||Abhiya FF- Always and Forever|| (Book 1 Completed) - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
chp 1 really gud start nd abhay saved little pia... obviously they will meet again!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
chp 2 loved it.. I think in 1st car the grl was T... pia maya cousin nd misha's was on prfct time... they all togthr nice...
aftr that our hero's entry was also good... pia still remember his touch bt abhay didn't recognize her... nd pia started drooling on him... lovely!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
chp 3 full on bang yaar!!! all were too good..
I was so right She was T only... mishu is sane here like was in show... prankster nd I love her for this... enjoyed reading this part... nd pia saw ABHAY in jungle nd abhay too was drooling on her in canteen waiting to read abhay's p.o.v.!!!
now pia found his bracelet nd in frst abhay got her bracelet...
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chp 4 nd 5 both r amazing Sid is abhay's bro nd he is married also that's diff.. but I like his char he is not evil hopefully... it was protection belt of abhay thank god pia got it nd gave back to him othrwise how abhay will able to go colg admire her...
he is attracting to pia nd same wid pia... but not remembering there frst meeting hope they will knw about it soon!!!
now pia will go for job nd I think she will get job in abhays company only!!! let's see...
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chp 6 again amazing loved it...pia got green signal Dr job... pia nd abhay's little walk was really cute nd poor pia hit wid door 😆 nd abhay cured her pain in one touch I just loved this skill of abhay so protective...
T ko again blow out kar dia bt this time by abhay... 👍🏼
now I hope pia will be his partner!!!
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chp 7 maya stole the part!! a Big thanks to her fr making abhiya partner nd She too got her partner nd in ur story everyone is positive means jeh too is in gud char...
eagr to read nxt part so no more bak bak!!!
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chp 8 awesomee bt short also... thn also I loved reading it... pia going fr interview I still hope she get job in abhay's company only... maya is a true frnd of pia nd were misha is vanished I missing her!!!
nd shweta bhabhi is really nice teasing abhay!!! hope she select a guy nd romantic song fr abhiya!!nd lastly why realization hit abhay plz abhay dnt realize anything nd just be wid pia yaar!!!
eagerly waiting to read more plzz update soon dear!!
I really enjoyed reading ur story... it's really amazing!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
read all parts in one go.. .amazing ff... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi

read all parts in one go.. .amazing ff... loved it


Thank you 😉
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Enjoy guys!

Chapter 9
(Flashback; 17 years ago)
(Piya's POV)

I opened my eyes. I was in an empty room. There was a soft bed under me, above a ceiling fan. Where am I? I got up and looked for someone. Anyone.
"Mommy, where are you?" I cried out for her. I missed her. I got up and ran towards the door. It wouldn't open.
I banged on the closed door, while yelling for someone to find me. A lady finally came inside.
"You're finally awake dear...are you okay?"
"I want my mommy!" I yelled. Tears ran down my cheeks. "Where is she?"
"Dear, I'm sorry. I don't know where she is." She took me into her arms in a tight hug. "This is your new home."
"New home?" The lady wiped my tears.
"Yes, you will stay here now."
I was confused. Why did she want me to stay here?
"But I want to go to my mommy!"
"Dear, I don't know where your mommy is...maybe she will come back to get you. Till then, you will stay here. Okay?"
I nodded in agreement. I hope mommy comes soon...
"Let me take you back to bed. You can meet your new friends tomorrow."
She picked me up and took me back to the bed. I fell asleep on no time.

(Next Day...)

The lady came back in the morning. She had a dress in her hands.
"Come dear, let me help you get ready."
She gave me a warm bath and helped me get dressed. I liked her.
"What's your name?" She asked me.
"Piya."
"That's a very sweet name."
"What's your name?" I asked her.
"Me, I'm Sonali. You can call me Sona didi."
I smiled at her. She patted me head.
"Come, let me introduce you to the other kids."
She took my hand and led me to a bigger room. It had lots of toys and books. There were some other kids playing with them too. Sona didi clapped her hands, and everyone came over to us.
"Kids, meet your new friend, Piya."
They all smiled and waved. I felt shy. Sona didi took me around and introduced me to everyone one by one.
"Kids, where is Maya?"
"She's playing outside." They all said in unison.
"Come, Piya."
She took me outside. There was a large playground. On the swings was a girl with long, dark hair.
"Maya, come here."
She ran over quickly, with a big smile on her face.
"I get a new friend didi, YAY!" She started jumping for joy. "What's your name?"
"Piya" I felt shy again.
"Piya, this is Maya." I waved at her.
"Okay girls, breakfast is in five minutes. Lets go back inside." She took us both my the hand and led us to the dining hall. But I didn't want to eat. I wanted mommy...

The dining hall was large. There was a long table with lots of chairs. Maya took me to a seat. I sat next to her. There were bowls of sliced fruit and bread and butter laid out neatly on the table. I wasn't in the mood to eat though.
"Piya, why aren't you eating anything?" I stayed silent.
"Here, let me feed you." Maya took a slice of an apple and held it at my lips. I took it without protesting. She was so nice.
We became close in the coming few years almost like sisters. We would never leave each other behind. I waited by the small window near the entrance everyday, waiting for my mommy to come and take me with her, and Maya too. That day never came.

(Three years later...one dark night)

"Let's go children. It's time for bed." Kaka said. He was the watchman of the orphanage. He loved all of us as his own children.
"Come on Piya, let's go." Maya and I skipped happily inside, hand in hand.

(??????'s POV)

"I finally found you, Piya dear." The mysterious man smiled evilly. "You shall not live any longer now."
He thrust his hand forward, in direction of the orphanage. A blazing flame engulfed his hand, as he waved it from a distance around the orphanage. As he did so, a small fire broke out on the wooden frame and spread quickly, smothering the entire building in flames. Screams were heard. Little children banged on the walls for help. "They are all going to die." He thought, snickering.

(Piya's POV)

There was smoke and fire everywhere. I was scared.
"Somebody help!" I yelled into the smoke. Maya was also trapped with me. All I could hear was yelling and crying. Why is this happening?
"Piya! Maya! Are you two in there?" It was Kaka. We both yelled yes in unison. He kicked the door open and jumped over the flames to get to us.
"Are you okay? Did you get hurt?" He caressed our faces.
We managed to escape the burning orphanage. No one else was outside, except for us three. Maya and I were crying profusely. Kaka gently stroked our hair.
"It's okay. You're absolutely safe now. We need to get help fast." He took us both by the hand, leading us to the main road.
The entire orphanage had burned to the ground by the time we got back with the fire brigade. No one else survived.
Suddenly everything went black. I could see or feel anything.
"Piya dear, you can run, but you can't hide." The man laughed hysterically.

The dream, or should I say nightmare ended right then. That man...who is he? What does he want with me! I curled back into bed, now facing the window. I flinched at the sight. A large hand was stretched out on the glass, slowly tapping its fingers on it. Then the hand disappeared along with a thick shadow. It had an eerie blue glow around it.
"No, Piya. I must be hallucinating."
But I didn't feel safe. I immediately moved took my things into the living room. I couldn't sleep in that room knowing someone...or something is watching me like that.

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