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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: canucks1714

Loved the amazing update! This Zayn character is already getting really annoying and I wish it isn't him who asked her out. Thanks for the pm :)



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Posted: 12 years ago
Zayn luks a bit bad but its sooo nice.to.c jealous asad pls.pm me !!! Whn u update
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fabulous ss!
loveed it a lot..continue soon!
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nxt part abt the date
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Chapter 6:

Zoya looked at him from the corner of her eyes as he drove speedily towards their mansion. She gulped seeing him so angry. Why did she even agree to dance with Zayn? Especially when Asad had warned her this morning itself to stay away from Zayn. But she couldn't resist her desire to dance after seeing everyone dancing in the party hall but she & Asad. She jerked back to reality when she felt a loud thud. She looked at Asad as he stopped the car. Zoya looked out of the window & realized that they didn't reach their mansion yet. In fact, they were in the middle of some road. Asad stepped out and opened the door for Zoya. She came out & looked around. It was very dark & there was no one around as it was quite late.

"Why did you dance with him, Zoya?" she heard his husky voice. She turned to look at him. He stood near the door of the car with his back resting on the window glass. "It's just that I wanted to dance Asad. You know how much I love dancing" She ended with a sigh. "So you could have told me that you wanted to dance. I'm sure I wouldn't have told no to my best friend" He replied honestly whilst Zoya was again disturbed with the words 'best friend'. She felt emotions building up inside her and her vision turning blurry as tears formed in her chocolate brown eyes. "Exactly. I knew Asad, I knew that you will never say no for anything to your best friend but I don't wanna have a dance with you as your best friend" She said loudly, anger dripping in her voice. Asad stared at her. He saw tears running down her soft cheeks. Her beautiful eyes were now red & puffy. He tried to come close to her but she raised her hand in order to stop him. He stopped and looked at her. "Lemme say it all, Asad. Please." He decided to keep quiet today and listen to her. In their 6 months on marriage, she never complained about anything to him. She always did what he liked and what he said her to do. She obliged every word of him like a dutiful wife. She never asked him to love her back. He knew right from day one that she had feelings for him. But still she never forced him to love her as she thought that those feelings will invoke in him on its own. But she was wrong, may be.

"It's been 6 months Asad. 6 long months. And where did our relation reach? Best friends. That's it."

She said with sarcasm clearly audible in her voice. "I don't mind being your best friend. In fact I'm glad that out of all the people you choose me to be your best friend. You choose me to share everything." Asad looked at her as she gestured herself with her hand. "But I'm your wife Asad. I just can't stay being your best friend only. I've some desires, some wishes like other girls." She looked so upset that Asad felt she would break down any moment. He had a sudden urge to take her in his arms. He felt his heart ache as he saw her crying uncontrollably. "I agree I told you that I'll give you time to accept our relation. But isn't 6 months enough to accept me, Asad? Am I that misfit?" She asked him with pain in her voice. Asad felt tears forming in his eyes & his heart getting engulfed in the feeling of guilt. Yes, he felt guilty for hurting her to this extent. "Zoya, let's get back home" He said slowly and tried to hold her hand but she stepped backwards and looked at him. "No! I need answers today Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan" Asad looked at her amazed as she shouted. Her voice choked & her head ached but still she needed all the answers from him today. "Temme Asad, how much more time do you need to accept me and our wedding? What more you want me to do to make you feel that I'm fit to be your wife? Answer me dammit!!"

She screamed on top of her lungs making Asad shudder. She has never been this angry on him. She never spoke with such a high tone to him. But he knew that it was the limit for her to tolerate his ignorance. "Zoya please. We will discuss this later. Ghar chalo" He tried to calm her down but all in vain. "Oh yes! Why did I even ask you all that when I know the answer already." She spoke while wiping off her tears with the back of her hand. "What is my answer?" He asked and she smiled a fake one. "You will never accept me Asad. I should have known this. I'm sorry for all this drama. I don't know why I said everything to you. I'm just…. Sorry" She ended slowly. Asad looked at her & saw her holding her head. He ran to her as she stumbled. "ZOYAAA!!" He held her in his arms & sat on the ground. He patted her cheek as she lay there in his arms, unconscious. "Zoya, kya hua? Please aankhein kholo" He moved her fringes behind her ear and caressed her cheek. Tears fell from his eyes as he kept her head on his chest.

