Past, A window to the future~An AsYa SS updt pg 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hurry please!!!

Great job so far :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Note:Waiting for comments ppl! can i have at least a page or two to post Part 6!!!! so flood the comments plz! very cute Part 6 coming up!
Edited by ilovearnavkhush - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry guys for a late update, been sick so couldn't update for a few days! But sorry putting forth this part was extremely important, so this part is like part 5 but from Asad's POV, so enjoy!!!

Part 6

The guy looked familiar, but he couldn't exactly put a name to the face, or remember if he had even SEEN this guy before. He shook his head thinking that he can't serious be spending his time on useless things like this man who had been following Zoya all day. Wait what? This guy had been following Zoya all day and then it clicked! He was that guy...

****Flashback****

She made an ouch sound as she hit the door knob. Asad went forward as he said, "Careful Zoya! Are you ok?" And in that moment, Asad's finger made the slightest touch on her shoulder and he lost it! Lost every bit of self control he was holding on to as he watched her close her eyes in pleasure and then she opened her eyes and stared in his eyes and he moved his hand to her neck, gently stroking it, and he saw her eyes close again as he started to go in for a kiss when suddenly his hand that had now made down her arm touched a scared tissue as if it had been burnt their! He saw her eyes had once again opened as she avoided his gaze saying, "You should leave now, Mr. khan!"


He needed to ask her about the scar, but he would have to give her time and then may be she would feel comfortable talking to him because they way she was behaving now it was obvious she felt insecure. So he made his way out of her room as quickly and quietly as possible. As he was leaving analyzing the situation, he felt a bit startled at the very thought of him almost kissing Zoya. How could he? This wasn't the plan! The plan was to confuse her not confuse himself even more. He was heading out of his room when he saw Zoya talking to his Ammi, looking beautiful as ever. And all she was wearing was simple sports wear and hair in a messy bun, instead of her usual jeans and top with hair down. Asad had to admit, Zoya looked pretty heavenly in a messy bun! When they get married, he's going to ask her to always do her hair like that. Wait woah...did he say married? He really needs to control her thoughts and then he saw Zoya leaving the house.


"I have to go Ammi, I can't stay for breakfast." Said Asad.

"Arre, ajj sab ka roza hai kya! Sab bahane bana kar breakfast skip kar rahe hai. Pehle Zoya aur abb Tum bhi!" Dilshad replied annoyance on her face visible.

"Nahi Ammi Asa kuch bhi nahi hai, meri ek bohot zaroori meeting prepone ho gayi hai aur mujhe abhi niklana hoga."

"Okay, Lakin tumhe lunch ka liye Ghar Ana hoga!"
"Okay Ammi, I promise." And with that Asad left for office. His meeting had taken him all of morning and afternoon, so he decided to go for lunch at home. "Slamwalikum Ammi!" "Walikumaslam Asad!" "How was your day Ammi?" "It was good! But you are late, we were waiting for you but you didn't show up so we just ate." "It's okay Ammi!" Great he thought, he had been thinking how he would ask Ammi if Zoya had eaten lunch since she had skipped breakfast, but he didn't want Ammi to suspect him. Ammi served him food and he ate looking around, but why wasn't she anywhere to be seen, and as if luck had supported him, his Ammi said, "Are you looking for someone?" "No Ammi, bas koi bhi Ghar pe nazar nahi aa raha!" "Han, Vo sab bahar Gayye hai."

He finished his food and went to his room and worked on his presentation for tommorow, but kept on thinking why the house still felt so empty. "I need to concentrate on my work!" He yelled to himself, and then he remembered that he had a few files he needed to prepare for tomorrow's meeting in his office. Great! That's exactly what he needed! To go out for a bit and he decided he was going to go to the lake and watch the sunset. But the sunset won't be for another hour, he thought. So he decided to just go for a drive and then watch the sunset. He had just come to the lake when he saw a man staring off in a direction where a girl was sitting! "Sheee...shakal se to theek thak lagta hai, Lakin kaam itne cheap?"

