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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

How could you !!!

Its a cliff hanger. I mean you had to stop the chapter bang on when I was too excited. Now, you post the chapter 4 and then m gonna comment.. Sorry.. But, don't mind, but yea... you could take it as a dhamki... :P 🤣

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Waiting!!!

~Dee~

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blessed4

@blessed4

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Waiting to see Asad manaofy Zoya

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sree89

@sree89

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

oh no..pls don't stop with next part..unless you are going to write a new story soon...this is one of the best i have ever come across in this forum...

it was really great...i laughed dunno how much at that ghost story n their fight...but surely Asad has gonr far this tym..

anxious to see how the manofying will happen..

continue soon...😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊...

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

sorry for not commenting on last update.I was bit busy with my studies n yeah sorry for short comment too next one will be bigger than this I promise.
I loved this tiff between asad n zoya but this time asad crossed his limits.Looking forward to see asas manofying zoya

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Ya Allah! Asad can be such a jerk at times, dat i dont understand wat to do. he just goes beyond da limits wen he's angry. actually da reason is he wants to maintain a distance between dem n dats only possible if dey keep arguing & fighting n if dey closed da distance between dem, he wont b able to take it, he's such a coward, running away from his own feelings. i hope he truly apologizes to her n manofies her too. n you dint let us down wid da previous part at all, it was so hilarious n fun filled, it made me day. do send a pm for da last part, waiting for it eagerly. between how did ur exams go?

love,

Nimra.

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Sofna

@Sofna

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Your writing is FANTASTIC!!!!
Loved reading EVERY chapter, was howling with laughter...absolutely superb... n this is the first AsYa OS I'm reading since the show strted!!1

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Noor

@Theking21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Poor zoya, Asad was mean! Waiting for how Asad will "manao" and "patao" zoya, iam so happy that this story is having more parts, eagerly waiting:) lots of love

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...SankaDevi...

@...SankaDevi...

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Lovely😆 Please pm me the rest😆😆

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fee-fee

@fee-fee

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Oh my god!!!! I had to bite my lips from the excitement (I have guests over). Please update soon and PM me when you do. Fantastic! Please hurry with the update!!