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She opened her eyes slowly but shut them back again as her head pained a lot. She heard some noises & tried to recognize her surroundings. "Don't worry Mr. Khan, your wife will gain consciousness soon" "Thank you doctor" She heard these two voices. Her eyes were still shut. She felt someone sitting besides her & it didn't take much time for her to realize who it was. He took her hand and caressed it with his cold fingers. She decided to keep mum for sometime. "I'm sorry Zoee. I never wanted to hurt you. You are angry, upset & depressed. It's fair enough for you to do that. I deserve all that" She felt hard to blink back her tears. His tears fell on her hand that he was holding. "But you know what I can never love you the way you love me. I'm sorry Zoya. Please wake up. I can't see you like this. I want my chirpy & bubbly wife back. Please Zoee"

He kissed her hand and she couldn't hold her tears back. They came gushing down her cheeks as she opened her eyes to look at her Asad. His forehead was pressed on her hand and he was crying. "Asad" He heard her sweet voice. He looked at her. She gave him a very small smile. He sat straight but didn't leave her hand. "Are you okay?" He asked with concern written over his face. Zoya smiled and closed her eyes. She nodded indicating that she's fine. Asad heaved a sigh of relief. She opened her eyes as she felt his hold on her hand getting light. "I'll call the doctor" He said & walked out. Zoya looked around the place while trying to sit up straight on the bed. She saw that she was still wearing her red anarkali dress. She searched for the clock and saw Asad's cell lying near her bed. She took it & saw that it 5:15 of morning. She has been unconscious for so long? Great! That means she missed many other things which Asad might have said to her. She shook her head and kept his cell back. Asad entered in with the doctor. The doctor checked Zoya. Asad stood near the bed with his hands crossed on his chest. Zoya looked at him. Typical Asad. She thought. "You're fine Mrs. Khan. Just a bit weak." The doctor said & wrote down the medication on a paper. "Here, Mr. Khan. She will be fine" The doctor handled the paper to Asad who nodded. "When can I go home?" Zoya asked. She didn't like hospitals much. "Now only if Mr. Khan wants you to take back home" The doctor smiled and left. Zoya looked at Asad. "I'm not staying here at any cost" She said with firmness in her voice. Asad nodded. "I know. I'll finish the formalities & then we can head back home" He left the room leaving a shocked Zoya behind. "Kya baat hai Jahapana toh mere ek outburst se itna sudhar gayye" She grinned but soon her smile was wiped off her face. "Par iska matlab yeh toh nahi ki woh mujhe chaahte hain"

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"Zoya!" Dilshaad hugged her tightly as she saw Asad entering with a not so healthy Zoya. Zoya smiled as Dilshaad kissed her forehead. "Kya hua mere bacche? Tum theek toh ho na?" "Ammi I'm fine. Bas thodi chakkar aa gayyi thi" Dilshaad nodded & lead them inside. Zoya stopped as she saw Zayn sitting on the couch with Najma. She looked at Asad, who looked irritated seeing Zayn at his place. "Oh Zoya!" Zayn came to her and held her hand. "Are you fine?" Zoya took her hand back calmly and nodded. Najma gave a hug to Zoya. "Ammi, she needs rest. I'll take her to the room" Dilshaad nodded sensing the uneasiness of her son on seeing Zayn close to Zoya. Asad held Zoya's hand and took her to their room. Dilshaad sat back on the couch and smiled. "Thank you Zayn!!" Dilshaad said while patting Zayn's head as he sat besides her. "Oh please aunty. You're embarrassing me now" Zayn replied, smiling. "Bhaijaan definitely looks pissed when you're around bhabhi" Najma said. "Of course Najma. Asad loves her already. Realization is the thing that's left" Zayn winked making Najma a bit uncomfortable. "And you've done that I guess. You made Asad jealous. So your work is done now I guess?" Dilshaad asked to which he replied, "Not yet aunty. Just one more step left. And then I'll be done" Dilshaad smiled. Zayn smiled back secretively, like he always smiled at Zoya. "Itni jaldi kaise khatam hoga kaam. Abhi toh mera kaam just shuru hua hai." Zayn thought in his mind.

