Untitled OS. AsYa Ki Lau Ishtory. :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey y'all!
Well.. I am actually in LAUU with this song ever since I heard it... :) do din pehele hi Sunna hai.. :)

I wanted to make a post on it.. But I felt too lazy to.. It was after the post made by Blueflames that I was actually triggered to finally write this. :)

Hope you enjoy it. :)


"Shit. Shit. Shit."

He'd done it again for the umpteenth time.
He just wronged her like a jerk for the miilionth time without hearing her out first.

"Ya Allah.. What do I do now? I NEED to make it up to her.." Asad thought to himself. "I know, aaj usse apni dil ki baat bata dunga... Iss bahane Ammi ki baat bhi hojayegi, aur meri dil ki baat bhi nikal jayegi."

At night.

Zoya sees the sari in her room and she reads the note it carries.

"Huh? Yeh kya hai? Mr. Khan MUJHSE milna chaate hai? Aur woh bhi raat ko? Uff! Unke dil mein sach mein patthar hai, seena nahi!Hmph!" Zoya mumbled to herself.

"Khair, ek na ek din iss naatak ko toh khatam hona hi hai na, toh the earlier the better."

She wore the sari that Asad had given her, as well as a pair of casual black earrings.

And she left.

In The Backyard.

"I just hope that this even suffices for atleast 1/4 of the mistake I've done. Aaj toh main bata kar hi rahunga."

"Mr. Khan? Mr. Khan. Aap kahaan hai? Hmph! Mujhe bula kar khud hi nai aaye hai..! Mr. Kh-"

"Shh..." Asad had come up behind her and covered her mouth.

"Main aagaya Ms. Farooqui... Itna mujhe miss kar ri thi kya aap?" He said teasingly to her.

"Woh main..." And she trailed off as she noticed their close proximity suddenly.

He made her sit down on the seating that he had arranged for them and said to her " Aap ko hamesha mujhse ek complaint rahi hai na.. Ki aaj tak guitar par maine aapke liye koi gaana nai gaaya hai... Aaj yeh bhi complaint door kar deta hoon main."

"Ms. Fa-, Zoya, listen carefully, because I am about to tell you something Jo main kaafi dino se kehena chaata tha."

Zoya still astounded by all the preparations he's done, but she still manages to nod him a slight yes.

"Jeene Laga Hoon, Pehele Se Zyaada, Pehele Se Zyaada, Tumpe Marne Laga Hoon.Main, Mera Dil, Aur Tum Ho Yahaan, Phir Kyun Ho Palkein Jhukaye Wahaan. Tum Sa Haseen, Pehele Dekha Nahin, Tum Iss Sey Pehele Thi Jaane Kahaan..."

Zoya had a beautiful which had already crept on her face unknowingly. She couldn't believe her ears.! Was her Mr. Khan seriously telling her he loved her?! Then why couldn't he just say so..? Why on earth did he have to complicate things like that..?

Nevertheless, she loved every minute of it.

Asad noticed her smile and had a feeling of contentment and warmth in him.. He continued "Rehte Ho Aake, Jo Tum Paas Mere, Tham Jaaye Pal Yeh Wahin, Bas Main Yeh Sochun..-"

Zoya smiled looking directly at him and interjected
"Sochun Main Tham Jaaye Pal Yeh, Paas Mere Jab Ho Tum.."

She got up and went to him, then held his hand and said "Chalti Hai Saansein, Pehele Se Zyaada, Pehele Se Zyaada Dil Theher Ne Laga..."

Asad couldn't help but just stare at his "honewaali-Patni" lovingly. Yes, she'd forgiven him.. But not only that, she had also told him her feelings as well and there was nothing else Asad wanted in the world at that moment other than to hug her and just say those words to her.

So that's exactly what he did.

Both he and Zoya looked at each other and then smiled and said "Milne Lage Dil, Pehele Se Zyaada, Pehele Se Zyaada, Ishq Hone Laga..."

They stopped.
The wind was blowing wildly, yet their was a certain stillness in the air, as if the earthly & heavenly bodies were telling him "Go For It Bro. Now Is The Time. It's Now... Or NEVER."

He just listened to that advice and carried out his requirement.

"Zoya, bohot time waste kar liya Maine.. Ab aur nahi...
I love you. And I want to spend my entire lifetime with you.
And you.
And only you.

Qubool Hai?"


That's it folks!
Pata hai.. Ending crappy tha!! Actually, poora hi crappy tha..! Lekin kya karun.. It just popped in my head and I continued writing as it came in my head. Nothing was pre-written. All of this was impromptu.

Hope ki kuch toh bakwaas pasand aayi hogi?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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:) res!

im in ! no more resrvd!!
yaaahooo!!! im d frst 2 cmmmnt!!! yipppeee!!
ths ws sooo lovely dea!! 👏👏👏👏
awiiieee asad singing a song CORRECTION ... singing sch a beautiful song 4 zoya wooow!!
finalllyy !! atleast in ur OS he finally proposed zoya!! yipppeee!!! i ws vry sad thinking tht hel nt propose zoya in d show bt ritng ths OS uv made up ma mood dea!!
tnkooo 4 ritng ths!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res


I loved the use of the song so aptly.
Super sweet OS Issey kehtey hain 👏

P.s link to the song, play this in background n read guys😃
Edited by blueflames - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I soo want Asad to sing a song for Zoe..😃 Loved it!!❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chalo story main to propose kiya... Vry nyc
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww that was soo sweet!
Loved it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa

:) res!


</strong>
im in ! no more resrvd!!
yaaahooo!!! im d frst 2 cmmmnt!!! yipppeee!! <img src="http://www.laymarks.com/l/m/m022.gif" alt="" />

ths ws sooo lovely dea!! 👏

awiiieee asad singing a song CORRECTION ... singing sch a beautiful song 4 zoya wooow!! <img src="http://www.laymarks.com/l/m/m016.gif" alt="" />


finalllyy !! atleast in ur OS he finally proposed zoya!! yipppeee!!! i ws vry sad thinking tht hel nt propose zoya in d show bt ritng ths OS uv made up ma mood dea!! <img src="http://www.laymarks.com/l/m/m004.gif" alt="" />



<strong>tnkooo 4 ritng ths!! <img src="http://www.laymarks.com/l/kk/40.gif" alt="" />



Thank you SOOO much!! I'm really glad you liked it... :)
Haan yaar, main bhi thak gayi thi show mein dekhte dekhte proposal har baar kaise fail ho jaata hai...
Lekin one thing I know for sure...

Jab bhi Asad karega na... He'll surpass all our expectations... And it'll be kickass. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: blueflames

Res



I loved the use of the song so aptly.
Super sweet OS Issey kehtey hain👏

P.s link to the song, play this in background n read guys😃



Thank you... :)
Aww.. Thanks!

Thanks for posting the link as well... Mujhe toh yaad hi nai tha.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks. :)
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Originally posted by: ..-AsYa-..

I soo want Asad to sing a song for Zoe..😃 Loved it!!❤️



Mee too!!!
Thanks. :)

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