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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Luvd it! 🤣 plz continue n add me in yr pm list 4 future wrks! 😊

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malini

@malini96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

wow i loved it...⭐️

urs is awesome👏...i was waiting if some one would write on this track😉

u did dude...😊

plz plz plz pm me😃...i beg u...🤢

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Santhosh Banda

@Santhu.The.King

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Lol... Asad The Girl... hahaha Poor Boy...
Awesome... Continue Soon

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Fimmy

@Fimmy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

First of all how was your xm??? 😊
then coming to the part...OMG!!! 😲
another hilarious part!!! and this one is even better... 👍🏼
i mean if last part was 10/10 then this one is 12/10... ⭐️
m sure asad must be very cute...btw m talking about the little girl... 😉
hayeee!!! the irritated asad...the big one ha...hamara hero 😛

yaar tussi toh toup ho...hats off... 👏
i knw i knw that sabar ka fruit metha hota hai...
but wo kya hai na mujhe abhi fruit khane ka maan nehi hai...so fruit swwet ho ya bitter ki farak penda hai???!!! 😉

so ab ap fast n fast ye updt kar doo... 😃

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Ablazed_Enigma

@Ablazed_Enigma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Asad, the little girl.. hahahahaha 🤣

awesome!😊
plz do pm me when you update..

curious to knw what will happen.. 😃

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

uff God, wat do i say? u kno i has thought dat u were going to make da second part scary, n i was like is mein AsYa ka kya hoga. but but but.. dis part got me on the floor. really just as i read "Asad" as da girls name i couldn't control my self n rite now too its tickling my senses. i loved da way u wrote n presented da whole idea. it was hilarious plus dose small interactions between Asad n Tanveer, kept blowing Zoya's fuse n da last was perfect. hope u cont it super soon kyunki i keep stalking dis os for the next part.

love,

Nimra.

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fee-fee

@fee-fee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: FingerFetish
Ermagod. Listen. I'm being brutally honest here. I NEVER read Fan Fictions or One Shots. I lose interest half way and click on the exit button. But I swear to God, I read every single line and was HOOKED! How did I not read the first part? = \ DID YOU LINK ME! *Accusing glare*. I was going to demand you to continue and then I saw the 'UPDATED PG 12' and almost killed the mouse by clicking ferociously on the next option.

Now in regards to part two. The only reaction I could form up is ...

🤣

L . M . F . A . O x infinity and beyond! The verbal spar between the two has been the best piece of dialogue I have ever read or witnessed in any drama! YOU are a sheer genius of comedy! Oh my god that was the FUNNIEST Two shot I have ever read! I could picture everything. I legit, spat out my drink when I read that she named the little girl Asad. 🤣

MAKE THIS A TEN SHOT! I demand it !

Same, my favorite part was the end... 😆 ( by the way how many candles are lit because Zoya is afraid of fire and the candles should give her at least some goosebumps and uneasiness)