The guy turned around and said, "Excuse me? What you mean? And how dare you talk to me like that!" But before Asad could say anything, the guy climbed in his SUV and Asad just walked forward, and then his phone rang. "Ji, Ammi!" "Asad! Zoya abhi tak Ghar nahi aayi hai aur uska phone bhi nahi lag raha!" Asad was about to panic when he saw a familiar sports wear! "It's okay Ammi, main yahan lake ke pas se jaa raha tha aur mauhtarma yahan akali lake pe bhathi hai! Don't worry Ammi, main unhe lay aunga!" "Okay Asad! Allah Hafiz!" "Khuda hafiz Ammi!" He hung up and was about to walk forward when he realized that the guy was staring at his Zoya! He fumed with Anger and went forward!

He got to Zoya and put a hand on her shoulder, but she didn't turn around, so he spat, "Your late! It's 8'o clock already! You were suppose to be home by 7! Remember." She turned around mad this time, "Oh stop it Mr. Khan! I just stayed back to see the sunset, and sun doesn't set till 8:30 on a summer day! So it's still light outside! I'm safe!" He grabbed her from her arms drawing her to him, but before he could speak, someone threw a punch towards Asad and he lost his grip on Zoya!

The guy was going on and on about something with Zoya and then he heard the guy say, "Shakl se to theek lagta hai Lakin kaam..."
'"Excuse me!', said Asad. What do you mean? Mind your tongue! She lives in my house and I've just come here to retrieve her! Who the hell are you to be talking to me like this and let go of Zoya now!" He said, grabbing Zoya's hand and putting her behind him.


So it was that guy and the guts of this shameless man! He had used Asad's own words to mock him! And by the time his inner ramble had finished, he heard Zoya say, "Stop it both of you! I'm sick and tired of everyone telling me what to do with my life! I...I..." But before she could finish, Zoya fainted and collapsed in his arms!


That's all Folks!

Plz plz leave your comments below! And stay tuned for part 7! Guys plz leave comments! Very sad cuz barely getting comments! Anyways plz comment on n visit on my blog at www.ilovequboolhai.wordpress.com u can comment via Facebook, twitter, or Wordpress on my blog! Thanks! Plz also comment on the India forums end as well! Thank you n follow me on twitter (@iloveasrnjazz) for updates or let me knw in comments to pm u! Enjoy!

Lots of love,
Ilovearnavkhush and @iloveasrnjazz

Edited by ilovearnavkhush - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Keep piquing my interest with your exciting excerpts!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 7

Zoya just fainted in his arms! He couldn't figure out what to do! "Zoya! Zoya!" He found himself yelling and pretty soon he realized that tears were running down his face like the day he had almost lost her in Mangalpur to that grave the panchayat had made for her! No! He would never let anything ever happen to her again! Ever! He scooped her in his arms and carried her to his car. He was looking for something when the guy showed up with a water bottle in his hand and offered it to Asad. Asad hesitated for a bit but then took it gently from his hands and sprayed a bit on Zoya's face and she came around. Asad felt a it better and asked if she was okay and she just said, "Yes Mr. Khan! I just forgot to eat lunch, so I just fainted. Can we go home please?" It seemed to Asad like Zoya had forgotten all about their fight! He closed the passenger door, and turned around to find the guy standing there smiling.

'"Typical Zoya!' He said. 'She always does this! Forgets to eat, gets cranky, yells at people, faints, and then wakes up forgetting everything! So I'm guessing you are Asad!'" He said looking at Asad.

"Yes," he replied a bit Confused. Everyone knew him in Bhopal but this guy didn't look like he was from Bhopal at all. "'I'm Shehry,' the guy said. 'Perhaps we started on the wrong foot. I'm Zoya's best friend from New York. We grew up together and we have always been together even when we went to different colleges, so I guess I just get a bit too overprotective of her. I didn't mean to insult you, in Zoya's case I always act like this because she's always been my responsibility. Sorry!"

