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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Diana08D


Hahah if we tweet to them one more time, they might see it..They have to see it..😆😆 This is hilarious😆😆

ya...I would've tweeted to them but I'm not on twitter so cant. please could you guys keep tweeting?? Thanks!!!!! Really I wonder if the show might improve after they see this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: NISHADEEP

ya...I would've tweeted to them but I'm not on twitter so cant. please could you guys keep tweeting?? Thanks!!!!! Really I wonder if the show might improve after they see this...


Hahah sure I will try to tweet this to them once.!! 😉😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2

PaYa and Rubal feel bad that Aneesha Nani has refused to go with them. They turn away and leave.
Pankhuri starts to cry.
Adi: Arey Pankhu don't cry please.
Pankhu: Main kya karu Adi? Kitne sapne dekhe te humne, ke hum Aneesha nani ko unke parivaar ke pass lekar jaaenge. lekin uno ne to saaf mana kar dia. Ab to yeh saara Austrailia ka trip bekaar ho gaya!
Adi: I know Pankhuri. Mujhe bhi bahut dard hua ke Aneesha nani didn't recognise our pyaar, but don't worry, Aneesha nani ki aisi ki taisi. u still have me na? So why are you crying??
RuYal: Guys face it, we knew ke aisa hi hona tha. Now forget Aneesha nani, lets go back to the hotel and finish packing
PaYa: U r right. Lets go. But we wont give up. no matter what happens we will take Aneesha nani with us.
They get in the car and go to the hotel. PKDHians watch them leave and sigh. They are in a deep problem and cannot understand what to do. Life was going very unlucky for them. First CM rankings and now TRPs had also decreased. What can they do???
Shaily: Come on guys, we cant stay quiet!!! We must do something fast!!! Lets set a target, we must all do atleast one thing to give PaYa some time for themselves, just one. Who agrees?
Nisha, Sonia, Diana ,Linaya, Diya,Nirupama Prateek, Hemangi, Nikita, Aiesha and the rest: Yes Shaily we are with you. #TEAM PKDH rocks!!!!!
So PKDHians follow PaYa and Ruyal to the airport and into the plane. They cry as Adi says goodbye to Melbourne. By now, PKDHians had their plan and it was working!!! As soon as everyone arrived back in Mumbai PKDHians were in action.
First was Sonia. She hid behind the doors of PaYas room in DM and sang her beautiful poem A Life Without You. Pankhuri listens and is impressed.
Pankhu: Kitne sundar voice hai na yeh birds ki
Adi: Yes. Yeh lyrics to bahut sweet hai...
PaYa are getting lost in the lyrics slowly...they are slowly getting pulled towards each other...their eyes close...PKDHians jumping with joy...PaYa get closer...slowly...slowly...slowly...slowly ...slowly
...s...l...o...w...l...y...
...
...
The phone rings. Pankhuri picks up the phone. She squeals in delight and hugs Adi.
Pankhu: Adddiii!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm sooo happy!!!!!!
Adi: Kya hua?
Pankhuri: Aneesha nani ka phone!!!!! OMG yay!!!!!! that means she came!!! Oh thank you god thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!! What else could I have asked for!!!!! So our honeymoon didn't go to waste!!!
Adi: Chal ab pick up the phone then
Someone other than PKDHians was also listening to this conversation...any guesses?? Yes, it was Dholpur ki Sheila!!!! Sheila didn't hear every word, but she did hear ' Thank you god thank you thank you thank you' , 'What else could I have asked for!' and ' So our honeymoon didn't go to waste!'
And guess what she thought it meant!!!!!!
Sheila: Iska matlab Pankhuri pregnant hai!!! Yes!!!! So CVs aakhir maan hi gaye!!!! What could be a happier news!!! I knew this was coming from their honeymoon!!! I knew it!!!!
She dances down the corridor and bumps into a PKDHian Nisha, who was left behind, on the way.
Nisha: What happened Sheila mami?
Sheila: Who are you??
Nisha: I am a guest in this 5 star hotel for 4 days only. And I must say, this place is gorgeous!!! So kind of you to let so many guests stay here for free every month!!!
Sheila: Arey get out of my way na!! I must thank god in the mandir!! U know, today god has given us the greatest news ever!! Pankhuri is pregnant!! Ab jab main Avantika ko bataungi she will be so happy that she will forgive me also!!! Yay!!!! And I'm sure now TRP aunty will accept our invitation too!!!Nisha?...
Nisha ran out of the house and cried. Cried of happiness!!!! She got sooo emotional...
Nisha: This is so wonderful!!! I cant believe it!!! I was just remembering PaYas emotional scenes...and this emotional scene is the greatest gift ever!!! Oh thank you so so so much CVs!!!!!
She continues back towards DM.
Nisha: I wonder if the others know yet? I must tell them!!!
She phones Shaily
Shaily: Oh Nisha!!! I was going to phone you!! Please tell me do you think Nakuul looks better in casuals or topless??
Nisha: Arey forget that!!! Do you guys know that...
The line is cut. Everyone is upset.
PKDHians except for Nisha are all mourning...PaYa are celebrating...so is Sheila mami...but something else is also happening...
meanwhile...somebody very important who all these people have connections to has had a car accident...
Who is it???????????????????
So there was part 2!!!!! I know its worse than the first part. Please tell me honestly!!!!!! Sorry I If included you or didn't include and u didn't like it...I will take care in the future!!!!! I was almost lot of ideas while writing this, please consider I'm not a bestselling author!!!!
please tell me your views!!!
Edited by NISHADEEP - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: NISHADEEP

