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Posted: 12 years ago
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prologue:
a young girl sitting beside a tree n sobbing..thn only tiny droplets of water drops felt on her face and she experienced a cold brezze coming through to take her off.. she uttered some words to herself that y god has sent her to live on earth as y she is here because if she has none on earth then y has she survived uptil now

( she is a young girl who lives in an ashram ,her mom n dad died since whn she ws 2 years old...and she has been living in this ashram since then... and 1 person was there in her this life of journey and that was daddababu who was an employee of ashram and loved the girl frm the beginning as her daughter...)
at that moment it started raining heavily n the girl was sobbing n uttering words to herself in anger and frustation..
thn only an old lady came n said beta aap ko thand lagjayegi aap andar chalo baarish ka mausam hai
girl: nhi kaki aap jaiye mai ajaugi
lady: beta ek na ek din is duniya ko chod ke har kisi ko jaana padta hai waise hi aaj daddababu bhi chale gaye par vo hamari yaadon mai rahenge hamesha ke liye
girl: kaki wo humesha se hi mere saath the aaj achanak wo kaise chale gye...
lady: u dont worry beta kal ya parso tak tumhe taneja group ke bete lene aayenge..
girl: kaki mughe kyu??
lady: vo tumhe as a daughter adopt karna chahte hai
girl: sacchi kaki??
( she had a hope that now she will get all the love and affection which she always wanted from her mom n dad)


the day came when taneja'scame to adopt the girl..
(note: the girl is a teenager she is of 15 yrs)
himani taneja: beta hum aapko adopt krna chahte hai kya aap hamare sang rahoge?
girl: ys aunty but aaplog kaun hai?
rahul taneja: dekho beta hum taneja's hai...we dont have any child of our own n both me n my wife himani taneja are only their in whole family so we thought to adopt u n thn daddababu suggested u so we took his advice..
girl: i m sooo happy mom n dad..
himani and rahul: dekho hamari beti ne hume accept krliya hai...
rahul: mishra ji aap sab paper works khatam krvake aaiye hum bacchi ko ghar leke jaate hai..


hows it guys??
do comment n like if u liked it...
starting frm the beginning n i do tell u in this ff dont think that adi n pankhuri are brother n sis 😆😆
tell should i continue??
Edited by palakluvsabhiya - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Excellent ...can't wait to see how it unfolds...
It's only prologue... Waiting for chapter 1

Sabrina
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice Prologue, eagerly awaiting to see how the story unfolds 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chaptr 1
meeting of aditya and pankhuri


leap of 5 yrs😆

pankhuri has grown into a young beautiful lady...n she got all the love and affection that she demanded ever since childhood n now she is used too the love and affection of taneja's who adopted her 5 ys bck( she has now become extra stylish n a bit arrogant too)

himani: pankhu beta aaj hamare close family frnd ka beta usa se araha hai ..
pankhu: so wt mom?
himani: beta u dnt wnt to meet him?
pankhu: mom y should i? u n dad go n meet him na..
rahul: wts happening my babie doll and my princess himani..
himani: see rahul she is nt willing to go to meet him
rahul: pankhu beta its vry imp they r very close to us and whn u returned frm paris they came to see u but u were already not here as u had a party to attend..
pankhu: ok dad as u say i m gng n getting ready.. i will catch up wid u soon
himani: i m very worried about pankh becoz her behaviour is changing since when she returned from paris..she is now nt our simple pankhu as she was whn we adopted her..
rahul: himani,understand tym changes everybody..
himani: but i m really worried if this is her attitude thn wat will happen to our dream??
rahul: no need to worry i will handle everything..
( pankhuri came and she was wearing a gorgeous black scowach and jeans ..she was looking so sexy.. and anybody could flatter on her 😆)
rahul: here's my doll ,lets go straight to airport..
pankhu: y airport? is he a prime minister that we will receive him there?
himani: beta he has been so close to us he took our promise that we will come,he trust us more than his family..
pankhu: ok mom as u say..



