New Asya SS:Journey To The Heart - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lol, this is damn damn good! :)

Update as soon as you can! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Ayesha,
Welcome to the forum! Like the beginning so far, please continue soon.
~Sophie :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u so much guys for your lovely comments i will update tomorrow love u all
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Awesome start continue and update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start
Liking it, no loving it
Continue soon
<3 Farhana
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really nice plzz do continue asap!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guyz i am back with the story...firstly thank you to all of them who have read my story and commented or hit a like button. Now i dont know how you all will react after reading this part so im ready for your juttas chappals ande n blahhh blahh. Please leave your comments even if its not good🤢. Here it goes

Part 2:

After breakfast Zoya and Najma were watching a movie.Zoya had her mouth stuffed with chips and was blabbering something about the movie.Najma dint get a word of it so she ignored her talks and concentrated on the movie.In the movie hero was comforting his lady love that everything will now be fine,seeing this zoya was reminded of her and Mr Khans first meeting.

Flashback:

Zoya was running wearing a bridal dress.Yes she had escaped from her wedding.She was to marry a man whom she wasn't familiar with leave alone familiar she dint even meet him once.She dint need to be bonded in a relationship where there was no love.She had come to India for a purpose not to marry.She was not ready for her biggest moment in life.And thus she started running,running from the goons that were following her to take her back to that hell...to a wedding in which there was no love no concern.She prayed Allah to help her and show her some way.As if Allah answered her prayers she saw an office.She concluded that it was the safest place for her as it was full of people and no goon will try to enter here.She entered it and strolled around looking at the interior.As she strolled around there was suddenly glancing everywhere. Poeple gazed at her as if she had come from a different world.To avoid this shocking eyeballs zoya entered a room she found nearby.

As she entered the room a sweet aroma filled her nostrils.As she glanced around she found that the room was spotless,faultless and elegant.She imagined if she should be here at the moment if it was the owners cabin what will she explain to him or her.But she dint wanted to go back to the hall where all would start staring at her again and so she sat on a chair wondering what would have happened if she had married that man.Her purpose her dreams of loving and caring man would end without even beginning.Tears started tripping down her eyes and she was lost in her thoughts.

Asad entered the room,he was flabbergasted by the sight in front of him.A girl sitting in his office was beyond his imagination.But there was something which amazed him about her.He was taken back by her beauty ,her eyes,her tears.He moved slowly toward her and cleared his throat.He stood beside her looking at her crying form.She was unaware of anybody's presence.She looked very busy in her thoughts like an wild animal active and intent.She seemed to be so much occupied. Asad noticed scars and blood oozing out from her hand.She must have been in trouble he thought.

Suddenly she felt as if someone was looking at her.She got scared thinking it might be someone from the goons and as if in a trance started shouting no leave me please leave me. Asad moved near her and her to comfort her saying that nobody will hurt her here.She looked up and he r eyes met his.They stood aside, forgetful. As if a little stunned they both were motionless barely conscious of the surroundings.They felt they have impersonal forces but which they were in contact.He became aware of the lapse.He wanted to say something but couldn't. He adjusted himself at once became normally distant.He composed himself and started shouting on her.

Asad: Who are you and what on earth are you doing in my cabin?
Zoya: Listen Mr.I don't know name... I was running for my life some goons were after me and i
but before she could even complete her sentence Asad shouted get out at once from my cabin.Zoya was shocked by this sudden change of attitude and muttered Allah miyan whats wrong with you i am in danger here and you but Asad glared at her and she said fine and left the cabin.

P.S:Sorry if there are any mistakes i dint go through it after writing.And yes im ready for all ur chappals and jootas🤢.plz tell me if i should continue it from here or not. And plzz leave comments and the ones who want to receive Pms plz send me a buddy request with one line in the comment stating PM me. Thank you guyzz waiting for your views.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: risingsea101

Nice start

Liking it, no loving it
Continue soon
<3 Farhana


Thank you farhana...im happy that u said the truth...ill try to make you love my ss.Keep reading and keep commenting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: grad2011

really nice plzz do continue asap!!!


Thank you sooo much...yes i updated it plzz leave ur comments.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Ohhhmy im so glad Ankie you liked my ss...love you please keep on reading and commenting and liking.

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