A Change of Heart: An AsYa SS: Ch6 Pg6: ON HIATUS

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b
Loved the last update. I like the way you've shown Asad falling in love, struggling to accept it and yet being Asad! Stayed true to his character! Shall wait for the next part!

Thank you! I was hoping it came through that way :)

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kandygrover

@kandygrover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Awesome. Loved it. Pm me when you update please.

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Vaishnavi

@vaishnavi31

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

cant believe Ididnt comment on this earlier 😲 you see im now clearing out my inbox lol thanks for your Pm😊 and i absolutely LOVEDDD ittt👏 loved all partss esp 5 ever since ive been watching qubool hai always wanted a scene where she returns his mask and he does so with her earring and yaarr this fulfilled that a nice bigg hug for you!🤗 hahah continue soon and plz PM when you update😊

Edited by vaishnavi31 - 12 years ago

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webuser7

@webuser7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

I read all the chapters in one sitting. Very nice writing style!

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

sooo nice dear

update soon

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

nice one!! good to c Asad openning up to Zoya

update soon...

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Geetha

@Geet_Ha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Loved it 😊 Please continue soon

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Dee

@Enchantress

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

This is a nice story. I'l love to read it. Do pm me whenever you update.

~Dee~

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roses.09

@roses.09

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Really liked the parts so far...the pace of the ss is good with right balance of emotions n dialogues. Would like to see how his interaction with his family is changing as mentioned by u in first update.. also i like zoya n aayan friendship so would you be willing to show tht n write something abt how seeing them has inspired asad to be a bit more carefree..(not jealous.. But somewhat have a trio moment)

Hope tht makes sense...
Good ss for far (u surely can write) 😊