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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sahashrabdidash

this is just awesum...I am super excited...do continue soon...n dear plzz make an index :)

hmmm...sure...and the next part will be updated soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: malini1996

i read the story in one go

and it was awesome

plz do continue with part 4 and do plz plz plz send me a pm...

thanxxx but if U want the pm...then plzzz add me in ur buddy list
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for next part..
update soon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

hey guys i knew u all were waiting for the next upadate...! so here it is...!
asad was waiting at the reception and then said-yeh ladki bhi naa kitna der lagate hain taayar hone mein ..aisa lag rha hai ki apne nikaah ke liye tayyar ho rhe hai...
then he saw zoya coming towards him..in black and blue top..and her ussual jeans..
asad-mashallah...
zoya-thank u...
and then started blushing...😳😳
asad-ab chalen ki aur tayyar hona hai apko...
zoya-nhi mr.khan..bas ho gya...jitna taayar hona tha utna ho gye...
hmm...and they walk towards the car which asad has booked for them...
zoya-mr.khan app yeh gari khud drive kareenge i mean apko mumbai ke raaste patah hain...??
asad-koi shaak
z-what the...
asad-sry...mr.khan...making a puppy face to which asad smiled..showing his killer dimples
zoya-wohh..mr.khan appke bhi dimples padhte hain i mean wow..apne mujhe bataya kyun nhi..finally koi toh aisa cheez hai jo hum mein common hai...
par mr.khan ek baat kahoon...?
asad-mere naa bolne se app nhi bolenge kya..??
zoya-wow mr.khan app mujhe kitne acche tareke se jaante i m impressed...
asad-ab app bolenge..
zoya-mr.khan app na haste hue ache lagte app humesha haste raha kariye...
mujhe na appka hasta hua chehra zyada acha lagta hai na ki woh akdu ahmed khan wala jiska gussa ahar sameh naak pe hota hai..😆😆😆
asad-ho gya miss farooqi ab mein drive kar loon..ki aur kuch kehna baaki hai..
zoya-nhi app drive kijiye
and then he started to drive...
a-app ko patah hai appko kahan jaana hai..
z-nhi mein pehle baar mumbai aye hun mr.khan mujhe kaise patah ho ga app toh kai baar aye onge na mr.khan app he bataye yahan sb se achhe jagah kahan hai...??????
a-umm yahan par mariene drive hai.beach hai..jahan se hum sunset dekh sakte hai,...!

z-wow mr.khan..ap ek kaam kariye mujhe yeh saare jagah le chaliye ..
a-saare
z-haan kyun..app ne he toh kaha ki sarre jaagah aas paas hai
a-aur maine aisa kab kaha...?
z-abhi...
a-jhut mat boliye
z-plzz mr.khan..mujhe gaadi ke andar nhi baithna mujhe ajj apne pure life jeene hai..ek azzad pancheee ki tarah
a-ohk..par mere ek shart hai
z-kaise shart mr.khan..?
a-yahi ki app mujhe pareshaan nhi karenge
z-done...
and they reached to street shopping..they saw rivers...she saw...asad staring at her..
zoya-mr.khan app itne chup kyun hai..
asad-kuch nhi..app njoy kijiye
zoya-mr.khan shayad app bhul rhe hai ki mein appke sath aye hun..kisi statue ke ssath nhi..mr.khan mera na jinne ka yahi funda hai..jeena hai toh khul ke jiyo kal kisne dekha hai..so mr.khan ab byeh mayoos sa chehra hataiye aur smile kijiye...mr,jhan wo dekhye wahan par kuch hai dekhye bike...wow kitne sudar hai mr.khan mujhe woh bike chaihiye..
asad-jaiyee le lijiye
zoya-seriously mr.khan...
asad-haan just go nd take that bike...aur uske baad police station app jayega...
and starts laughing...
zoya-baad joke mr.khan..mr.khan plzz uss bike ke owner se hum ek baar jake puche ki woh hume kuch ghanto ke liye yeh bike de sakta hai
asad-theek hai chaliye
they both go and pleaded the owner to give them that bike...zoya was making puppy faces..and that owner gave him that bike but in exchande he aksed them for their car so that they cant fool them and also gave them his adress
bg music playing..choomantar frm
mere brother ki dulhan
and zoya starts..singing

Oh oh..
Oh baby oh baby
Oh baby oh baby
Oh baby oh baby
Oh..

