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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

thrilling update...
its seems to me sid shot abhiya ... :( :(
hats off to u . amazing piece of story

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kirti

@Andromeda001

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

U dont even know how much I love, stories being told in this fashion, like date and time wid a quote describing d part. A beautiful movie can be made on this story (bt itna action kaun karega, Indian actors mein😆?)

Oh my!!! I loved when Piya retorted "I was expecting more"😆. Abhay could see d similiarity b/w Felix n Piya n all he could utter was "U r a girl?"😆. Piya had to return after all!!!

Passion personified is Abhiya❤️. Dunno which addiction is greater, ours for Abhiya or Abhiya for each other .

I really loved how u evolved d relationship of Abhiya as secret agents👏

In d end, I m gonna see Abhiya having a beautiful future rather than 2nd negative thoughts😛, considering their talents too😎

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Marvelous job Shreya!

You gave it a vague ending meaning anything could have happened.

Abhay and Pia's chemistry was on spot.

Loved every bit of it.

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: bellaaa
thrilling update...
its seems to me sid shot abhiya ... :( :(
hats off to u . amazing piece of story

Thank you Beenish😳 You can imagine whatever you like😃

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: CavingIn
Marvelous job Shreya!
You gave it a vague ending meaning anything could have happened.
Abhay and Pia's chemistry was on spot.
Loved every bit of it.

Thanks Nidha...yeah I gave it an open ending.😳

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: Andromeda001
U dont even know how much I love, stories being told in this fashion, like date and time wid a quote describing d part. A beautiful movie can be made on this story (bt itna action kaun karega, Indian actors mein😆?)

Actually date and time were kinda really important to the story😛 Aree Vivian Dsena, Sukirti Kandpal hai na😆

Oh my!!! I loved when Piya retorted "I was expecting more"😆. Abhay could see d similiarity b/w Felix n Piya n all he could utter was "U r a girl?"😆. Piya had to return after all!!!
Passion personified is Abhiya❤️. Dunno which addiction is greater, ours for Abhiya or Abhiya for each other .

He only realized it was Piya after he saw her in action. That's when he realized it was Piya after all, because you tend to give up after a year , don't you? Normally, that's a long enough time.

I really loved how u evolved d relationship of Abhiya as secret agents👏
In d end, I m gonna see Abhiya having a beautiful future rather than 2nd negative thoughts😛, considering their talents too😎

LOL you can always choose your ending😃

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

By the way, what inspired you to write this one, I mean feelings blended into a pure action story?

I have always loved action. For this one, well I used a lot of the plot from the first story I'd ever thought of- I was pretty young then, yet I spent years obsessing over them. I actually searched Google for names that would suit the characters best😆 anyway. It was a supernatural story, but a few things were common- Sid's character, and the fact that both of them were supposed to be fighting in a war together. So I humanized them and since I didn't want to have a war I just made them both the agents. then again both the leads were supposed to have a special power . Since I could not make humans have that I changed the powers themselves. I also worked on the backstory once I decided I was going to write on them.😆 And I have taken it as my personal challenge to always write stories where people won't be saying it's copied or inspired from someone else. So I tried writing Blade of Steel as I never seen or read something like this. Action, I have read, but not a love story. So...yeah.

Shreya, No one, who had read your Magnetic Dipoles. Curiouser and Curiouser and The Outsider would say that you copy someone else's works. Your each and every work is unique.

And this one adds to the list.

By the way I am planning to trend - ALS-saveSteel&Blade. ALS-wanthappyending :-)

Anyone joining me 😉

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

^LOL Harini I didn't kill them off na. You can always imagine a happy ending 😆

I know people havent because I consciously avoid copying anyone. i hate plagiarism myself and where better to start than at home?

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rockstarashu

@rockstarashu

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

awesome update.the ending was unpredictable.tfs

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flora212

@flora212

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Posted: 11 years ago

#160

First of all sorry for commenting late. I read it before eid and I forgot to unres my coments as I got too busy. Anyways I forgot where I actually resed😕 so doing again.😆

Ok now coming to story it was brilliant and different story. Blade and steel both are brave😃 this is one kind of different love story. And surprisingly I loved the ending. Though you gave an open end but its happy ending for me in both way😛 both abhay piya shot sid and was saved or both of them died its happy ending😆 cause wherever they are they are together

I am glad you didn't kill one of them😛 and even you killed you killed both 😆 okay overall it was outstanding story.

Edited by flora212 - 11 years ago