#1 AsYa(KaBhi)FF: Fallen in the Trap of Love (link to #2 pg 148)

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Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#671

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

you loved it right !! i told you that you'll like it !!😛
it's one of my fav too
i just loved it !!!😳
ishq bulaava & zehanaseeb are just awesome ! these two songs are the whole reason i watched the movie!!!!

Yeah! I like zehnaseeb but ishq bulaava is just awesome! I luvd manchala too, I keep singing those songs, I just love those 2 songs!

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kiki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#672

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..

Yeah! I like zehnaseeb but ishq bulaava is just awesome! I luvd manchala too, I keep singing those songs, I just love those 2 songs!

yup !!
gotta say ! all the songs in HTP is just awesome !!
btw did you went to see the movie today ???

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Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#673

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

a centuary !!!!😲😲
well anyway that's not too shocking in your case 😆it's pretty short time for you ! " sighs dramatically " so i think i'll survive !!😆

ummm ! so

😆 Well I assure u, we'll both live long enough to read my bakwaas wala updt 😆.

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Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

yup !!
gotta say ! all the songs in HTP is just awesome !!
btw did you went to see the movie today ???

Not today, a couple days back on the tatasky showcase thing.

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Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#675

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-
ummm !!!
so thursday it is ??
it's kinda like 4 day's away !!

and by the way even if you couldn't update then it's allright !
i can wait !😛
after all i am -waitingforyou- right !!😆

I'll updt sooner if I can but u know me 😆.

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kiki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#676

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..

I'll updt sooner if I can but u know me 😆.

yeah yeah !
i know you too well !!😆

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kiki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#677

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..

😆 Well I assure u, we'll both live long enough to read my bakwaas wala updt 😆.

now where's that AK47 of mine !😡😡 i need to shoot someone and that too quickly before i get eaten by her dog !!
oye kiddo !! i'm warning you for the last time !!!😡
never ever call your works bakwaas !
you write so nicely dude !!
you have future girl !!!!yes dude i'm telling the truth ! " nodds my head vigurously "

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kiki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#678

well i do pray to the Almighty that we both may live looonggg enough to read your next update !😆🤣

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Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#679

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

now where's that AK47 of mine !😡😡 i need to shoot someone and that too quickly before i get eaten by her dog !!
oye kiddo !! i'm warning you for the last time !!!😡
never ever call your works bakwaas !
you write so nicely dude !!
you have future girl !!!!yes dude i'm telling the truth ! " nodds my head vigurously "

🤢

U really have a huge crush on ak47s don't u?😆

Thank u dude! But u know what? A yr back I used to be so full of myslef thinking that I was really gr8 in writing n all that, but a couple of months back I just read through the 1st chapter of this ff, which also happens to be the very 1st work of mine on public ever. And well, I didn't know whether I had to laugh at myself or cry for thinking that, that utterly rubbish standard of writing was the writing that I once used to be proud abt. But over the months I came across some fantastically amazing writers on this forum n I must I've learnt quite a bit from their fantabulous work. So I've improved a lil, thnx to the awesome writers on this forum whose work I follow but I'm still getting there. I'm not really there yet if u know what I mean.

Ok I think I bored u with my long long speech. I'm gonna stop now, sorry, the nelson mandela side of me got over me a lil 😆.

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kiki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#680

^ ahhh !! i totally understand dude !don't worry i love long speeches😆
but you know what you really write pretty well !
i am really honest when i say this !
you are doing a pretty good job yourself !
no one is perfect when they begin ! perfection is achieved through practice !so i would advice you to keep on writing !

you know what when i first read your ff and learned that you were just 13 i was quite impressed !!yes i am telling you the truth !
at that time no 13 year old i knew could write that well like you!
i get really good grades for english but hell man even i can't write like you dude !you write really well !!

i'm not a good writer but i sure am a good reader, aint i??😆