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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Loved it!!! I wonder who Humaira chose for Zoya!! Sounds good! I hope Asad doesn't accuse Zoya for taking his journal on purpose!!

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

I guess Asad is Zoya's date..😆 Continue soon!!😉

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

This is a beautiful story. I really really really LOVE how it's in first person and from both of their points of view. You connect the dots from each perspective so beautifully and seamlessly. And I also appreciate the flashbacks at the beginning of each chapter.

I had a feeling from the prologue that I would love this story, and indeed I was right. I LOVE IT.

Their past is so sad and I like that's not just Zoya's but also Asad's. Gives a whole new meaning to "everyone has skeletons in their closet." Everyone has baggage, and this story is a prime example.

I also love how your incorporated Zoya being an orphan into this, and that in this one, she's the darker character, versus how it is in the show, where it's Asad. It's certainly an interesting turn of events.

Sooo a daaance, huh? Hmm I'm assuming Asad is her Date? Since Humeira is dating Ayaan, and Ayaan and Asad are best buds 😃 Is it? Is it? IS IT!?

Waiting anxiously for the next update! Please PM me when you do! (If you PM, of course!)

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Nandini

@Nandini25

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Wow nyc part. W8ing to know what hapnd to Nazma. update soon.

Edited by sweetshera - 12 years ago

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crazzychips

@crazzychips

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

nice update tanya 👍🏼
waiting for the next part
who's zoya's date? is it asad ? maybe someother guy because i dnt think you will hook'em up this fast. well it would be awesome if they went together.
and TANVEER ...😡 she will never leave him right?
this is going to be fun
plz update soon

chipps