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Posted: 12 years ago
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I m happily crazy right now ...103 likes oh man seriously ...my century !! I m so so so happy..thanx for hitting the like button .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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$%UPDATE %$.
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After above 100 likes and so many comments , my heart really felt to become good again ..and i m posting the next part of my os which i think is turned into ss .
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I think this part is boring but kindly bear with me ..plzzz .
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Now the 2nd part
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~THE NEXT MORNING~.
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.In the morning
the sun rays disturb the sleep of asad and zoya .asad felt something wet on his neck and zoya wet something wet on her forehead and with half eyed open still in sleepy mode asad realised zoya's lips on his neck and zoya realised asad's lips on her forehead .
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Both suddenly with a jerk opened their eyes and jumped off the couch and stand.
.asad: aap ????yahan ??.
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Zoya :woh main woh main...
Asad: woh main kya ? Aap mere saath is couch pe kya kar rahi thi .
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Zoya(without thinking ) so rahi thi mr.khan .
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Asad: woh toh mujhe bhi pata hai but u were on bed and how u landed here ???how
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Zoya : aap itna overreact kyu kar rahe hai ..raat mein baarish hone lagi and u were disturbed by the raindrops so i thought to close the window and in that process i landed there and ur hand which is steel hard not allowed me to move out from there .
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Asad: who told u to care for me ms.faaroquie ?.
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This sentence surely tore zoya's heart but somehow she managed her emotions from being projected .
.Zoya: woh mr.khan ..(then suddenly tigress zoya returned ) theek hi kehte hai log ki bhalaai aur aachai ka toh zamaana hi nahi raha .ek toh aapki neend bachai maine aur aap hai ki mujhpe hi chillai ja rahe hai .
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Asad: u r just impossible .
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Zoya: and u r insensitive and insane too .
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Asad: u call me insane .how u dare to call me that ?.
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Mujhe insane kehti hai aur khud yeh kya pehen rakha hai aapne .?( hinting towards her nighty ).
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Zoya: ja kar apni ammi se poochiye unhone hi mujhe diya hai warna mujhe bhi koi shauq nahi hai apne paagal pati ko seduce karne ka !.
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Asad: what ??? .
Zoya : kuch nahi mr.emotionally challenged person .
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Asad : aap jaa kar yeh change karengi ya nahi .
.zoya: nahi ...
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Asad: what and i mean why??.
.zoya: bcoz i hv no clothes here in ur room and i can't get out of this room like this .
Asad: then what i can do ? .
.zoya: i hv packed by suitcase VERY NEATLY in my room u just have to bring it here plzzz mr.khan .
.Asad : okay!! I m going to fetch ur bag .
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Asad went off his room .
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Asad reached zoya's room and saw two suitcases but still open clothes half lying inside half outside .none of clothes properly folded.toal mess .
.asad: oh now this is VERY NEAT in the zoya farroquie's dictionary . ...ms .messy farroquie ..u call this packing .abhi aapko batata hoon.
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Then asad, in little angry mood just dragged her suitacase as it was there without carrying it just dragging
.when asad reached the door of his room and opened it .he was shocked to see zoya on his bed and
jumping and screaming .
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Asad reached near the bed and
asad: ms.faaroquie yeh aap kya kar rahi hai ...(before he could complete the sentence ) .
Zoya jumped screaming cockroach!! cockroach!! and her feet tangled in the bed covers and she finally fell down in the strongest arms of asad .
.asad was just amazed to carry her , he thought how perfectly she fitted into his arms .he kept staring at her and holding her tightly around her petite waist!.
Zoya's body which was quite exopsed due to her dress was now totally under the strong gaze of asad's eyes .
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Zoya whose eyes were closed due to fear slowly opened her eyes ...and her cheeks start becoming red hott due to the intense gaze of asad on her .
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Zoya(breaking this moment) : woh mr.khan actually mujhe cockroach se darr lagta hai .!
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Asad(returning to his reality): i know ms.faaroquie ...but any way i hv brought ur bags and that was surely very neatly packed ..(asad forget to scold her)..just as neat which was quite expected from ur side .
For now i m going to guest room to get ready for office , u get ready here ! .
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Asad moved to his wardrobe took his suit and moved out of his room .
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NOW ON BREAKFAST TABLE .
asad ( all ready) good morning ammi ! And good morning tamatar !
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Ammi: good morning asad ! .
Najma: good morning bhaijaan ! .
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Asad: aaj mujhe jaldi office jana hai ek important deal hai .
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Edited by sgksg3 - 12 years ago
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Continued ::::
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Ammi : oh ! Tabhi main sochoo koi bhi dulha apne suhaagraat ke agle din itni jaldi kaise uth gaya .
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But jab dulha inki tarah workalcoholic ho to kehna hi kya ?? .
Waise meri bahu kahan hai ?.
Asad: taiyaar ho rahi hongi ms .faaroquie.
.ammi :ms.faaroquie what ?? Asad call her mrs.khan or zoya or anything u like ! But not ms.faaroquie she is ur wife now .