"It's okay, I shouldn't have reacted like that too, it's just some guys here are too shameless! So you staying here for some time?" He had just asked that hoping that his answer wouldn't be that he's come here to get Zoya, but as usual Zoya had to come in there! She had just seen Shehry, and had literally ran his way and hugged him like a little kid, while he spinned her around! "Oh Zee Bell! I haven't seen you in so long! Lazy day today!?"

"Yeah, didn't want to do anything!" She said smiling.

"I can see that! Your messy bun and "juicy couture" collection only comes out if your feeling lazy or something really bad is disturbing you...oh no Zoya, not again! How many times I've told you no you can't keep on doing that to yourself!" Shehry said, now mad. "You need to get home! Asad, I'm sorry but can I ask you for a favor?"

Confused Asad said, "Yeah sure!"

"Since Zoya is at your house, can I follow you guys to your house, I have to talk to her, if you don't mind that is?"

"Sure!"

Asad and Zoya left in Asad's SUV with Shehry closely behind them. Once they got home, he went and told his Ammi that one of Zoya's friends had come to meet Zoya and He's asked him to stay for dinner. His Ammi seemed very happy after a long time! He smiled and was walking to his room when he saw shadows! Asad walked over and saw the shadows belonged to Zoya and Shehry and Zoya was crying while Shehry was yelling at her! He clenched his fists best friend or not, nobody made his Zoya cry! He was about to walk when he heard Shehry say, "Zoya, you can't keep on doing this to yourself! He isn't worth it! Everyone but you knows who he is and what his scumb bag ass did!" Hearing this Zoya's head shot up! "You knew, I mean you know! Tell me! You have to tell me! I deserve to know!"
Asad was getting very angry at the way Shehry was talking to Zoya, but also very confused as to whom were they talking about when he heard Zoya say, "please Shehry, I need to know! He's my Abbu! I need to now! Please!!!"

"It's not that easy Zoya! Sorry I can't tell you! You won't be able to take it, and I can't see you break apart anymore!" Shehry said putting a hand softly on her cheek but Zoya flicked it away.
"No, don't touch me! You know all my life I've only had you! You understood me! You always had the solution! You always felt the same about me as I felt about you! We always had a love that no one could understand!"

Asad stomach sank when she mentioned "Love" but he kept listening because he just couldn't bring himself to walk away.

"When Appi talked to you about mine and your nigah, you knew exactly what I would say, you knew that I would tell Appi that I loved you as my best friend and not even a future husband to take your spot in my heart but I am waiting for my soulmate and before he walks into my heart, I need to resolve my parental issue! You knew because you were waiting for the same things perhaps, your soulmate! We have always been each others mirror, but today! Today you are leaving me! You are leaving your best friend in a dilemma even after you know that I would rather know the truth and live that than die with a regret that I didn't even try to look for my Abbu!"

"Zoya please don't make this hard for me."

"No Shehry! We are done here! That's it! I don't want to talk! I can do my things myself! I don't anyone! Not you and not Mr. Khan! You here me! No one!" Saying that Zoya turned around, but a furious Shehry grabbed her to face him and said, "You want to know? Then fine, listen..."

That's all Folks!

Next part is going to be when the big bomb drops, so stay tuned peeps!!! Plz leave comments n feedback! plz comment on n visit on my blog at www.ilovequboolhai.wordpress.com u can comment via Facebook, twitter, or Wordpress on my blog! Thanks! Plz also comment on the India forums end as well! Thank you n follow me on twitter (@iloveasrnjazz) for updates or let me knw in comments to pm u! Enjoy!

Lots of love,
Ilovearnavkhush and @iloveasrnjazz
Edited by ilovearnavkhush - 12 years ago
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Just read the ss :-) its amazing, can't wait to read more
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👏 gr8 work... waiting for next parts
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Hey , I just read this fiction and its just fabulous. Loved it. I have read it in you blog too and commented there too. You may find me as Dee. Do continue soon and pm me whenever you do so.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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read all the parts right now
amazingly written
the character shehry is a good one
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NEW UPDATE!!!!!