At the airport..

everyone was staring at pankhuri whn she stepped out of d car... becoz she was looking as gorgeous as evr in scowach..

a voice frm behind...

himani aunty .. ,rahul uncle mai aagya mai yaha hu n thn that boy hugged both of thm so tightly and pankhu was making faces seeing that..

himani and rahul: welcome aaditya ...its been so long w havent seen u,missed u sooo much...

aadi: missed u too both aapki bahut yaad arahi thi maine aapko kal phn pe kaha tha ki late mt krna y r u late?? 😡

himani: beta wt we do, pankhu itna late karti hai
aadi: aunty ye chipkali jaisa naam kiska hai?? aur usse mera aur aapka kya connection..? (aadi confused😕)

pankhu: oyee mister i m pankhuri.. and i m nt chipkali okie??
aadi: oyee miss sexy u looking damn hot but who r u?
pankhu: ummm!! i am...
himani: aadi beta she is our daughter pankhuri we adopted her whn u were in usa..
aadi: but aapne mughse itni badi baat chupayi ki aapne ek bimbo ko adopt kr lia hai kyu aunty kyu? 😡
himani: beta situation hi kuch aaisi thi...
pankhu: who r u calling bimbo mr flirty??
aadi: to u ms sexy...


rahul and himani..tum log ladna band kro lets go .. aadi will stay in our house for some months coz aadi's parents are nt in town
pankhu: but dad y ?,y this jerk?
aadi: miss i m nt jerk ek baar meri eyes mai dekho u will fall in love wid me 😆
pankhu: no i hve no intrest mr flirty...

stop it stop it himani interveined...lets move rahul otheriwse ye log yaha bhi ladte rahenge...



hows it guys??
do like n comment..
n tell me should i continue?😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nice story ,,,,,

liked it vry much ,,,,,,

carry on :))

w8ing for next part :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I think for a 15 yr old your writing is just GREAT! I'm getting a window to how teenagers think nowadays... I love it...
Please Sharma na... Write what you are thinking of... Waiting for next chapter..

Sabrina
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
friendship begins...
taneja's place



aadi: wowww,this house has become more beautiful than ever...
pankhu: its was like this only before u fool!
himani: aadi u should rest in ur fav room,and pankhu go n show aadi the pali room sepcially decorated for him..
pankhu: for him ? aapne decorate karaya? mai jab paris se aayi tab aapne aaisa kuch nhi kiya,nt fair mom
aadi: ms pankhuri dont be jealous i have always been the loved one in this house ms sweety...
pankhu: o waterevr aadi..
aadi: chalo aapne mr ke alawa mera naam leke mughe pukara
hayeee mai fida hogaya ispe ❤️
himani: jao baaki baatein room mai karna
aadi: ys ofcouse aunty..
pankhu: as u say mom

in pankhuri's room
pankhu: welcome aadi this is my room
aadi: room toh accha hai but ek kami hai
pankhu: kya??
aadi: is room mai agar mera poster lag jaaye toh accha hoga
pankhu: hahaha very funny mr,,aadi
aadi: accha pankhu tumhara kal se college shuru horaha haina?
pankhu: haa kyu?
aadi: mera bhi we will both go in same college
exciting na?
pankhu: ys becoz an irritating person will be there to disturb me..
aadi: dont say like this my sweethrt waise bhi aaj tum itni gorgeous lag rhi ho dil fida hogya tumpe
pankhu: mai apna dil kisi aaire gaire insaan ko nhi deti..
aadi: wtevr dont think ki mai aavaiye lattu horaha hu tumpe ok its just i thought we could be good friends..
pankhu: yaa sorry actually i m a bit arrogant wid people i dont knw becoz i have seen many problems throughtout my life.. so i dont trust people easily n this is the best phase of my life with mom n dad
aadi: ys i can understand n any parent will be happy to have a daughter like u,so we can be friends ryt??
pankhu: yes ofcourse aadi y not



aadi n pankhuri's converstation was stalked by himani and rahul who were silently listening to their talks and himani said : rahul our plan is working out finally our dreams will come true because of this girl pankhuri...



do like n comment how did u liked it??

should i continue??

those who want pms pls tell me..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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@palakluvsabhiya

hey very nice yaar ,,,,,

lovely story ,,,,

loved it ,,,,

carry on :)))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is really good... I'm reading... You're good at leaving it hanging... Waiting for the next chapter... Weekend hai, I will be reading as there won't be too many posts...

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