#1 AsYa FF: Time to go back (COMPLETED)

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Sry guys was gonna update today!
But den had to urgently go 2 my bro who stays away reached hme late i hav written half of it n lemme tell u its full of asya scenes! 😳 hpe u njy it! I ll update tommo! Pakaa promise! ❤️

Luv Ani

Edited by aniiee - 12 years ago

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: AMMY12
nice part.
Cont asap.
T.c.

thank u so mch!

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Loved it, pls cont, looking to the next part

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: Anjinie
Loved it, pls cont, looking to the next part

thank u so mch 😃

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Guys i am so so so sorry! I knw m late par abhi abhi examz khatam hui! And i was parting out 🤣
So this is mostly a ASYALIOUS UPDATE!
Hpe isse padh kar aap sab muje maaf kardoge! 😆

HALL

Zoya receives a message from karan
About the address.

Zoya: mill gaya address mr. Khan kya hum chal sakte hai mai bahut exicted hoon. Bahut shopping karni hai!

Asad: hmm...mai bhi bekaaraar hoon iss trip ke liye!

Zoya: ji?

Asad: kuch nai! Mai toh ready hi hoon miss farooki! Aap dono ko hi tyaar hona hai!

Zoya: ummm...aagghh... Haan chalo najma tyaar hoke aate hai!

Najma: haan aap tyaar ho jao mai bhi aati hoon!

Zoya: haan thik hai!

ZOYA'S ROOM

Zoya got ready in a cute pink top and blue jeans which she found out after a long time afterall she was meeting her best friend after such a long time she wanted to wear the top he had gifted her when she was leaving for India. That would make him feel how much she missed her these days! After all family is chosen by god but we choose our friends right? He was special.

Zoya After getting ready was like always talking to herself about her jahaanpanah ofcouse!😆

Zoya: samjte kya hai apne aap ko? Ek toh zabardasti trip mein add on ho gaye ab tevaar dikha rahe hai.

Asad: muje kossne ka kaam ho gaya ho toh chale? Tamatar kabki aa chuki hai!

He was leaning at door since the time she was doing her bak bak! Enjoying all of it 😆

Zoya: ek ladki ke kamre mein aise aate sharam nai aati? Knock karna chahiye tha aapko.

Asad: vo mai issliye aa gaya kyunki mai samaj nai paa raha tha ki aap kapde pehen rai thi yaa unhe baana ke pehen rai thi! And yaa about the knock maine knock kiya shayad aap meri buraayi karne mein itni busy thi ki sunai nai diya hogi!

Zoya: aapse baat karna beekaar hai. Mai tyaar ho chuki hoon. Kya hum chal sakte hai?

Asad: aisa ka special hai ussmein ki itni pyaari tyaar hoke jaa rai hai?

Zoya: tareef ke liye shukriya! Haan hai special! Aapko jalan ho rai hai kya?

Asad: whatever! Najma gaadi mein hai mai bhi jaa raha hoon. Aap jaldi aaye toh aapke uss khaas dost ko thoda kam intezaar karna padega!

Zoya: kaha na aa rai hoon! Ab jaane ka kasqt karenge?

Asad: jaa hi raha tha!

She turns around and starts putting her kaajal but sees asad yet standing there staring at her.

Zoya: abhi tak yahi khade hai? Itni bhi khoobsoorat nai mai jo aise ghure jaa rahe hai!

Asad: mai...vo...bas keh raha tha ki... Vo...

Zoya: aaj hi jaana hai. Jaldi kahiye please!

Asad: yahin ki jaldi chaliye!

And finally asad leaves ! 😆

Asad goes back to the car and sits at the drivers seat. Najma had already settled at the back with her shopping list and started behaving as if she was totally into it.

Asad sighed! Maybe his tamatar knew about his feelings but this was not the right time.

Zoya walks out the house looking gorgeous as ever. Asad was staring at her when najma cleared her throat. 😆

Najma: bhaijaan janti hoon baju mein pari baithne wali hai gaadi toh chala lenge na aap?