Part 2

PaYa and Rubal feel bad that Aneesha Nani has refused to go with them. They turn away and leave.
Pankhuri starts to cry.
Adi: Arey Pankhu don't cry please.
Pankhu: Main kya karu Adi? Kitne sapne dekhe te humne, ke hum Aneesha nani ko unke parivaar ke pass lekar jaaenge. lekin uno ne to saaf mana kar dia. Ab to yeh saara Austrailia ka trip bekaar ho gaya!
Adi: I know Pankhuri. Mujhe bhi bahut dard hua ke Aneesha nani didn't recognise our pyaar, but don't worry, Aneesha nani ki aisi ki taisi. u still have me na? So why are you crying??
RuYal: Guys face it, we knew ke aisa hi hona tha. Now forget Aneesha nani, lets go back to the hotel and finish packing
PaYa: U r right. Lets go. But we wont give up. no matter what happens we will take Aneesha nani with us.
They get in the car and go to the hotel. PKDHians watch them leave and sigh. They are in a deep problem and cannot understand what to do. Life was going very unlucky for them. First CM rankings and now TRPs had also decreased. What can they do???
Shaily: Come on guys, we cant stay quiet!!! We must do something fast!!! Lets set a target, we must all do atleast one thing to give PaYa some time for themselves, just one. Who agrees?
Nisha, Sonia, Diana ,Linaya, Diya,Nirupama Prateek, Hemangi, Aiesha and the rest: Yes Shaily we are with you. #TEAM PKDH rocks!!!!!
So PKDHians follow PaYa and Ruyal to the airport and into the plane. They cry as Adi says goodbye to Melbourne. By now, PKDHians had their plan and it was working!!! As soon as everyone arrived back in Mumbai PKDHians were in action.
First was Sonia. She hid behind the doors of PaYas room in DM and sasng her beautiful poem A Life Without You. Pankhuri listens and is impressed.
Pankhu: Kitne sundar voice hai na yeh birds ki
Adi: Yes. Yeh lyrics to bahut sweet hai...
PaYa are getting lost in the lyrics slowly...they are slowly getting pulled towards each other...their eyes close...PKDHians jumping with joy...PaYa get closer...slowly...slowly...slowly...slowly ...slowly
...s...l...o...w...l...y...
...
...
The phone rings. Pankhuri picks up the phone. She squeals in delight and hugs Adi.
Pankhu: Adddiii!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm sooo happy!!!!!!
Adi: Kya hua?
Pankhuri: Aneesha nani ka phone!!!!! OMG yay!!!!!! that means she came!!! Oh thank you god thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!! What else could I have asked for!!!!! So our honeymoon didn't go to waste!!!
Adi: Chal ab pick up the phone then
Someone other than PKDHians was also listening to this conversation...any guesses?? Yes, it was Dholpur ki Sheila!!!! Sheila didn't hear every word, but she did hear ' Thank you god thank you thank you thank you' , 'What else could I have asked for!' and ' So our honeymoon didn't go to waste!'
And guess what she thought it meant!!!!!!
Sheila: Iska matlab Pankhuri pregnant hai!!! Yes!!!! So CVs aakhir maan hi gaye!!!! What could be a happier news!!! I knew this was coming from their honeymoon!!! I knew it!!!!
She dances down the corridor and bumps into a PKDHian Nisha, who was left behind, on the way.
Nisha: What happened Sheila mami?
Sheila: Who are you??
Nisha: I am a guest in this 5 star hotel for 4 days only. And I must say, this place is gorgeous!!! So kind of you to let so many guests stay here for free every month!!!
Sheila: Arey get out of my way na!! I must thank god in the mandir!! U know, today god has given us the greatest news ever!! Pankhuri is pregnant!! Ab jab main Avantika ko bataungi she will be so happy that she will forgive me also!!! Yay!!!! And I'm sure now TRP aunty will accept our invitation too!!!Nisha?...
Nisha ran out of the house and cried. Cried of happiness!!!! She got sooo emotional...
Nisha: This is so wonderful!!! I cant believe it!!! I was just remembering PaYas emotional scenes...and this emotional scene is the greatest gift ever!!! Oh thank you so so so much CVs!!!!!
She continues back towards DM.
Nisha: I wonder if the others know yet? I must tell them!!!
She phones Shaily
Shaily: Oh Nisha!!! I was going to phone you!! Please tell me do you think Nakuul looks better in casuals or topless??
Nisha: Arey forget that!!! Do you guys know that...
The line is cut. Everyone is upset.
PKDHians except for Nisha are all mourning...PaYa are celebrating...so is Sheila mami...but something else is also happening...
meanwhile...somebody very important who all these people have connections to has had a car accident...
Who is it???????????????????
So there was part 2!!!!! I know its worse than the first part. Please tell me honestly!!!!!! Sorry I If included you or didn't include and u didn't like it...I will take care in the future!!!!! I was almost lot of ideas while writing this, please consider I'm not a bestselling author!!!!
please tell me your views!!!


