All The Time, It Was You: AsYa SS/Chapter 11-Pg90 - Page 6

ist april is not far will wait for update

I got as far as the first paragraph; I was hoping that the intro would be an original idea of how they met but it was a repeat of what was on the show...it would have been more creative to have offered us an original meeting of the two...as a result i didn't feel like reading further which takes away from what might have been a good read. If you are going to provide us with what the show has already shown, it is advisable to write that down briefly so the reader can get straight into the crux - and hopefully original thoughts and ideas you wish to share 😃

Originally posted by: Laila2009

I got as far as the first paragraph; I was hoping that the intro would be an original idea of how they met but it was a repeat of what was on the show...it would have been more creative to have offered us an original meeting of the two...as a result i didn't feel like reading further which takes away from what might have been a good read. If you are going to provide us with what the show has already shown, it is advisable to write that down briefly so the reader can get straight into the crux - and hopefully original thoughts and ideas you wish to share 😃

I also advise you, and all other readers, to write several chapters ahead. And then, when you do have prior commitments you can post these chapters. it is very annoying for readers to read a story, get into it and then the writer forgets it...not a good habit as every story has an ending. As one of the top editors in the US said, a writer writers for a reader and leaving a story unfinished is not fair on them 🤗

welcome back n cont soon

hey, this is really a nice plot and I enjoyed reading it. Please , do update soon. I heard you are having exams. well, hope you get through well. 1st april, its tomorrow waiting so eagerly.

Originally posted by: _Aaniya_

where's the update ? :(

Originally posted by: SadafKsgianAZ

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">I'm so sorry!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">You guys will get the update on Saturday for sure.</font>

Its okk... Will be waiting...:)

Waitin for your lovely update thank god u are back. Hw were your exams

Originally posted by: SadafKsgianAZ

Thanks for your honest appreciation but girl, that was a bit rude...

I'm not writing the same things that are shown in the show... I just wrote their meeting like that coz I wanted it to be like that. I'm gonna portray a marriage story here which I do not think is going on in the show.. What else do you find similar here with QH???

And life's not only about writing fictions and posting them here... Life has many other things. I wanted to update but had my exams going on. I never leave any of my fictions incomplete and I'll complete this one too...

And I request you that if you find my story similar to QH then please DO NOT read it if you get so annoyed. I write it for those who like it...

If you wanted to advise then that could have been done in a better way. By putting two smileys it doesn't means that will hide your rudeness. So please kindly do not read my fictions and if you read then DO NOT COMMENT in such a way... If you wanna advise or tell something then PM me...

Originally posted by: Laila2009

So I guess you only want posts that praise your writing and story?