Asad: pata hai bahut kuch jaan chuki hai tu! Muh band rakh!

Najma: aacha toh aap mante hai ki aap zoya se?

Asad: chup chap baith!

Najma: *huff*

Zoya sees no place to sit she had to sit in front 😆

Najma: aachi lag rai ho!

Zoya: thanks tamatar! Kuch logo ko thik se tareef karna bhi nai aata!
*eyeing asad*

Asad: kuch logo ke paas phisool ka waqt nai hota!
*eyeing zoya*

Najma: *sigh*
Inka kuch nai ho sakta!

Zoya: ab aap chalne ka kashqt karenge!

Asad: haan haan! Kyun nai!

Najma: aapka ladai ka daily dose ho gaya ho toh real wla chale?

Asad: hmm...

Asad starts driving! All silence for a while before our zoya speaks! (Obvio vo chup kaise reh sakti hai?)

Zoya: ye lijiye address.

Asad: rukiye!

Asad stops the car and reads the address and starts for the place.

Asad: Hum almost reached hai aap karan ko neeche aane ke liye keh dijiye!

Zoya: haan!

Zoya texts karan and he replys with a ok.

Zoya: Aa raha hai

Asad: hmm...

Asad stops near a house and says

Asad: yahi vo jagah hai.

Zoya: kahaan reh gaya ye?

A tall cutesa handsome guy enters and zoya runs from the towards him after seeing zoya he also runs towards her n hugs her!

Zoya: i missed u so so much!

Karan: me 2 yaar! Tere aalawa kisi ko paakane mein maza hi nai aata!

They break the hug and move towards the car.

Zoya: ye hai mr. Akdu ahmed khan!

Karan: aapke baare mein bahut sunna hai!

Asad: bura hi suna hoga!

Karan: nai nai tareef bhi suni hai!

Zoya: bas bahut hua ab ye hai humari pyaari najma!

Karan: hello young lady! Looking very preety! Muje toh meri seat mil gayi.

Karan went and sat on the back seat.

Najma: thanks! Hello! Aapke baare mein zoya bahut baat karti hai.

Karan: kaise nai karegi mai hoon hi aisa.

Zoya: tamatar se flirt mat karo vo bhi uske bhai ke saamne!

Karan: oops sorry! *puppy face*

Zoya again had no option but to sit ahead beside asad.

Zoya: chale mr. Khan yaa aur kissi ka bhi intezaar hai?

Asad: par aap logo ko kahaan shopping jaana hai?

Najma: bhaijaan vo bade wala shopping mall chalo na!

Asad: thik hai!

Asad starts driving.

Karan: tu mere gift kiye hue top mein hot lag rai hai.

Asad stares At him😆

Zoya: hot nai cute lag rai hoon!

Asad smiles at that statement.

Karan: haan haan bahut cute lag rai hai. Waise vo jenny yaad hai?

Zoya: haan kya hua ussko?!

Karan : arrey vo kissi african ke saath bhag gayi! Aur sammy tera purana lover. Kinna accha hai itne saal se peeche hai tere! Haan kyun nai keh deti!? Puch raha tha zoya kab aayegi and all!

Zoya: pagal hai kya muje kissi gore se shadi nai karni! 1month mein shadi 1saal mein talak! Muje toh indian banda chahiye!

Asad smiles but is irritated with the talk! Najma enjys the gossip! 🤣

Karan: milne se raha!

Zoya: kya?

Karan mera matlab mai hoon na!

Asad: muje laga aap SIRF aache dost the!?

Karan: vo kya hai nai mr. Khan chala rehta hai! Mai toh kabse keh rha hoon zoya se mujse shadi karle. I swear shadi ke baad kisi bhi ladki ke saamne eyes bhi nai uthaunga! Pakka promise!

Zoya: jaa na! Itna lucky nai hai tu!