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After sometime, Zayn left. Dilshaad was reading some magazine when Najma came. "Ammi main soup lekar gayyi thi par bhabhi aur bhaijaan dono so rahe hai" Dilshaad smiled, "Let them take rest, thak gayye honge dono." Najma nodded and sat besides her. "Ammi what made you think about Zayn helping bhaijaan-bhabhi?" Dilshaad closed the magazine & turned to her. "As Zayn said, Asad already loves Zoya. Bas usse realize karwaana tha aur mujhe laga jealousy se behtar koi tareeka nahi hoga. Coz I said Zoya many times to at least think of going back to New York but she always get scared with the thought of living without Asad. Hence I dropped that plan & thought of getting a third person in their story to help them" Dilshaad clarified. "Ohkay but why Zayn? Aur aapki Zayn se baat hui kaise?" Najma was confused. Dilshaad smiled and pulled her chubby cheeks as she looked so cute. "You're so cute Tamatar" Dilshaad teased her. "Ammi!!" Najma chided and Dilshaad giggled. "Okay sorry. I first thought to call Tanveer but would just worsen the situation for Zoya" Dilshaad exclaimed. Najma laughed. "Ya right. Tanveer bhaijaan ke itne kareeb aa jaati ki Zoya bhabhi jealousy ke maare paagal ho jaati aur bhaijaan, well he would not even have cared about Tanveer coming close to him" Dilshaad laughed along with Najma. "Haan so phir mere mann mein Zayn ka khayaal aaya. He knew Asad from college days toh maine socha ki baat ban jaayegi shayad aur dekho baat ban bhi rahi hai." Dilshaad said proudly. "Right. So where did you get his contact information from?" Najma further questioned. Dilshaad shook her head. "Najma if you're forgetting I'm mother of Asad Ahmed Khan. I can get information about anyone" Dilshaad giggled & then further continued, "Zayn was already coming to Bhopal as he had some important work here so I told him to help me & he agreed readily" Dilshaad ended clearing every doubt of Najma. "Great job Ammi! Ab I just hope that bhaijaan confesses soon" Najma clasped her hands together and wished that everything gets fine between her bhaijaan & bhabhi soon.

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Zoya opened her eyes and was amazed to see Asad sitting next to her on the bed. He was caressing her hair and was also reading some of his file. She smiled and Asad turned to check on her. He was surprised to see her awake and staring at him with a cute smile. He withdrew his hand back. "How are you feeling now?" He asked and she sat straight. "I'm fine Mr. Khan" She said while trying to take water from the bedside table. Asad helped her. "It's Asad for you if you forgot" He said with hurt. She had stopped calling him Mr. Khan since they became best friends. It was odd for him listening to that word from her now. Zoya looked at him as he said that. She didn't say it purposefully. She didn't even realize that she said him Mr. Khan instead of Asad or Jahapana. He gave her the glass and she drank water without replying. "I've to make some important call. You're not getting outta bed. Here is your Ipad. Have fun" He gave her, her ipad and she looked at him surprised. She can't sit here for the whole day!! But before she could tell anything he stormed out of the room. She made a face & clicked open her Ipad "Jahapana" she muttered and shook her head.

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"Zayn you'll have to help me, alright?" Najma asked with her finer pointed at him. Zayn nodded. "Chill Ms. Tamatar, I'll help you out." He smiled huge and Najma made a face. "Don't mind but only bhaijaan & bhabhi are allowed to call me Tamatar" She snapped at his face. Zayn looked a bit offended. Dilshaad & Zoya who were sitting near them stared at Najma as she sounded really rude. "Najma!" Dilshaad said. Najma looked at her and then at Zayn. Don't know why but she was finding this Zayn guy really weird. It's been three days now since she got to know everything from her Ammi about Zayn helping her Asad bhaijaan and Zoya bhabhi. Zayn was staying with them coz Dilshaad insisted. He will leave Bhopal in a few days he said, so Dilshaad wanted him to stay with them for some days. Najma has noticed in these three days that he always tried to come close to Zoya. Not coz of the plan but out of everyone in the house he wanted Zoya's opinion and Zoya's company every time. She could see her bhabhi getting irritated with this behaviour of Zayn. And Najma herself was feeling weird seeing Zayn trying to become close friends with Zoya. And now he's trying to come close to her calling her by her nickname which her bhaijaan gave her. She found something really fishy with this Zayn.

It's okay Tamatar. What help do you need? Come here." Asad, who just entered the house, heard the conversation. Even he was not much happy with Zayn living at their place and trying to become "friends" with his wife. Najma smiled and ran to her bhaijaan as he walked to the dining area where Dilshaad & Zoya were seated. Zoya poured a glass of water for him. He took the glass from her with a smile. "Bhaijaan I'm taking part in the dance competition in our college. And we are performing as partners so I wanted to learn some steps from Zayn as I heard he dances really well" Najma explained excitedly. Asad stopped drinking his water and looked at Zoya who was looking at him only. This dance thingy is not gonna leave him so easily. He was again reminded of Zayn & Zoya's dance. He closed his eyes and opened them again, now looking at Najma, "And who said you to participate?" He asked in a stern voice. Najma bit her tongue and looked at Dilshaad for help but instead of Dilshaad, Zoya helped her. "Come on Asad. It's just a matter of dance. Tamatar is really fond of dancing & I don't think there is any problem after all she's performing in her college only. Right?" She looked at him hopefully. He nodded after a long pause. Najma smiled huge and Zoya winked at her. "So bhaijaan you're gonna help me?" This time Dilshaad butted in. "How will he help you Najma? He doesn't knows dancing. You told that your partner lives nearby our area, hai na?" Dilshaad asked her. "Ji ammi I told you na you & bhaijaan know him. He's the son of Shahnaz bi" Najma explained. "You're talking about Faiz?" Asad asked and Najma nodded. "Exactly."

