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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is my first OS in Qubool hai forum.
So,please give me feedback after reading...
This is prologue...
SS:party time!!!
Zoya is not complete cured and najma's examination was yet to be completed...
Najma after preparing dinner for zoya,was about to go zoya'a room..
Zoya came outside and hold her hand..
"najma..your examination is going on..then why are you spending time in cooking..
agar ye sokh hein to after exam you"

Najma:"achha,and what about your health?what are you doing outside of your room?"

Zoya:"arre,you are behaving like your bhaijaan...i am not that week..
yeh allah-miya..what"s wrong with you?when will you mind activate..afterr finishing examination?"

Najma:"when will you become that much serious over study!!!
and my examination will end tomorrow..
so i will get plenty of time to take care of you"

Zoya:"kya..?you will take care of me..are you kidding?what is your plan after exam?"

Najma:"plan matlab..
haa,i will come home after ending.."


Zoya:"you...hey..we will celebrate it..
okay...now go to your room..and man laga kar paro😃"

Next day after ending examination ,najma saw Zoya's face at first..
Ziya was over-excited as usual...

najma:"what are you doing here ?i told na you are not completely cured..you should take rest..."

Zoya:"uff...you are so boring..
yeh excitement
yeh alaam,
yeh josh...
let's go"
and she took her hands and went for shopping..


On the other side,ASAD was also in that shopping mall to buy sorry gift for zoya...😉

Zoya:"you know..i like shopping...and if tumhara koi aisa types bhaijaan nehi rahata,to i will make over you..completely...
you looks so pretty..and in western dress...mash allah...you will look absolutely different..gorgeous..."
Najma:"Zoya,for your insisting,i am here to give you accompany..but i can't wear these type of dress..
if bhaijaan dekh liya(and saw bhaijaan face in zoya's backside)"

She forces zoya to leave that place...
"najma,,what is the facts?okay,if you don't want to wear western clothes"
najma:"arre,i saw bhaijaan there..let's go from here..."


precap:Asad-zoya face to face...
now how will zoya get out of this?

how's that?





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WhenInRome thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dat was nyc 👏
plz do pm me wen u continue
nahtani88 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome
Continue Soon
Thanks For The PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very Nice Prologue Arpita. 😊
Pls continue soon.
Thanks for the pm. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice, please pm when you update
raneeb thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazes me the imagination of all you young people... Great!
risingsea101 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very interesting
Continue soon <3
Could you send me a PM when you d?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice concept arpita. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very Nice start 👏

Can we pls hv some Zoya type of Shayari. . It will be fun.

Thanks tor PM

Edited by aroran - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Cant wait for the next part :D

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