AsYa OS: I Love You

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I wrote an OS, thinking of the current track, and how I want it to happen.

ENJOY =)

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Everyone's head turned as they watched the bride descending the stairs. Adorned in a red and white lehenga and various kinds of jewelry, she stood. Among-st all the eyes his eyes watched her too. He didn't look happy, no he wasn't happy. He was doing it for the sake of his mother. His eyes shifted down. He couldn't say she looked beautiful; the veil of the dupatta covered her full face. He was nervous, his heart beat thumping…he can't do this, he doesn't love her...

"…then who do you love?"

Another voice in his head said.

Completely ignoring the other voice in his head, he took in a deep breath.

It was true, who did he love? Not her, not the girl he was minutes away from getting married to, not Tanveer…. He knows who he loves, but why is it so hard to admit that fact? Even if he did, it's too late, she's gone…

"It's not too late, you know you want to just run to her" The voice in his head said again…."

Kazi: Asad Ahmed Khan kya aapko yeh nikaah Qhbool Hai?

He was pulled out of his thoughts and looked up to the awaiting faces of his mother, his sister, the kazi and many other relatives. He shifted his head a bit, seeing a motion less Tanveer besides him, on the other side of the curtain.

He closed his eyes….he's going to have to do this, he doesn't want to ruin his, Tanveer's or HER life…he has to do it

He took in a deep breath

"Qubool Nahi Hai!" He said

Those words seemed to echo all around the room, as the people around gasped. He stood up, Tanveer also stood up…

"Asad..." She whispered. He looked at her, and could tell she was crying. He looked at her apologetically and left the room

Tanveer fell back onto the bed and covered hr face, as her tears escaped her eyes.

…………………………………..

Asad sat in his car, and started driving in seconds, he had to hurry, and he had to get to her. He remembered her face before she left, the glimpse he had of her as she entered the cab, but who knew then, she was leaving…

He stopped. "You have got to be kidding me!"

He punched the wheel in anger…Traffic!

He slid his hand through his hair, yes he was desperate, and he was desperate to see her.

He closed his eyes

………………………………….

He was brought down for the nikaah, he looked here and there, but not for Tanveer, but for her. How he longed to see her face. Yes, Asad Ahmed Khan longed to see HER face, the girl he used to hate, the girl who annoyed the hell out of him, and the girl he loves…

At that exact moment he realized it. He loves her

Suddenly his head shot to the door, where she stood, getting into a cab, and for one last time she turned, her eye meeting his…. From this far, he saw the tears in her eyes, which were for him…..

His eyes looked back at the floor, as he blinked, feeling a tear escape his eye. He looked up to see the cab leave, to see HER leave.

……………………………………

The cars behind him honked louder, cursing him

"Abbey, dubara traffic bananah hai kay?" Someone yelled

At this moment he didn't care, let them curse him, he just cared about getting to the airport.

And he started driving again…. And inside he prayed to go that her flight gets delayed…

……………………………………

Her eyes looked at the fights Screen. And the word Delayed blinking next to her flight. She closed her eyes. She didn't want to stay here any longer. Out of all the times the plane had to get delayed now!

A coffee cup was put in front of her face; she looked at the person who handed her the coffee

She managed to smile, and took the cup from his hand

"Thanks Ayaan"… she whispered

He too smiled….but he also felt hurt, how could his brother do this?

If Zoya didn't tell him then, she would die inside…

"I can't believe it, bhaijaan aise kaise kar sakta hai" He said, sounding a bit pissed off.

She wiped away a tear, and smiled

"It's okay…as long as he's happy…"

Ayaan looked at her, "but your not, how can he be happy when you're here crying?"

She didn't reply, and just held the warm cup in her hands.

An announcement was made for all the passengers going to NY to report at gate 4

Both she and Ayaan stood up….

She hugged him….

"Goodbye"

"Not forever Mona darrrling…" he smiled back at her

She also managed to pull off a smile and started walking

………………………………………..

Asad's car stopped in front of the airport, not caring if it was parked correctly he ran out the car, past all the guards. The security guards all ran behind him…

Asad, dressed in his brown sherwani, ran through the airport, with armed guards chasing behind him.

Seeing Asad Ayaan's eyes widened and he too ran behind him, just to stop the guards and let his brother get to his love….

……………………………………….

Everyone around stopped what they were doing, seeing such a scene, but she kept walking, not turning back.

Asad stooped… Everyone else moved out the way…

He was panting for breath and looked at her retreating figure

"Zoya" he yelled. And she stopped in her tracks….

That was him…he's here, here yes were wide, and were glistening in tears…

She spun around, but to be tackled in a hug.

She was too shocked to react; she stood there in his embrace crying….

He pulled out of the hug and cupped her face… Her eyes met his and she felt as he slowly wiped away her tears…

Leaning his forehead against hers, he smiled

"I love you Zoya…" he whispered

He eyeballs seemed to pop out, too many surprises in one day…

Her lips slowly formed into a smile as she finally realized he was standing her and confessing….

He hugged him again, this time making sure she held him….

Ayaan who stood with the guards also smiled, and turned to the guards and make a W*F face… the guards all had tears in their eyes, he rolled his eyes

They pulled out of the hug, and totally surprising her…again, he captured her in a kiss… the nearby people "aww'ed" and "ahh'ed"

One of the guards leaned on Ayaan

"This is so emotional" He cried. Ayaan looked at him; creeped out…was this supposed to be a guard?

She held her lips and started blushing; she had never expected such a move, especially from him…

And for the last surprise, he went on his knees. She cupped her mouth knowing what is coming….

Asad: Zoya Farooqui, will you become my wife?

She started crying again and nodded, he stood up and once again she hugged him, as her spun her around in his arms….

………………………………...

Both Asad and Zoya sat in his car

Leaned down on the door and spoke thought the open glass

"Enjoy, your LOOONG drive" he winked

Both Asad and Zoya started blushing.

Hitting the car, he told them to go and they drove off…

"Inka hogaya love story set "

She stredtched his arms, and turned but to bang into someone…

The bag in her hands flew, making all the unnecessary things, lipstick, makeup, etc. fly out

His eyes widened "I am so sorry" he kneeled down to help her pick things up

"Sorry my foot" she replied

"Excuse me?" he asked

"You're excused.." she said as she rolled her eyes

Both stood up

"Why are you showing so much attitude?" he said

"Because you dropped all my things"

"At least I'm saying sorry, you should really appreciate that!"

"Whatever" She rolled her eyes

And both walked in opposite directions.

Is this the start to a new love story?

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Wow it seemed as if I'm writing an essay… how was it. Did you guys notice I only used Zoya's name only when Asad said it? Because that the only place it sounds the best from…😆

Do comment and Like

Regards, Farhana <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved It Thanks For The PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow so adorable! I loved it and the guard was so funny! Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really nice! Enjoyed it!

@ "was this supposed to be a guard" 😆

I think we will see this in the show..but with a twist..just as Asad says qubool nahi hai and rushes to find Zoya, we see Ayaan-Zoya coming out of the court, having gotten married..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was really good!!! loved it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it!
The guard was funny! 😆
Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing OS!
Loved it.. 😳
Ayaan with the guards.. 😆
AsYa are adorable.. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww this was so sweet and funny. Loved Ayaan and the guards 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hahahaahahaha! The guard 😆
ASYA were adorable! 😳
Dey ll neva chng! 🤣

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