An AsYa Love Story

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hii ! So I was bored ... And then this thought just came to me... So I jus wamted to share with u all... Pleasee no chappals.. It's my first AsYa story... Please comment and lemme know...
Its just a part... Not even a proper story.. Remember.. It was just a THOUGHT..

Zoya just walked calmly to her room,put her bag on the bed,changed into her night suit and sat down on the ground... And started crying... Tears bursting through her eyes like they were never gonna end.. She just cried.. And cried... She couldn't believe it.. She had went to the address that Asad had told her... She was so excited.. Finally! She was gonna find out something about her abbu... She asked around for a while and then she saw a very old woman sitting by the lake side road and decided to talk to her about her picture... The woman told her that that was the bungalow that had been there 20 years ago,which had caught an immense blaze of fire in which a woman was trapped with her baby of 2 months... It was later found that the mother had hidden the baby somewhere in the house which luckily did not burn.. But in the process of saving her child.. She herself perished in the fire... Later on, people found out that the fire was started by none other than her husband... He wanted to kill his wife and daughter because he had wanted a heir to his bungalow.. A son.. Not a daughter..

Zoya couldnt believe it... Just because of her gender?? She lost her mother because she [zoya] was a girl??? She didn't get the love,care and upbringing from her father because she was a GIRL??!!
She spent all her life holding love in her heart for her dad so that when she meets him she could make up for all those last years.. Love for who.. She thought.. That man tried to kill me when I was a baby.. Because I AM A GIRL?!!!

She just continued crying and letting the tears take over her...
She decided to go out into the patio and sit on the bench.. Right under the stars.. Mayb they won't mind her company... She sobbed and sobbed.. 10 years had gone by.. Her search was always her first mission... Now.. All that searching for nothing???!!


Asad was in his room when he decided to have some coffee.. Even at 11 p.m. coffee had it's refreshing taste...
As he took the cup to his room he heard noises from the patio.. He went slowly there to see who it was... Kept his coffee on the table and rushed outside just to be surprised by the sight of zoya...
"zoya...?" he said slowly...
Zoya knew whose voice that was... She didn't have the energy to argue as to why he was there... Why is he snooping around... Etc... She just got up and turned slowly... And ran and hugged asad... He was shocked as to what had just happened.. He still didn't hug her.. But he didn't remove her either..



So I know this is VERY long.. But honestly I didn't know it wouldbe.. But I get so caught up in telling the backstory of a character ( it's very important so that the emotions flow)...
But anyways I hope u like it...

I dnt do pm's... Sorry it's too much work.. That y I salute those who do.. :)
Anndd.. Yh.. Im a very lazy ff writer so don't expect anything soon.. Unless I'm in the mood ofc.. Then I cn just write day long.. :) like this one :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice plzz do update soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice :) Would love to read further :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I think it's small.
BUT AMAZAYN!!!
You deffo need to continue this woman!!!
You sure know what cliff hangers are >:(
Lol jokes, love this, hope it turns into a fanfic :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dis was nice 👏
i wud deffo love to read further 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is so good plz plz continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@eternal,grad,oishi,palak,kandy Grover & awesome.. Thnk u so much! :)
@Sweetypie... Thnk u... I'll try... I kinda update veryyy late.. So please bear with me.. :)
@Aussiechick... Small??!! Lol... Aww thnx alot... I will continue... Just don't know when.. :) lol... We'll see.. :)
Edited by AnjaliSharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful <3
Can't wait to read the next part
Continue!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing start
Awww she hugged him...i wish he would hug her back
well we will read it in the next update
pls pm me and update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very interesting so far,you really should carry on as I really wanna know what happens next!
Edited by shaz2009 - 12 years ago

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