Teri Aahatein- AsYa OS: Final pt 4-pg 18

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Jahapana6packs
Ya allah yeh appne think nahi kiya aise mode pe aake TBC likhke.haha
Awesomeee as always

I am learning from the cvs😆 thanks jahanpanah

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan
sangeeta i beg u please please please please super duper please update d next part..im dying for d ASYA scenes...

i loved ayaan so much here..really really felt bad for him.he was so cute

cant ait for ur dhamaka update

Thanks dear. AsYa scene needs to be a thoughtful one...working on it. Have to make it AsYa worthy😉

Ayaan needs to learn that he can't everything he wants. This is his time to sacrifice for his bhai jaan as he had promised a while back.

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@havokhotline

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

I'm waiting for the next part!

You're a fabulous writer. :) I love the angst in this scene. :D

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: havokhotline
I'm waiting for the next part!
You're a fabulous writer. :) I love the angst in this scene. :D

Thanks havokhotline. I am glad you liked it😊

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HoneySweety

@HoneySweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Hey its realy fantastic baby.pls pm me after next update.love u

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Puneet

@AsYa_fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Wow I cant wait until the next part! I cant wait to read the AsYa scene!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Priyanka

@Prizi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Amazing...waiting fr ASYA scene...cont soon

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Indidesi

@Indidesi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Plz update fasttt.. Super writing skills 👍🏼

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Anila

@Annu..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

the best thing abt Ayaan-Zoya is, they don't address each other as Mr Khan-Ms Farooqui..

poor Ayaan.. he had to give qurbani for his Bhaijaan that's why couldn't even ask Zoya that if she didn't love him then she shouldn't have agreed with the engagement too..

lets see how Asad will justify his conversation with his mother regarding Zoya which made her realize that he doesn't care abt her, in the next part.. from Asad's POV.. what is his actual prob.. that why Zoya didn't fall for me? coz apperantly it seems like he has no idea that she likes him too..

this guy is so full of himself and badtameez.. jab tak iski Ji Huzoori karte raho like Najma.. ye theek rehta hai warna saamne waaley ki be-izzati mein farq aa jaata hai..

Edited by Annu.. - 12 years ago