asya ss never leave me again

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello everyone!
this is my first ss on asya.plz read and tell me whether i should continue it or not.


asad's mansion
living room.

"Thank you so much Mr.Khan.i didn't knw kii aap meri itni madad kare ge.thank you so much" zoya said.holding back her tears.she took the tickets from his hands and ran to her room.Asad also had tears in his eyes ready to fall at any minute.while tanveer had a satisfied smile on her face.she quickly erased her smile and said "Jammie".By that voice he came to his senses and said "hmm.Tannu tumhe kuch kehna tha kya." "haan jammie.wo humhe kuch kaam hai.issi liye humbahar jaarahe hai.hume aaney mein todhi der ho jayege.""its okay tannu.take you time."saying this he stormed into his room.Tanveer in her mind"wah tanveer wah.kya khel kehla hai tumne.bas ek baar zoya yaha se chalejaye. us kii baad asad mera ho jayega .hamesha ki liye."she smirked

so enough of this bakwaas.plz tell me whether i should continue this or not.

credit for pic goes to :Annie (Ananya)(PhoenixRadar)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hahahaha... Girl, iske aage bhi toh kuch likh!!! That was just the prologue it seems!!!
Of course it's a good start, since you also gave us Tanveer's thought process.

You have to continue of course!! XP

Annie😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

Hahahaha... Girl, iske aage bhi toh kuch likh!!! That was just the prologue it seems!!!

Of course it's a good start, since you also gave us Tanveer's thought process.

You have to continue of course!! XP

Annie😆




thanks annie😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chinnu.Munnu

Good Start..continue soon.




thank you😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok.i will cont.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yup.i will cont.soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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man u should really continue soon

plz i am begging u

and plz add me to ur pm list...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: malini1996

man u should really continue soon

plz i am begging u

and plz add me to ur pm list...



ok.i will continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geet_Ha

Please continue 😊



yes i will.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yup i will

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