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hema

@hema_rawat

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

amzing os ...nd wonderfully wriiten .😊

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aliya

@.Intoxicated.

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

I m speechless,

such a brilliant piece of work

rape is a serious issue of society, only that women can understand who went through it,

piya went through so pain but her angel abhay make it up to her...

she got justice, rape culprits should be hanged till death,

abhay loved pia so much and stood by her when her own family was not there.

outstanding work dear👏

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zara

@meerubzara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

awesome os

very wel lwritten

Edited by meerubzara - 10 years ago

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Masooma Zaidi

@...mano...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

wonderful piece of writing... :) hats off 2 u... I simply loved this simple pure and real love of abhiya... <3 *clapping*

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Hi peehu u left me speechless i dont have exact words to explain that how much i loved this Brilliant and awesome os written by u but still i must say it's simply wonderful and I simply and truly loved Abhay so much in this OS and i m proud of him every man in today's world should be like him he's the Superbest no one can be like him and no one can ever love Piya more than him the way he does, he simply always takes her all pains sufferings tears heartbreaks and gives her all his beautiful love, caring, supports, truthful heart , standing right with her all the way when she needs him giving her happiness all the way forever without asking anything for himself ever as just wanting only her to be with him forever that's My Abhay's love for his Piya and I Love My Abhiya for forever !! i loved Abhay all over again and it just get's increased by the day's passed by !! Awesome u r to write such a heart touching os which i will never ever forget !! Thanks dear !! ❤️

Edited by -ChitraRocking- - 10 years ago

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

simply incredible and amazing os.

it was a heart wrenching story and the biggest worry for women right now. this story totally reflects the reality in our country w.r.t. women who is raped.

abhay is an angel and every women needs a men like him. loved how he helped pia get back to normalcy with love , care , affection and sharing her pain , if only pia's parents would understand that. i appreciate pia's friend for standing with her and supporting her even when her own brother was guilty.

happy that her culprits were punished and pia have decided to give a shot to her new life with abhay

brilliant story and loved the title. it's so apt

happy new year to all.

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

i just luvvv the title of os
very sensitive issue ... written by u greatly
its the truth of society ...
and u write down quite well ... no one can image the sufferings and pain that woman gone through

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Anon

@raintrifle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

I agree that this piece of writing was hurried , I would have loved if it had much more of traumatic essence and if Pia s emotions were analyzed too deeply and obviously if it had more of abhiya 😳 but even then It directly striked me in my heart ❤️.

It also tell us that true best friends are with us for long hauls , to stick by us in every UPs and DOWNs of life and that they will value truth in the end . Maya did the right thing .

Then Abhay , proved himself the right humsafar , life partner to pia .

I hate this situations , getting stalked or intimidated (or in this case raped ) by ur best friends brother and his group of forsaken buddies .

Trust me i know two girls in mine class who were in the same place of pia and maya once ( now they are reluctant in talking to each other ) , it was just a .. forced kiss or smooch in their case 🤢 . It was terribly nauseating to know this is the mentality of Gen- Y boys .