AsYa OS -The Only One For Me Pt3-Page19 *Complete*

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Nice story; love the college setting...

Just one thing on pg 1, there is Arnav instead of Asad; I think when Zoya is narrating abt Tannu.

-Sona

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Asmaa

@Asma-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

You are so mean ! You can't let us like that you really need to update soon
I love this Os !!!

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

😃

looking forward to next part so much

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Arnavdewaani

@Arnavdewaani

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Dearest Supriya

no offence ...but u r going to be the death of me...meri dil ki dhadkan abhi bhi tez daur rahi hai. yahan peh koi rukhta hai bhala ?

waiting...with bated breath ...

Edited by Arnavdewaani - 12 years ago

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Awesome Romantic Update... Loved it alot... My favourite part is...

"I wanted to be alone"

"But you are not. I am here too!"

"I mean I wanted us to be alone"

Waiting for next update...Continue soon...Thnx for PM...Mariam...

Edited by Khushi2187 - 12 years ago

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adiya1714

@adiya1714

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

That was amazing! They are so cute together! I wonder why Asad even is with Tanveer. Or maybe it was just a rumor to make Zoya jealous. Can't wait for the next part! Thanks for the pm 😃

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

I have just now read both the parts and they have been written very well.

So Asad likes her and so does Zoya, but she has no idea abt his feelings.

What was Tanveer talking abt then? She must be spouting lies then.

Loved the way the story is shaping.

Plz can u PM me whenever u update next?

I am sending u a buddy req.

Swati.

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Tanya

@OceanicHeart.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

This was amazing

Loved it 😳

Continue sooon

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supriya.ipkknd

@supriya.ipkknd

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: rosamale
Wow!!!👏 What a twist! i never anticipated that Asad will ask her out for the prom😳 my favourite part is

"I wanted to be alone"
"But you are not. I am here too!"
"I mean I wanted us to be alone"
continue soon. want to knw why he proposed Tanveer. alsowant to knw what he want to tell Zoya

Aww... My favourite part wil be the one I'll write in Part 3 😆