Abhiya ss nw journey of love

Page

Next Last

Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys I reposting my first three chapters and last update is the new chapter

I got this idea for a fanfic on abhiya it's will be slightly similar to the movie Aaina. I have not decided the title yet. If you like it I will continue it and you all can come up with a title. Please do leave your precious comments even if it is this is boring n not good .

Here comes chapter 1:

A newly married young girl sitting in the room all alone in the dark. Here she was sitting all alone with no one around her to console her.. She never ever thought life could be so cruel ever.

In Her pov flashback

I had just arrived home yesterday to attend my sister's wedding but instead I got married as my sister ran away today morning. My mother madhu was a heart patient and she couldn't bear the pain as it was too much grief caused by her own daughter.Then came the groom who was looking for his bride too be he asked me what happened why are you crying. I gave him the note and he after few minutes walked up to me and my mom and told my mom I will marry your other daughter today. After the marriage we came to my mother for blessing but we were too late my mother had breathed her last.

Flashback over just her pov:

For any girl the day of her marriage brings lots of happiness and brings many new relationships but for me it brought only pain n sadness . I do not know if I will be accepted by my in laws as I have heard from my mother they were against their son's marriage to my sister. My sister and him I should say my husband were madly in love with each other and were going to get married today .

One thing I do not understand is why did he marry me when he loves my sister so much he could have waited for her and he does not even know me at all. It was the first time we met when he came to get sister as the priest was waiting for the bride to arrive. Did he marry me out of pity for us as he heard my mom worried about my future . Well then I do not want his pity either I never wanted anyone's pity. Maybe that couldn't not be the reason as I saw him angry after reading my sisters note I saw him clenching his fist with the note n I saw him tear the paper but I did not see angry in his blue eyes when he came up and asked my mom for my hand in marriage. But the when we came to his mansion he took me straight to his room and left slamming the door so hard that I could feel room shaking was that his angry ?

I do not know anything about him really and I do not know where he is at all

All i knew is his name is abhay.

Precap: abhay's pov

Edited by Abhiya_Visu - 12 years ago

Quote

Frequent Posters

Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

The title Suggestion Came from Luckdiya and thank you Bhavna once again

here is the next update : i am not happy with this update at all i feel i could have done a better job but for some reason i am not able to write abhay's pov the way i want to

its short update but i promise starting next time it will be bigger.
please add me to your buddy list if you want to get pm's if you are not in my buddy list.
i hope i can write better starting next time as reading you alls comments i know you all have high expectations .and i hope i can reach there. thanks you all for your lovely comments

Abhay Pov:

How dare she do this to me ? I loved her so much that I went against my parents. My parents told me she does not love you Abhay. I never believed them. Instead I fought with them for her. She was using me. I hate her. I hate her face and I hate everything related to her. She will have to pay for it and then he remembers he married her sister. He married maithali's twin sister. In angry and to teach maithali a lesson I married piya. Maithali you never loved me you always came late whenever we had plans to meet. I always took out time for you. you never valued what you had Maithali. One day Maithali Dobriyal I will make sure you realize value of others and time.

Then he realizes again about piya. Omg what did I just do in fit of anger and to teach maithali a lesson I married piya. But piya could have said no. but she did not. Why. I guess she said married me seeing her moms condition. I need to talk to her. I need to tell piya. But tell her what. I do not know what to tell her. Yes I did feel sorry for piya when her mom was talking about their prestige and everything. But that is not the reason. How should I tell her I married you because I was angry at your sister and wanted to teach her a lesson. Will she be able to forgive me. Maithali killed me today I loved her with all my heart. I loved her more than anything. I have to tell piya.

