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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi...im new here..im here to entertain you with a new ABHIYA fan fiction..please have a look...


*Love you Mr. Vampire*


  • Part-1

"Oh! my Dream Man.. When You will come to meet me in reality instead if giving me all these dream flicks??"- piya complained in a pampering voice.


...its weird that she always talks to a man only in her dreamland. the same dream, where she meets a black-suited , bluish eyed muscular guy in a foggy wood wearing a jade black sleeveless gown. she has been watching this dream since she gained her consciousness. the guy's face is clear in her dreams but weirdly when she wakes up she forgets his face. the only thing she could remember is his eyes. blue - charming eyes filled with love towards her.


...she doesn't understand whether it is a boon or curse for her as in reality she had no one to talk even no one to care as she is an orphan and lived a next to hell life in her paternal uncle's home who just haven't killed her yet just for the filthy handsome amount of insurance money that comes from court each month for raising her up. the amount of physical and mental torture towards her from her uncle and aunt only gets heeled in her dreamland with the touch of her dream-man.


...and this is a curse for her too. she could never mix up with normal humans in her age as everyone used to get freak out hearing about her dreams when she used to share it in her early childhood days, and in this scope her uncle proved her mentally abnormal child and stopped her schooling. court provided her private education. the only outside place she could go was in rehabilitation center once in a week for her counseling. but after few years she got tired of explaining that her dreams are not hallucination its her biggest truth! so, she stopped explaining. she just goes there tolerates the blabbering of her councilor and comes back. atleast these blabbering are soothing than her uncle's abuses and aunt's slaps.


...Still She Is a girl who knows to live, may be who has been taught to live by her dream man who always fuels her courage and will power. who is her friend - philosopher and guide.


...though she unable to be sure whether it is a boon or course she fell in love with her dream man. she has never wanted someone in her life the way she wanted him. enough of this dreams, she had a belief that her dream man exists and she wanted him. so now it was her only wish to meet that dream man.

..."i know you do exist.. please dream man.. please... take me away from this hell... please rescue me... "- a tear drop shaded from her eyes.


Her Dream Man wiped it off and told, "i will come piya" and smiled.


..."kab aoge tum?? you have been saying this from 18 years. now toh please come naa? please..." -saying this she grappled his palm and thrashed in his chest and started sobering.

"please.. its my birthday today.. please grant my wish... and come to me in the real world. you r the only person whom i love.. yes i love you. so much... please come..."- she continued...


..."Hmm... Then I Must Have to Grant Your Wish piya... Aunga Aaaj mai tumse milne. or... tumhe face to face 'i love you too' bolne... "- her dream man spoke with a smirk. and it made her heart beat faster and her heart melt. her tears got replaced by a sugary smile and she stared into his eyes.


she was speechless, she could not believe in her eyes her dream man repeated, "i love you too piya...since centuries i have been waiting to hear this word. tumhe pata hai.. kitne dino baad tumne mujhse phir ekbar kaha that you love me?"


...piya nodded her head both side with innocent and inquisitive gaze. her dream man smiled and encircled her by his muscular arms and hugged her tightly and told, "piya, pehchan logi na mujhe?"


..."tum aaoge naa?"- piya questioned. her dream man kissed on her forehead and called her "paagal"

---------------Then BAMMM...!!!---------------

a Sudden jerk broke piya's slumber. she woke up. she saw the bus, by which she was going to trip that was organized by her rehabilitation center was stopped near a hotel the caretaker told that they have reached in dehradun. but they can't get off as their guide was yet to come.


Piya yawned and queered in her mind, "Kya wo sach me Ayega?"


...scene moved to a dark room where a guy in black suit was sitting in front of a crystal ball. a old man came and told, "oh lord abhay... the time has come up.. now you have to bring maithili back in this world... but beware... JEH is also there...!"


Abhay - The present Leader of the DARK WORLD, the 100 years old vampire roused up. he turned back and told, "yes... i have also promised piya that today i will go to her..."


...hearing the name piya the old man got confused for once but the other moment he uttered, "oh.. toh in this birth Queen Maithili's name is piya haan??"

"yeah...yours maithili is now piyali jaiswal"-abhay told with a blush...


"and his abhiyendra is now his dream man.. haha.." he added...

"so what? she still loved you like the way she used to...am i right my lord?"-the old man asked.

In Reply abhay blushed! but on the second place he controlled himself and rushed away in wind speed aftar telling, "anyway... i'm getting late"



...piya, in her reality was just thinking about her dream man though she surrounded with other people, some were suffering from stress, some were suffering from melancholy. though she was happy a bit as at least her 18th birthday won't get spoiled by her uncle and aunt's torture. she was trying to recall her dream man's face but all was going in vain. suddenly she saw from the window that a man was passing by glaring to her. the person's face was so familiar. the man passed by from there. but the "De -ja -vu" feeling was yet working on her. she felt that the person was tieing her with silver chains which was giving her burning sensation. some foggy scenes were flashing in front of her eyes like she was jumping in the fire And uttering the word "abhiyendra" gazing at someone whose face was blur.


...her hallucination broke when their caretaker shouted, "okay people, now its time for getting off from the bus and explore dehradun. so here is your mentor 'mr. Abhay Raichand'.. the faculty of DEHRADUN REHAB . famous psychologist and hypnotist of Dehradun". saying this he pointed to the door. and abhay walked in in the formal. though he was wearing black shades still his eyes were on piya... Piya was just gazing and gazing to him. though she couldn't recall that it was the same face whom she saw in her dreams everyday but her heart recognized. it started beating faster and faster. piya was trying hard to find out why that person is feeling so familiar but she was clueless and abhay kept staring at her like he has finally found his whole world...

-----EPISODE ENDED WITH THEIR EYE LOCK-------

--------To Be Continued...


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Poojasurekha thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Congrats for your new story. It seems very interesting.
cuteariya thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#3
Brilliant concept
Poor pia suffering a lot coz of her so called uncle & auntie
I just want to kill them right now for hurting pia
Pia have dream abt the men since childhood but nobody believes her
OMG she was Maithili in her past life lover of abhay
Finally abhiya met awe pia's heart beat so fast seeing abhay
She couldn't remember abhay face but her heart recognized him
Update soon
Meera.Com thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#4
Liked d story n give punishment 2 piyas uncle aunt for torturing n exploitng her. Plz give update fast n was it jay who looked at piya? wat happnd in d past dat only piya came back as reincarnation n not abhay jay
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meera.Com

Liked d story n give punishment 2 piyas uncle aunt for torturing n exploitng her. Plz give update fast n was it jay who looked at piya? wat happnd in d past dat only piya came back as reincarnation n not abhay jay


Thank u very much :) i will be revealing everything soon..:)😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: Poojasurekha

Congrats for your new story. It seems very interesting.


Thank u So much :) 😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: cuteariya

Brilliant concept

Poor pia suffering a lot coz of her so called uncle & auntie
I just want to kill them right now for hurting pia
Pia have dream abt the men since childhood but nobody believes her
OMG she was Maithili in her past life lover of abhay
Finally abhiya met awe pia's heart beat so fast seeing abhay
She couldn't remember abhay face but her heart recognized him
Update soon


Thank u very much :) 😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Liked the concept. Looking forward to read more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice concept...
The update was really good...
Waiting for the next update...

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