..come on we should get atleast two happy parts..too much rona-dhona...but if r busy then its okay..will wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
just update super fast
i love the way you portray the characters and i am eagerly waiting for a happy ending !!!!!! pleaseee

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Posted: 12 years ago
heartbreakingly brilliant made me cry i tried reading it as fast as i could so i didnt start bawling
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Posted: 12 years ago
Phew! It wasn't what I thought! But.. but.. it's just as bad i think. How sad is it to realize how important someone is to you and how right they were and how wrong they were until it's too late. I really hope Zoya wakes up at some point. 4 years is a long time. Most people would give up after a few weeks, hell some after a few days. But not Asad. I'm glad he didn't give up. I'm glad he's still fighting.

I was afraid when I realized he was dreaming. But I had hope that it wasn't that she was gone when you described him fixing up Zoya's room. But this is still heart wrenching. Your description of his daily routine, of his hopes and how they're crushed was just... AHHH. Too well done.

Loved it... Can't wait for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful Update! ❤️

Waiting for Next!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cute Jerry u r a cute jerry itself😊wow yaar ...
.Pls PM me ur nxt update
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Posted: 12 years ago
YAar... what was this? i am still in trauma after reading... just loved to drop my tears on reading.. it was like, i was feeling all this happening in front of me, and this imagination braught tears in my eyes... please update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Totally heart wrenching...uhh...t just made me cry...u r such an excellent writer that I have no termss to explain it...pls do continue soon...u made my best day today...thank u

Happy shab-e-miraj ...to u...plszzzjjj...pm me if possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
heart wrenching. continue soon.
Edited by sasir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update...loved it...hope she wakes up soon...

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