SS: 'Her Dil Jo Pyaar Kare Ga' (Part 2) PG 4

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(Part 1)




Zoya is a college student and she is very chirpy , bubbly and loving girl.
She believes in a true love.



While on the other hand Asad Ahmed Khan is a Business Tycoon. He is a caring and handsome guy. he doesn't believe in love...


Aj ka din zoya ke liye bhut khubsurat tha kyun ke aj Zoya ko college me scholarship milna thi.

Zoya is a very intellligent student and also topper of the college.

Zoya on the dinning table:

Appi ap hamare liye breakfast le bhi ayen... humen college se dair ho jaye gi.

Appi: Sabar karen Zoya...Hum laa rhe hain breakfast.

Ap bhi na pata nhi wo konsa larka hoga jo apko bardasht kare ga.

Zoya: Appi wo jo bhi hoga bas sirf hamare liye bana ho ga...Aur humare her roop se pyaar karta hoga.

Zoya: Khuda Hafiz Appi hum chalte hain.

Appi: ruko Zoya apke Jiju apko chod den ge college.

Zoya: nhi Appi Jiju bhut dair se ready hon ge.

Hum koi auto hire ker len ge...

Zoya on the road:

Zoya: Auto--Auto ruko tu sehi...

OMG ab hum kya kren college start hone me sirf 30 mints rehte hain.

Itni dair me tu koitaxi bhi hamen time per nhi chode gi college.

Allah Miyaan plz hamari madad kren.


Suddenly ek car rukti hai aur us me se ek handsome but thora arrogant larka door open kerta.

Zoya: Who r u Mr.?

Asad: dekhen mam ap mujhe thori si disturbed lag rhi hain can I help u?

Zoya told him her story.

Asad: Ok Miss ????

Whts your name?

Zoya told him her name.

I 'm Zoya Siddiqui.

Asad: Ok miss Zoya me apko apke college drop ker deta hoon. (If u Don't mind)

Zoya: Musibat ke waqt tu gadey (donkey) ko bhi baap banana perta hai ye tu phir ek insaan hai.

Zoya in Asad 's car:

Actually mene kisi se kabhi lift nhi li agr hamari appi ko pata chale tu wo tu hamen jaan se maar daalen.

Aj hamare college me hamare liye special scholarship awarded ki jaye gi aur wo bhi apko pata hai wo hamen kon de ga...hamare college ka trusty...he is agreat business man of this city.

And u know what my friends told me that he's very handsome.

Zoya: meri friendzz ne kya naam bataya tha us ka...hmmm his name is Asad Ahmed Khan.

Asad: Ok miss Zoya plzz agr apki story finish ho gai ho tu kya ap seat belt baandhen gi.

Zoya: ohhh hum se ye nhi belt manage ho rhi.

Suddenly Asad Zoya ke paas ata hai aur us ki seat belt baandta hai.

Asad Zoya ke itne kareeb hota hai ke Zoya ki dil ki Dhadkan ki awaaz us tak atii hai.

They both looked to each other.

But Ek horn ki awaaz ati hai aur unki nazren ek doosre per se hat jati hain...

Asad: Miss Zoya ap ka college aa gya.

Zoya: Thanks a lot sir. agar aj mujhe ap lift na dete tu...

Asad: its ok Zoya ap ko dair ho rhi hai...

PRECAP::::::::::
Zoya take a scholarship from Asad Ahmed Khan and she's in shock.


Guys its my first SS in this forum. plzz meri mistakes ko nazar andaaz karna and if u like this then plzzz hit like and do comment.
I 'm very nervous plzzz give me a good response...
And tell me ke me is ka next part likhoon ya nhi...

With LoVe
Fatima...










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Posted: 12 years ago
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its good. do write more.
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awwesome plzz count soon and pm if possible
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thanx guys appreciating my SS...😛
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Originally posted by: arshi4ipkknd

awwesome plzz count soon and pm if possible



thanx and ofcourse dear i will absolutely PM u...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice starting... Please continue
and dont frgt to pm me
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Phenomenal start
Loving it!
Can't wait to see how Zoya reacts on finding out who he really is...
Continue soon <3
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loved it... awesome.. plz continue
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Great start!I liked the way Asya met without any fights,am curious in knowing what turn things take between then once Zoya knows of Asad's true identity.Please do continue and thanks for the pm!
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wow its gud
so continue soon
its cute
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