ASYA SS-Will u be my Valentine?Banner-1+Teaser-55 - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago
This is so so so so beautiful😊
I want you to update as soon as possible!!!😃
The Asya dance would be a treat to the eyes😉
i added you to my buddy list!!! please do pm me when u update the next part!!!please😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 😳 loved it 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
tht was freaking awesome!thnk u for sending me a pm dear and sorry for commenting late but loved ur ss sooo much! do pm me next time!love u for this!😳
Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update asma sis.
love the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">I'm so glad you updated this SS.

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">I only get to read long updates from you and no one else.</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">GREAT WORK Asma Di</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">I LOVE LOVE LOVED THIS UPDATE. So much so that I screamed in excitement and my maid came running to see what happened to me. LOL</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">Okay now coming back to the SS.</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">The women had to wear a saree I could literally imagine Asad's reaction when he learnt that</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">DIlshaad momma, I want to kiss your cheeks for playing cupid. Asad really needs some for him to realize his feelings</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">A red saree. His favorite color Great job Dilshaad momma I can't thank you enough for this</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">He kept staring at her and the car moments, I blushing.</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">The best part was Asad being envious when other fellow men eyed his Ms. Farooqui. This is what I always wanted to see and will want to see in the show as well.</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">Now coming back to you.</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">Allah Miyaan!! You write so beautifully. I fell in love with your writing all over again. This update had everything from nervousness (Asad's side), excitment; Dilshaad was more excited than Asad was, which I loved to see, Zoya being confused what to wear and thinking of taking Asad to shopping with her. Well that reminds me, I forgot to mention about her ramblings. They were so cute. There was jealousy too in this part.</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">In short, it had everything a reader wants to read. A perfect piece.</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">Continue soon, didu. Eagerly waiting for the next part.<img src="http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd93/Never_Fell_In_Love/emoticons/1432792ibjtcuzuhi.gif" alt="" /></font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">Lots of Love,</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">Diya</font>







Thanks a lot for such a long review darling.
Diya you are a sweetheart.
I'm so happy to know that u enjoyed reading this part soo much.
Thanks for letting me know in detail about what all things u particularly liked in this part.
Kindly keep motivating me like this in future too sweety.
Love u
Muah!
🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Such a great chapter:-). Hehe, Asad is so funny. The only people he's fooling is Zoya and himself. Cos Phoophi knows wats cooking lol. Best scene was Zoya muttering about Jahapanah six packs, while he was standing behind her! Cannot wait for the next chapter...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Where are others with their comments?
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Posted: 12 years ago
First, Sorry for the late comment!
This was a lovely update, and it was beautifully written!
Loved Jealous Asad and Zoya!
Looking forward to the next chapter, update soon and thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Intersting how the night is unfolding,Asad's fascination for the colour red,the red saree,Valentines..you've done a great job in linking these things together to to move the story forward.I can so vividly picture Zoya looking ravishing in that red hot saree...and that sexy,goofy expression of Asad's just totally lost in her beauty.I am loving this jealous Jahaapnah six packs and want more of this jealousy..😆.The night is still young,leaving it at the dance like that leaves alot to the imagination...I can just picture Asya burning the dance floor with the intense heat and passion.This scene made me relieve that hot ASya valentines dance...with Asad's famous dialogue coming to mind..."Dance isse kehte hain Miss Farooqui"🤗...that wa sjust enough to make me faint!☺️Hoping to get sum food for thought for our gutter minds in your next installment...how about them ending up kissing each other passionately in that moments shell,totally lost in the moment..,that they get both get a wake up call about those feelings under the surface?!😃
Great job Asma! 👏You write with such concision, that it makes it easier to visiualze the scene at hand...also like the way you create atmosphere to pull the reader into that world that you are creating through your words,that it almost feels as if the one reading is actually present in the scene themselves.
Do pm me when u update next!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

awsome part di...luved each and every bit

eagerally waiting for next part

thnx for pm

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