OMG I really loved this 😊 Yaay!! You included mee 😆 Shiela mami was a total hit!! I can't stop laughing OH God Help meee 🤣🤣

And you are no less than a bestselling author 👏 I really hope the part about PaYa and Mami actually happens. It would be sooo funny to watch on screen 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: cupcake2906

OMG I really loved this 😊 Yaay!! You included mee 😆 Shiela mami was a total hit!! I can't stop laughing OH God Help meee 🤣🤣

And you are no less than a bestselling author 👏 I really hope the part about PaYa and Mami actually happens. It would be sooo funny to watch on screen 😛

Thank you SOOO much yaar!!!!!! That's a huge compliment, especially for a beginner!!!!!! It means a lot really😃 Yeah imagine something like this for real lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW Nisha what an amazing update! 👏Loved it!👏 And you included me!😆 Haha..my CM rank posts found a place here!🤣 Hehe...! 😆Sheila Mami thinks pankhu is pregnant! 🤣 Let me tell you you are better than a best selling author!


Can't wait for next part! 😃Update soon!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaily1008

WOW Nisha what an amazing update! 👏Loved it!👏 And you included me!😆 Haha..my CM rank posts found a place here!🤣 Hehe...! 😆Sheila Mami thinks pankhu is pregnant! 🤣 Let me tell you you are better than a best selling author!


Can't wait for next part! 😃Update soon!😃

Thank you so much Shaily!!!!!😃 It means a lot that you loved it so much. I'm glad. Ur CM ranking posts are so powerful they find space anywhere haha😆 best selling author really??😳 thnx
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's awesome yaar...i just loved it...omg..u included shaily's cm ranking post n sonia's poem...n when u called shaily 4 giving the gud news..she asked...naks looks gud in casuals or topless??that was hilarious...u r awesome writer dear..
Plz continue soon..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nisha loved both the parts. Excellent narration and love the treatment that you have given to the story. The story incorporates equal participation of the fans . This is so heartening.😊
A big thanks for entertaining us.😊 The comedy portion was superb 😃.Eagerly waiting for the next part.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I totally agree with Shaily! See, you write better than a bestselling author! OMG! Yaar, you are absolutely FAB! I totally Loved the way you conveyed our emotions!

And I was ROFLing when Shaily said "Hey Nisha i was about to call you! Nakuul looks best in casuals or Topless?" That was total LOL!


Sheila Mami thinks that Pankhu is pregnant? How I wish it was true! Who had a car accident? Waiting to know! Please please update soon!


One more thing, you have got a fan in me!
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