Choomantar..
Choomantar..
Choomantar..
Choomantar..and then they reached thier destination...mariene drive...they started running towards the sea..!

and then asad starts singing

Choo..mantar ho
Aa ja chal gum ho jaye
Choo..mantar ho
Khud se hi khud kho jaye
Choo..mantar ho
Nazron mein hum na aaye

Dhoonde jahan
Hum bhi na jane
Hum hai kahan
Choole zameen se
Woh aasaman
Chal oh re oh re oh re
Chal oh re oh re
What is wrong?
Let me look

Oh oh..
Oh baby oh baby
Oh baby oh baby
Oh baby oh baby
Oh..

Are you ready for this
Are you ready for this
Woa..Woa..
Are you ready for this
Are you ready for this
Woa..Woa..

Choomantar..and then zoya starts singing putting her index finger on his lips...

Thodi si yaari yaara
Rahon se nibha le
Apne bhi toh kabhi
Apni chala le and then asad sings

Thodi si yaari yaara
Rahon se nibha le
Apne bhi toh kabhi
Apni chala le..zoya sings

Hum chale kahin
Awara hokar naape zameen
Hum dhoondhe kahin
Kuch aisa jo khoya hi nahin

Choo..mantar ho
Aa ja chal gum ho jaye
Choo..mantar ho
Khud se hi khud kho jaye
Choo..mantar ho
Nazron mein hum na aaye

O Choomantar..

O Choomantar..and then they reached the beach..juhu beach..zoya sings

Palkon ki daali pe
Joh sapne lage hai
Khwaishon ki garmi se
Woh pakne lage hai..then asad sings

Palkon ki daali pe
Joh sapne lage hai
Khwaishon ki garmi se
Woh pakne lage hai zoya sings

Hmm..ruko zara
Dekhe toh kya
Hai yeh majra..asad sings
Hmm..sabhi tarah
Khwaishon se hai
Yeh dil bhara

Choo.. mantar ho
Aa ja chal gum ho jaye
Choo.. mantar ho
Khud se hi khud kho jaye
Choo..mantar ho
Nazron mein hum na aaye

Dhoonde jahan
Hum bhi na jane
Hum hai kahan
Choole zameen se
Woh aasaman
Chal oh re oh re oh re
Chal oh re oh re
What is wrong?
Let me look

Oh oh..
Oh baby oh baby
Oh baby
Oh baby oh baby
Come on oh baby
Oh baby oh baby
Oh baby..
Oh..

Choomantar..
Choomantar..
Choomantar..
Choomantar..

so how was it...?????jutte chappals welcome.plzz leave ur comments actually guys i have changed my os name frm mission to love find its way



Edited by luvushivin1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
no cumments why my os is bad or what
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
wait a minute...lemme read n I'll cmmnt :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
hey this was grt Suru...I mean amazing!!!
Choomantar used to be my fav song before SOTY released...I really loved it...continue soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sahashrabdidash

hey this was grt Suru...I mean amazing!!!

Choomantar used to be my fav song before SOTY released...I really loved it...continue soon😃

surre sahu
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
just read all the parts...!!!
superb updates...!!!
wah asad tanveer ko chod ke zoya pe dhyan de rha h yayyy...!!!
everyone at holiday cool... loved asad's concern for zoya...!!!
song sequence was awsum...
continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: devildiva21

just read all the parts...!!!

superb updates...!!!
wah asad tanveer ko chod ke zoya pe dhyan de rha h yayyy...!!!
everyone at holiday cool... loved asad's concern for zoya...!!!
song sequence was awsum...
continue soon...!!!

thanxxx..and yaa ill continue it soon

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