FF- ~Negotiation~ Part 4 - pg 15 (3/5) - Page 4

Originally posted by: rm23

This sounds very intriguing, really want to read more!
Great concept, really!
Please PM me when you update!

thank you for the lovely comment. i sure wil add you.
i am glad you all liking the story

loved the start

i have read all your works and so i can defo tell your writing style is amazing in this FF particularly

Originally posted by: NANDY_BRU

loved the start

i have read all your works and so i can defo tell your writing style is amazing in this FF particularly

thanks :D
updating next part :)

Originally posted by: -Stephanie-

Whoa.. Safi..
Very well written.. Love the concept..
Read the whole update in one breath.. it had me breathless.. :)

Zoya have grown up with negotiation since childhood, if you Want something there are always prize to pay. Her small mind still fumbled around the slavery business, the place this man have brought her from, giving in the last wealth she posed. The safe place she thought it would have safe to hold this strangers hand. What she was thinking? She have dug a death hollow. Playing with poison. Buying her with million, he wouldn't let go this easily. Life is a gamble of negotiation...

Love the way you've written it.. :)
Keep up the good work.. :D
Dying to read more...!!!!!!!! :D

thats so sweet
thank you so much

xxx

Originally posted by: spvd

will u post this in Maaneetian version?

hi, no sorry, its only for them..
:(xx

Originally posted by: Ms.Fix-it-all

Dis is jst WOW..!! I mean amazing concept...something really lky interesting 1...super duper lky 4 this 1...plz continue asap...n PM me plz

thank you :)

thank you for all the lovely comments.. :)
next part on its way :)

Zoya is misunderstanding Asad but what to do she is having bad times ands Akaadu Ahmed khan is not helping her.

I bet the story is gonna rock as the start is amazing

Res