Precap: meet the Raichand Family

Edited by Abhiya_Visu - 22 July 2012 at 11:45am

Edited by Abhiya_Visu - 12 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Here is the next chapter

Hopefully you will like it

Please do press the like button

Abhay goes to talk to piya

He knocks on the door of his bedroom

Piya says who is it n you may come in

Abhay Walks in and looks at piya and then says piya I want to tell you something. It's really important

Abhay says piya I am sorry I married you

I am really sorry

Piya gives a confused look

Abhay says piya I loved your sister infact I still do and I will never be able to love you

I never can and I am sorry

I took the decision in anger to marry you

I wanted to show maithali that abhay raichand is not her slave and he does not wait for anyone

I am extremely sorry piya

I know I did wrong and I know it will be difficult for both of us to stay together so I want you to decide the future of our relationship piya.

I want you to take your time

If you decide you want to break this one day relationship it's okay with me

And if you want to give this relationship a chance we can work on it

When you feel like you got the answer please let me know

I will respect your decision

and abhay was about to walk out of the room

Piya says abhay

Abhay turns back

Piya says Abhay I really appreciate that after acknowledging your fault you had the courage to accept it. Abhay you did not force me to marry you. Seeing my mothers condition I accepted to get married to you. So its really not your fault.

After abhay leaves

A women knocks on the door

Piya says come in

A gracious women walks in

She is beautiful and elegant she is haseena raichand

Haseena says in a rude mocking tone I hope you had a good night sleep in a mansion

Piya just looks at her and gives a slight smile

Haseena in a rude tone tells her we never liked your sister. We were against abhay's marriage to maithali.

abhay went against us and ended up marrying you as your sister ran away.

And says anyways here is food trays on this cart eat whatever you like and if you want something let the servants know by pressing that red button on the right side wall .

And she left

piya was in tears

Piya thought how can she be so mean to me?

Piya pov well how can I expect her to be all nice and give me a warm welcome.

Well talking about rest of the family

Chand raichand well he did not say anything to me clearly but the look he was giving me was enough to tell me get lost from here and I am not welcomed or accepted in this family.

And then I met a girl who i was shocked to see here her name was anwesha abhay's cousin who gave me I don't care so look and I thought I have seen her somewhere before I know it.

Few days Later

Piya got a call on her cell phone who she saw as a fresh of breath air and felt alive.

Piya picked up the phone and said hello sir

Sir: piya when r You coming back I suppose your sister marriage is over and it time for you to return to work

Piya: sir I will be back tomorrow

Sir: see you then

As piya is going back to mumbai as she feels it would be better if she leaves she decides to tell someone as it would not be nice.

She checked the guest room to see if abhay is there so she could tell him she has to go back to work as her holiday is over but to her disappointment he was not there and she thought I guess I will not get to see him before I leave as I have not seen him or talked to him ever since he apologised to me.

Then when she was walking back she sees haseena sitting on the sofa in the lounge area. She walks up to haseena and says auntie tomorrow I will be going back to work

Haseena just gave her a look that said who cares

Next day in the morning at piya's office

Piya goes to her bosses. Cabin and says may i come in.

Boss: come in and yea piya I got a very important opportunity in our hands. If we get their approval for this deal then we will be lucky as we will work with them

Piya: who is them?

Boss: sorry its a surprise for you all and you will find out soon so you being my. Project manager I want you to make the presentation for this golden opportunity which is rare . I know you always give your 100% but this time I want you to give it a 1000%

Piya: okAy sir I will and I guess they are very important people

Boss: yes they are and the junior boss is very hard to please he expects everything to be perfect and I heard he gets angry easily so I expect and trust you the most that you will not let this project go out of our hands as it is very crucial and take our company to new heights by just working with them and remember they do not need us we need their support and collaboration in this project. Therefore they can reject our deal for this project if they find slightest error or problem.

Piya don't worry boss we will do it I will start working on it now with rest of the staff.

Raichand office

Abhay thinking about piya and thinking why did she not tell him before she left his house and he thought maybe she does not want to give him a chance in this so called husband wife relationship.