Asad: HUM PAHUCH GAYE HAI!

Zoya: sunai deta hai!

Asad: muje nai pata tha!

Zoya: chalo chalo indian section mein chalte hai.

Najma: haan haan!

Karan: vahaan tera kya kaam?

Zoya: teri behaan ki shadi mak mast lagni chahiye nah? Chal tere liye kuch le lete hai! Mr. Khan aapko kuch lena hai?

Asad: nai! Aap dekhiye!

Zoya: as u wish!

Zoya and najma were happily finding suits for themselves. Asad and karan were in a akward situation seeing them so exicted about a mere shoppings. Girls can be weird at times!

Karan: mr. Khan aapko kya lagta ye log aaj pura shop hi kareed lenge!

Asad: lag toh yahi raha hai!

Najma: zoya ye wla try karo!

Zoya: haan mai abhi aayi!

Zoya goes to the dressing room and tries a suit. She was not able tie the strings of the back!
Zoya tried calling najma but vain.
Asad was passing by heard the voice and went there she was looking too good to be described!
Asad kept staring at her went to her and helped her with her strings! She closed her eyes and enjoyed his touch!
It was indeed magical! ❤️

Asad: ho gaya!

Zoya: hmm...umm...thank u!

Asad: your always welcome!

With that asad left a blushing zoya back!
Zoya came and najma and karan stared at her.

Najma: bahut aachi lag rai ho ye pack karlete hai!

Karan: beautiful lady will you marry me? Pleasseee!!!

With that he dramatically sat on his knees and kissed her hand!

Asad: ye public place aur vo bhi india mein!

Karan: m so sorry! Zoya ki khubsoorti mein kho gaya tha!

Zoya: *emmbarresed*
Kya kar rahe ho uth jao! Sahi keh rhe hai mr. Khan ye india hai new york nai!

Karan: soliiieee *holding ears*

Asad was furious how could karan kiss his girl! He soon had to do something! Very soon!
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This was quite a long update! Sry was making u ll wait for long!
Nxt update will be soon dnt worry guys
M gonna giv dis one a happy ending soon!

Guys plz check the UPDATED ALPHABETICALLY PM LIST ON PG 18! Check out ur names in it!

Buddy me for pms n also leave a one line comment dat u wnt a PM

Comments mein kanjussi mat karna! Pleejjj !!!!! *puppy face*

GUYS WHILE SENDING PMS I FOUND OUT THAT SOME PPL ARE IN MY PM LIST BUT NOT IN BUDDY LIST! THOSE PPL WONT RECEIVE PMS COZ I DNT KNW WHO R DEY NW! THERE R ALMOST 10 PPL! PPL ON MY BUDDY LIST WUD ONLY RECEIVE PMS! COZ WEN I SEE COMMENTS I SND A BUDDY REQ BUT SOME PPL DO NT ACCEPT DEM SO I CANNOT SND DEM PMS! SRY PPL! TO THOSE PPL WHO R MY LIST AND DIDNT RECIEVE PMS PLZ ADD ME !

Luv Ani <3

Edited by aniiee - 12 years ago

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Awesome update!!! 👍🏼 loving ur story! Jealous Asad...sooo cute!!! Kash actual serial mein aisa hota!!!Continue soon 😊

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suchishah

@suchishah

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Fantastic...u deserve a huge applaud

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pinkks

@pinkks

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

wohoo...i luv it...i like jealous asad😆

u r going ryt karan😉...aur kro jealous jahapanah ko 😆

i lyk the convo btween dem...vry beautifully depicted👏

plz cnt. soon n plz pm me...m sending u buddy req

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Indu

@.Indu.

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

Awesome update!!! 👍🏼 thanks for the pm..

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Finally, Karan is here and that was one hilarious update. Loved how Asad in the end said How Dare he kiss MY GIRL ??!! That was so freaking sweet. Can't wait to see what Asad does now !!