"I can be at peace if he's your partner. I know him really well and I can trust him" Asad said and sat on the chair. The three ladies rolled their eyes at him. "Sorry" He muttered. "So I was telling you Najma, call Faiz here and Zayn will help you." Dilshaad said. Asad, Zoya, Najma & Zayn, who was till now sitting on the couch and listening to the family conversation with no interest suddenly looked up at Dilshaad. "How?" Zoya asked this time. Dilshaad patted her head. "Zoya tum bhi na. Zayn ko dance aata hai so he can dance with you & Najma and Faiz can learn some steps by seeing you both. It would get easy for them na" Dilshaad suggested & Zoya's eyes became wide. Before she could say anything, she heard Asad. "NAHI!" He said loudly. All looked at him. "I mean, Zayn ko Zoya ke saath dance karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai" Asad said getting a bit calm. "Par Asad…." Dilshaad started but Asad cut her off. "Ammi I'll help Najma." He said a bit nervous. "Aur woh kaise?" Zayn spoke in the conversation for the very first time. "I'll dance with Zoya!"

He looked at Zoya. Dilshaad smiled as she saw her plan getting successful. Najma smiled too while Zayn made a face. He didn't expect this. Zoya thought she heard him wrong. "Asad, you are gonna dance with me? As in with Zoya?" Zoya asked for confirmation. Asad smiled at her nautanki. "Yes I'm gonna dance with you as in with Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan" He replied. Zoya smiled at him, after three whole days she smiled a complete one. Asad looked at her. How much he missed that smile. He will make everything perfect for them now, he thought whereas Zoya thought that may be this dance was the start of hers & Asad's relation as a husband & wife, actually. She thanked Najma in her heart and just hoped for the best.

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Hello guys!! 😳

Thanks for the likes & all the lovely comments on the previous update! I replied them all. 😊 Keep them coming as they are very motivating 😆

Here's the next update of ATTIWY. I hope it was good. I'm gonna end this SS like in 3 chapters more. So I'm speeding up the story from here. Hope it was not too boring. 😛Please press the like & leave your valuable comments. 😃

So now what do you guys think? Zayn is really playing a cupid between AsYa or there's something more to it? 😆

Pre-Cap:

Asad-Zoya's sensational dance. ❤️

Zoya's date with Asad/Zayn 😆


Love,

Khan Sadaf 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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u hope this was gud?? seriously now sadzi?? 😡
it was amazing as always..
zoya ka outburst was the best 😃 wish asad gets some akal after this
hate hate hateee zayn.. for the obvious reasons 😡
wants to come near tamatar also
n ya as dilshad said thankgod u didnt get tanveer in the story.. otherwise Zoe would become a tomato coze of jealousy 😆
waiting for their dance sequence
saying that u wont give me a jhatka u gave me one
wish its asad who asks her out 😕 coze tera koi barosa nahi hai 😛
cont soonniiissshhh

luv u
🤗 here goes ur fav hug

Edited by anishaalluri - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG u updated Miss Khan?? 😲
I cant believe my eyes... 🥱
But i have to... 😳
About the part, it was outstanding... 😳
I just dont have enough words to tell u mahn... 👏
Asad's insecurity, Zoya's outburst with Asad's guilt, his care his love, his talks, i leaved each n every bit of it... 😊
loved it to the core...
ASYA dance, i m waitin miss... 😳
Cont soon,
no u continue Soon-ish... 🤗
Love,
Your Maahi di ❤️

Edited by mahimarewari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update .. cant wait for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
U know what i was luking forward to ur boring wala line...nd here it is...sach me koi part to bina boring bole chor de...arrghhh tujhe bolna matlab diwar pe apna sar piwana hoga...ab to adat ho gayi hai tera ye line padh padhke...
Nd zayn i dont think he is cupid here...ab aage tu jane teri ss hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww its awsm yar soon update me cnt wait lov <3

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