AsYa SS: |Busted| (Epilogue, Page 54, Complete) - Page 24

Loved it! Please update soon!😃

Thank you for another lovely update 😊 And I am so glad you did it today when we had such a boring episode. This was so much fun. How I wish we get to see something similar in the show regarding Tanveer getting caught. The shirt scene was really cute. 😳 And I loved that part too where Asad didn't know how to distract Tanveer and ended up saying how nice her dupatta looks. 😆

WOW WOW WOW . WISH THIS COULD HAPPEN IN THE SHOW .THAT WAS SO LOVELY 😊. THAT 🤬 TANVEER 😡. FINALLY SHE IS OUT OF KHAN'S MANSION . I AM SO PROUD OF ZOYA . SUCH A SWEET HEART. HOPE SHE WILL BE FINE . AND FINALLY ASAD CONFESSED HIS LOVE FOR HIS ZOYA. LOVELY WRITTEN 👏. PLEASE CONTINUE ASAP . CAN'T WAIT SO LONG FOR NEXT UPDATE .

Great job. Better track than the real show! 👏

Wowww...I m so in love with this...you know I always look forward to read ur story..it's the best. I m sure ntn will happen to zoya..asad finally confessed😳

I gave up trying to reserve! But wooop, this was fantastic girrrlll! I loved it soo soo much! I absolutely love the way you write, 'i must cleanse myself' cracked me up real bad... Nearly choked myself eating my apple! Everything was just amazing, it was funny, emotional and romantic all at once! Only you can write something so beautiful! Yaaayyy busteddd! I hope this happens in the serial!
Like i said, you always leave me speechless, this was sooo beautiful... This SS is one of my favourite, never end it purleaasseee! Turn it into an FF! I love you for giving us such a wonderful chapter, keeep up the amazing work! I want the next paartt asaaap! Ahaha, let me guess nothing has happened to Zoya, he was panicking for no reason! Loool I loved Asad in this, I'm absolutely madly in love with this sexxxy guy!

Ooohh yeahhh, couldn't comment on the previous two parts, revision :( but but but I read them straight away when I got your email, they absolutely make my day! Revision could go to hell! Loools

Keeep rocking girll... Thank you for the PM, much lovesss xoxoxooxoxo

awesome !!! thanks for the pm :)

wow it was great ...love the way Tanveer got busted...haha here Asya busted Tanveer but Candice can never bust Pheneas and Ferb. lol the busted song in P&F.

Awesome update!!!!!! Loved it!!!!! Can't asya actually do this in the show.