PART 8

Zoya knew it wasn't safe to be firing up Shehry like this, he could be as dangerous as Mr. Khan when angry, but she had to do it to find out the truth, so when she heard Shehry say, "Zoya please don't make this hard for me."
She broke into another rant, saying, "No Shehry! We are done here! That's it! I don't want to talk! I can do my things myself! I don't anyone! Not you and not Mr. Khan! You here me! No one!"
Saying that Zoya turned around, but a furious Shehry grabbed her to face him and said, "You want to know? Then fine, listen''."
"Your Abbu was a greedy man who married your Ammi for money! Your Abbu was in his thirties when he met your Ammi! Your Ammi was just out of college, about 24 years old beautiful and carefree as you! From what I've heard, you're an exact spitting image of your Ammi! Which was another reason why Appi never pushed it when it came to wearing salvar suits that and also because she knew most traditional clothing doesnt have full sleves and how important it is for you to hide your arms, anyways she fell in love with your abbu and she told your Nanajaan that she wanted to get married now and your Nanajaan agreed and got them married and after a year you were born. By the time you were about three, your Ammi found out that he was married to another woman your Ammi was devastated but your Abbu told her that he was forced into marrying the other woman and that he loved your Ammi only.
Your Ammi believed him but Nanajaan didn't, so in his Will he gave everyone to your Ammi and if anything happened to your Ammi, then all the property will go to you. Your Abbu was furious when he learned that and you were about 5 when your Nanajaan passed away and a few days later, your Appi, my Ammi, and I were going to visit your place when we say smoking coming from your house! Your Abbu was running away from the house and he smelled like kerosene while your Ammi and you were screaming and burning ALIVE inside the house! He set your house on fire! He killed your Ammi! He tried to kill you but if it hadn't been for your Ammi's courage, you would probably be dead. I still remember, I was only 7 years old but I put water on the building as fast as I could, when I say you crying for your Ammi, she was burning right next to you! I ran up to you, and your Ammi told me, "Shehry always take care of my Zoya! Take her and tell Zeenant to raise her please don't ever let my daughter into the hands of that monster!" I ran with you as fast as I could out of the house to bring Ammi, and your Appi but by the time we got there, your mother was screaming and burnt all over!! It was horrifying! I screamed and I don't remember anything after that!

Ammi and your Appi decided to keep you with them and their was a rishta from New York of Anwar jiju and your Appi got married and they both adopted you as their daughter and took you to New York with them! Soon after that my Abbu had also called Ammi and me to New York and we made our little world in that city and decided to never take you to India ever! But two years ago you found out about your Abbu and were determined to come to Bhopal to find your Abbu and then Appi made a scheme that she should get you married. She knew marriage means everything to you and once in a relationship, you will never back out no matter what. She thought of getting you married to Akram because he will be able to protect you until you were in Bhopal and then he will move back with you to New York! It would've worked but you being you ran away from the marriage but now I'm glad you did! But still Zoya, think about it with a brain and not with a heart, give it up and move on! He's nothing but a murderer! Let it go! I'll leave you alone now, just think about it!

Saying that Shehry walked out of there and Zoya just stood there, trying to collect her heart together which had shattered with the truth! How could Shehry do this to her! He knew her better than herself, then how could he not know how much she needed him right now and he just said that he's going to leave me alone to think! Her inner turmoil was growing when she saw him standing there and she ran!
That's all folks!

Sorry for a short update, but it's a bit heavy and plus I gotta keep my suspense ! So stay tuned for Part 9!!! Plz leave comments n feedback! plz comment on n visit on my blog at www.ilovequboolhai.wordpress.com u can comment via Facebook, twitter, or WordPress on my blog! Thanks! Plz also comment on the India forums end as well! Thank you n follow me on twitter (@iloveasrnjazz) for updates or let me knw in comments to pm u! Enjoy!
Lots of love,
Ilovearnavkhush and @iloveasrnjazz
Edited by ilovearnavkhush - 12 years ago

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