OS : - I WANT TO BE WITH YOU

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys i m new to writing smthng on asya its my 1st attempt, hope u guys lyk it :-) 😊 The sun rises and everyone in the khan manson wakeup with new hope. Dishad planed for all the rasam that would be happen in asad and zoya's wedding, nazma planed hw she dressed up on her bhaijan and her best frnds all wedding function,tanver thought how can she get out zoya frm asad's lyf and asad zoya thnk same thng hw they told dilshad that they didnt want to married each other. On the breakfast table everybody have their breakfast happily in the mean while dilshad said " asad,zoya maine aj tm dono ke lie ek function rakha hai jahan sb log hone wali jode ko apni duae dete hai toh tm dono aj sham ko ready reh jana ok ". Dilshad said ths with a beautiful smile. After hearing her asad and zoya look at each other then asad said "ammi aj meri ek imp meeting hai toh jana padega ". Dilshad is no mood of hearing him she argue with asad and finaly make him agree for the function. Tanveer is very angry on dilshad and she the leave the dinning by excusing she isnt feeling well and want to take rest. Here Asad goes to zoya's room to plan with her how can they cancel the wedding bt not find her. Then he ask najma " tamtar where is ms.faruqi". Najma said " bhaijan unko kuch kam tha toh wo highway ke sight se kahin jani wali hai" then asad get confuse and asked najma to go. Asad said to himself " aisa kya jaruri kam agaya miss faruqi ko and itni dur akele chale gaye atleast she should tel me". Then he open the tv for news, the news flash on his tv screen shock him. It shows two bus accident on highway sight 70%people dead in the accident and the rests condition is very serious. He cant wait for a second and rush in hurry, he drive his car very fast and only one thng pray zoya shouldnt in those bus. He reach at the spot and didnt find zoya anywhere then ask the nurses they said noother patient is here then suddenly one nurse voice caught thier attention she said " are wahan niche koe ladki giri hue hai". Asad run in rush and the girl's whom he look infrnt of hm he cant belive that is his zoya. Tear come to his eyes and he wishper "zoya". He sat on his knee and take her to his arms, "zoya utho... Yeh kya hoga zoya... Yeh meri pari ke chehre ko kya ho gaya... Plz zoya utho..." asad said almost screamingly. One nurse check her and said " i m sory she is dead". Then asad said angrily " shut up u dont knw anythng nw i take her to the hospital and she will be fine. Then asad didnt listen anyone and take her to the near hospital the doctor first cleanup zoya's face whch covered with blood they heat her chest bt she didnt respond anythng. Then they said sory sir she is no more. Asad rush to her and puling her close to him and huged her tight and said in pain"zoya tm mujhse bina nikah kei nei ja sakti na chalo comon get up". Here dilshad,najma and tanver come. Dilshad and njama cried in a brust. Suddenly he feel zoya move her hand and she try to breath. Some hope come to him and he caled the doctors. They are very surprised and happy. They did zoya's operation and its sucesful. The doctor said to asad 'its ur love and prayers that gve her a new lyf'. Asad take sme breath nw. Finaly zoya come to sense dilshad and najma are so happy r going to meet her but tanver leave frm there. Dilshad tel zoya how much asad was woried for her that he didnt to the doctor. Zoya is smehw happy on hearing that. After dilshad and najma leaving zoya asad came to her zoya saw hm and both have tear in their eyes. Asad sit beside her and zoya suddenly hugged him. Asad also didnt want her far frm hm he hug her tightly and in a heavy tone "mujhe batake nei jasakte the agar aj tmhe kuch ho jata toh main dushri pari kahan se lata". Zoya slightly smile on hs cute confeson and buried her face on hs chest. Then again asad starts" zoya i want be with u forever, never ever left me otherwise i will die" zoya suddenly kept her hand on hs mouth and said" i m always with u asad". "Hmmm toh ready raheye miss. Zoya faruqi, mrs.asad ahmad khan banneke lie and jaldi thk ho jayege kyn ki 5 din bad hamara nikal hai". Zoya is on cloud nine after hearing it frm asad and hugged him tightly and said " realy mr.khan i m so happy that i cant explain u". Asad said "me too zoya and tmhare muh se asad jyada suit karta hai". Zoya blushing on her akdu ahmad khan's confesion and kissed on his chest. Asad cupped her face and kissed on her forhead" I LOVE U ZOYA"he said in a very romantic voice. Zoya close her eyes and said "I LOVE U TOO ASAD". A small smil curved on asad's lip and they both staring each other. Najma and dilshad show the love bird and said "hume yeh nikah QUBOOL HAI". They all laugh and both dilshad and najma hugged asya. So here is my small attempt . All the coments r accepted :-P. Its my 1st time so if u guys can than forgve my mistakes :-).
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nknaini thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os...will u continue it?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting!! Hope zoya is fine...
Are u continuing??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nknaini

awesome os...will u continue it?

thank u so much dear . Both zoya and asad confesed to each other. I edited it nw check it :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arhi87

Interesting!! Hope zoya is fine...
Are u continuing??

thank u so much :-). Plz read it properly i end it on a happy note :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: stellababes

That was really good!

😊 thank u dear :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: krishna_str

nice os dear👍🏼

thank u so much :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww that was so sweet! Loved it! Are gonna continue or leave it at this? ...I think you should continue...😉 😆 loll
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Posted: 12 years ago
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tu toh geyi... ArjuHi ka upload ki nehi ki qubal hai ka likhli...katttiii :( :(

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