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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG...This is good..Love the way its going ☺️
cant wait to read the next chap☺️..u r Just amazing
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Originally posted by: _Oishi_

OMG...This is good..Love the way its going☺️

cant wait to read the next chap☺️..u r Just amazing



Thank you!
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jaldi jaldi update milega pls😃
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Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

jaldi jaldi update milega pls😃

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Sure, will update by tomorrow hopefully
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Chapter 4: A secret and a revelation


Asad inhaled sharply, trying to control the urge to kiss her. He leaned his head closer, his eyes locked with her. Zoya lowered her lashes and swallowed, her lips parted in anticipation of the kiss.


She wanted it to happen... she realized she'd been fighting the attraction ever since she'd walked in on him, soaking in the tub, those chiseled lips of his, curled up as he whistled Jaane kyun... and then her eyes had wandered unwittingly to his muscled chest and his firm abs, barely covered by the water. She hadn't been able to take her eyes off him! And now here she was, pressed against him, chest to thigh...


Zoya dipped her head towards his. Her tongue flicking over her lips on instinct. Asad's eyes drifted downwards... his pupils dilated as he imagined that tongue in his mouth! That was so hot... he groaned and took her lower lip in his mouth... nibbling gently.


Zoya gasped... it was better than she had imagined... their tongues met... hot, wet, urgent... she wrapped her hands around his neck.


Meanwhile, Asad's hands roamed over her back... one slid over her pajamas, cupping her bottom, pressing her lower body against his hardness, while the other slid under her camisole... he wanted to feel her skin.


Her back was silky smooth, moist. He wanted more of her. He brought his hand to her side to the indent of her waist, moving it to the underside of her breast... and he slowed... her skin felt different...


Zoya froze and tried to push him away... Had he felt her scar tissue? She hoped not!


Asad didn't let her go... he sensed her discomfort... he'd definitely felt something there... had she been hurt?! He had to find out... but without making her feel conscious. "Zo, sorry, didn't mean to... I must be sick... you weren't feeling so good a little while ago and I shouldn't have... I didn't mean to rush you. if you want to stop, we'll stop, ok?" he said softly.


His hands were back on her camisole... stroking her back gently. As they both caught their breath, their eyes met.


Zoya wasn't sure what to make of it... maybe he hadn't realized... maybe he was just taking it slow since this was all so new. But she thought he had felt her burn marks - her bane, a constant reminder of that tragic night that had stolen her mother from her.


He was looking at her, the desire obvious, but there seemed to be a new emotion in his eyes... concern, tenderness? Was she reading it right?


She realized he was waiting for her response... "Umm... yeah... it happened so soon. I mean... I wanted to, but y'know..." she spoke haltingly, her Yankee accent thickening.


Asad felt she was hiding something... her accent always came back when she was... her heart was still beating wildly. Her eyes evaded his... but it probably wasn't the right time to force it out.


He smiled back at her and rolled her to his side, his left hand moving up to cradle the back of her head. "I know... it caught me by surprise too... to be honest, I've been fighting this for a while now... I wanted to kiss you senseless that day when I cornered you about my phone... you drive me up the wall... you get under my skin..."


Zoya blushed... and smiled coyly.


Man! Was this girl blushing? She hadn't looked away when she'd walked in on him... any other girl might have... but now, here she was... her skin, a deeper hue...


Just then they heard a soft rumble... it widened their smiles, and nearly had them in splits. "Was that my stomach complaining or yours?" she asked him.


"Probably mine," he answered. "Let's get something to eat quick."


As they untangled themselves from each other and the sheets, he pondered.


She was so unlike the women he knew... shy one minute, and joking the next. He liked that. So wasn't a fan of her messy habits, but... nobody's perfect. He admired her openness and courage... for most part, what you saw, is what you got. Except just now... but then, they barely knew each other. The earlier situation had just brought them closer physically...


He doubted that they'd have gotten intimate otherwise. This was just an aberration... he wouldn't let it happen again, he couldn't afford to.


Zoya had straightened her clothes and was pulling on a tee shirt. She'd turned to the side as if she didn't want to make a big deal of him being there... kind of like the cat that closes its eyes while drinking milk and believes no one's around.


Asad wanted to turn away but her slender curves had him captivated. Just as she stretched her arms upwards, her camisole rode up to reveal some puckered skin just above her waist, covering a part of her rib cage.


His hunch was correct. He had felt scar tissue... probably from a fire accident a long time ago. But now wasn't the right time to ask.


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Chapter 5:Hey Jealousy


Edited by adeeti10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Awesome part.
I loved it so much.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Awww they kissed
lovely part
hope he find out about her past
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ah things are getting hot and steamy in here! Awesome update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Asad is surprising every update; Z try to evade...can't wait to read more!

-Sona

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