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Laizu Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

When I read your this story, then I have no words to praise except this

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sweetone

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

i am so in love with this story even though this is my first time of commenting. you're really doing a great job. more ink to your pen and a very big thumbs up. and please, i have one humble request, please can you update everyday. please, please and please.

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Jassieg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

Wow..I m loving it..though I fear for zoya..I know that asad will save her but still the drama that will take place...is just not going well with me...if u know wat I mean...

Loved the discussion of young asad to his mother about naming the baby Zoya.

Now he has another girl named zoya in his life..I hope asad and zoya meet without zoya having fear in her.

Hope you post the next chapter soon.

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

I hope Asad keeps Zoya safe..😔 Continue soon!!❤️

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kiran khurana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

That was superb. Who is this 'sir'??? Hopefully we'll fine out soon. Noor and Najma convo was funny. I can totally imagine me and my bestie doing all that:P Noor is such a sweetheart still:D Zoya didn't accept the card? :( Asad the reason you can't stop thinking about her is cuz she's the one for you bigboy! Ayaan is so nice adn LOL! He's surprised at Asad's behavior. Just wait and watch what happens next Ayaan Miyan!;) OH MY GOD! That lady called told him she wants the girl back!:( NO! Im sure Asad won't let her go!

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youth_showsfan

@youth_showsfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

hey sorry for late reply was busy

coming to all d updates

they were amazing

totally loved them

loving d way story is progressing

its becoming interesting day by day

noor was zoyas friend na? now she s najmas

friend oohh everyone seems to get connected

wrong move they r unleashing d lion n asad

by asking zoya back

update super soon

nd thnx for d pmz

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hilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

LOVING the updates, dammit !
they're just out of the world, fantastic.

although.. this is a dark FF... it gets me all happy seeing that you've updated. seriously loving the turn that you've made .. a thoughtful, yet still depressed asad. i'm glad that he's not as vicious as he was in the beginning and his mind has sidetracked a bit .. to Zoe.

Awh @ the flashbacks :'( he's really tormented . Awh @ najma as well :( they're all tortured someway or the other.
oh man ... now 'they' want Zo back ?! she just got sparked with hope. I love how thankful she is .

can't wait for the next update ! you're rockingg this <33

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Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

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