Asad: ammi woh ...
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Najma: bhaijaan aap chahe to bhabhi ko sweety, jaanu darling, sweetheart , kuch bhi bol sakte hai ...hai na ammi ! .
Ammi nodded .
Asad: tamatar ,u r becoming spoilt .
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Ammi: she is saying correct ..i think u should prefer jaanu for calling zoya and dilshaad chuckled .
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Asad: ammi aap bhi!! Kya kamaal ki family mili hai mujhe !!!.
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And tamatar mujhe lagta hai yeh sab ms.faar...i mean mrs..kha...i mean zoya ki sangat ka asar hai ..u r becoming spoilt and u must stay away from her .
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Ammi: haan najma u must stay away from her , tabhi toh asad uske kareeb reh paayega !!!samjhi tum .
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Asad: ammi !!! .
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Ammi: mr.bhuddu ahmed khan ab jaao meri zoya ko bulaa kar laao .
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Asad: kyun woh khud nahi aa sakti kya ?.
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Ammi: shayad use koi problem ho that's why she is late .go and bring her .
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Asad(mumbling): problem ko problem kaise ho sakti hai ..and then He moved towards his room to see the cause of this late -lateefi from zoya .
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Asad entered his room , zoya !! Zoya! Kahan ho tum ..and then he torned towards his wardrobe portion and was stunned !!
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.zoya was struggling hard to tie the dori of her blouse ..her bare back ,her milky white skin prevented asad even from blinking his eyes for a microsecond ..he slowly and slowly move towards her .
She was so busy in the clumsy dori that she didn't realized his presence nor heard his voice .
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Asad reached close and closer to her and suddenly took the sting from her hands .she gulped at his mere touch on her hands .
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Asad pulled the string of blouse which make the blouse tighter in front and zoya made a soft voice and looked upwards .
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Asad was not in mood to tie the knot so fastly he was enjoying the moment ,He moved his cold fingers on her bare back and she felt a shiver down her spine .
Asad loved the way her body reacted to his touch .he put his chin on her nape and kissed there .
Zoya's heartbeat incraesed at a phenomenal rate her breasts start heaving up and down more fastly .
.asad start a trail of wet kisses down her nape and back .he started sliding the sleeves of blouse off her shoulder ...zoya couldn't able to take it anymore and she turned and hugged him tighltly .
Asad hold her by her shoulder and put a finger under her chin and make her look into his eyes .
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She opened her eyes and her eyes met the loving eyes of asad ...asad tilted towards her and cupped her face ..he tilted and their lips were not even centimetres away ...
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Just then the wall clock struck 9 ..and it started sound of tin tin ...9 times .
.Asad came back into reality and turned her back and tied the knot urgently without saying anything in a gr8 hurry ...
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And he moved towards other side and put his hands on his forehead(his trademark) ..thinking and getting embarrassed on the moment they just shared some moments back .
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Here Zoya still could not belive that what happened a few minutes back was real or just a dream !! She kicked her mind and thought its all fake for mr.khan and there is no emotions involved from his side .and zoya turned towards asad
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Zoya: mr.khan i know its all fake for u and there is no emotions involved from ur side ..so the things which happened some moments back is just making it hard to continue this all fake and so called marriage .
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Asad: ya i mean .i m sorry i must take care next time and should refrain myself from such weak moments .
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Zoya: not only u i should also take care .
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And mr.khan go for ur office unless u will get late for ur meeting and u will put all blame on me !.
.Asad: i never put blame on u unless u r involved !
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Zoya: get a life mr.khan i m not involved in every problem but u always play blame game with me .
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Asad: u r truely a problem maget , every problem finds ur address even faster than a pizza delivery boy ! .
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Zoya: mr.khan thats enough ..u r getting late bcoz of u now .
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Asad: no not bcoz of me bcoz of u and ur silly saree .
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And by the way if u r not able to handle a string why u putting it on ??.
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Edited by sgksg3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continued::
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Zoya: mr.khan for ur kind info i m mrs.zoya asad ahmed khan and on my first day of married life u expect me to wear jeans !.
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Asad felt happy on hearing her calling herself as mrs.zoya asad ahmed khan .
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Zoya: and mr.khan i hv mind to think what i should wear .understood! .
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Asad : look who is talking abt mind ...!!! And he moved out of his room and mumbed INCREDIBLY FOOLISH !!! .
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zoya :sun liya maine !!!! what he thinks of himself ..aaj aap ghar aaiye phir aapko pata chalta hai dimaag kise kehte hai mr.jahapanah six packs !!!.

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.2nd part ends !!!!! Now wait for asad to come back from office !!!.
Tell me how was it !!
I know u must be feeling like throwing chappals. and tomatoes but i will accept then happily also .
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Plzz do comment and if by the way u liked it plzz hit the like button and i m eagerly waiting for love criticise ,advice, comments and likes !!! .
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And one thing more should i continue it or not !!!?????
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.NOTE :
Now this os is turned into a ss then plzz suggest a title as suhaagraat was just the title of OS
Edited by sgksg3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I m loving what u are writing, please pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome great update and the romantic scene too
Edited by Asyalover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely! pls pm when you update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mizzundaztud

I m loving what u are writing, please pm me when u update

thanx for ur comment ..i will definetely pm u next time
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asyalover

Awesome dreat update and the romantic scene too

thanx for liking it !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: niki_12

lovely! pls pm when you update :)

thanx and i will pm u next time

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