Then chand comes over and says abhay we need to go to Mumbai tomorrow

Abhay says alright

Precap: none

Edited by Abhiya_Visu - 12 years ago

Quote

Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 4:

Abhay pov

Today I saw piya. I was excited to see her. I was upset that she left without telling me but as soon as i saw her now my anger melted. I was impressed with her presentation . I saw her enthusiasm n excitement about the project in her eyes and felt it in her voice. I understood when she was called as piya dobriyal she may have not told her boss n collegues about our marriage n what would she have told them about our marriage anyway

Even dad was impressed by her. She gave her beautiful smile when dad announced that malhotra's get the contract deal. I will get to work with piya n get to know her.

Now I need to talk to her I wanted to know what her decision is. I really hope she gives our relationship a chance. I don't know why but I really want to give this relationship a chance. I have this feeling it will work. I am scared what if she says no but I got to take this chance and if she says no I will convince her. After all it about my reputation. I never heard a no but also piya is not like other girls. I will accept whatever her decision is ..

Piya pov:

When I saw abhay I was happy I could not hide my smile I just couldn't stop smiling and I guess did not go unnoticed by everyone especially mr chand raichand n abhay After my presentation as it was last one mr chand raichand announced malhotra company will get the contract. I was extremely excited i will get to work with abhay and maybe get to know him more. I need to talk to him I need to tell him my decision.

How should I tell him?

After the conference was over as it went on all day. Piya was walking to front gate. Meanwhile abhay calls her and she turns back.

abhay: piya may I talk to you for a second

Piya yea sure and actually I wanted to talk to you

Abhay: congratulations for the contract. You gave a fantastic presentation piya .

Piya: thank you abhay.

Abhay : piya can I ask you a question

Piya: yes

Abhay: in his mind come on abhay ask her you can do it. But I do not want her to think I desperate and come on abhay you can do . Come on abhay you are a raichand . She is so different n I know no one has ever resisted my charm but kya kare.

Piya snaps her fingers front of abhay and says hello abhay are you here

Abhay : sorry um I was gonna ask you if I could drop you at your place?

Piya : no thanks but I was gonna go with my friend n ummm

How are you Abhay ?

Abhay : smile immediately vanished when piya said no but he was not gonna give up so easily. Koi baat nahi but I guess I was fine

Piya: what do you mean you were fine what happen?

Abhay: ek khoobsurat is ladki be meri saath meri car mein jaane se manna kardiya

Piya: thought to play along alittle achcha toh us ladki ne toh bahut bhoora kiye kyun ki agar Mujhe koi handsome ladka puchcha tha toh main ha kehti

Abhay : surprised n immediately gave his best killer smile to piya and said shall we go.

While abhay and piya were chatting in the car way to piya's flat abhay asked piya out for dinner

Piya said yes and then abhay left n said I will pick up at 7 be ready

Piya sadly said I do not have any dress for dinner

How is it everyone I know it's been a really long time since I have updated sorry for the long wait if still interested n thank you all so much for reading this ss when it not good at all. Thanks you all n love you all

Edited by Abhiya_Visu - 12 years ago

Quote

Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter index

Chapter 1 page 1

Chapter 2 page 1

Chapter 3 page 1

Chapter 4 page 1

Edited by Abhiya_Visu - 12 years ago

Quote

kirti

@Andromeda001

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome story.U r continuing it? Dat s gr8.
Plz continue n PM me.

Quote

Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Andromeda001
Awesome story.U r continuing it? Dat s gr8.
Plz continue n PM me.

Thank u and I will

Hey I am I kinda got lost how to continue story but then I had few people telling me when I will update and it made me feel really bad so here I am continuing and I will continue till the end of the story

Quote

Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

good tht u restarted this shivani. liked the update. good tht abhay pia are acting normal

Quote

Raatry

@forever.alone

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

thnx for contnwing it 👍🏼 .btw really nice update.looks like abhay was trying to flirt with piya 😲 .i'm happy that abhay wants to give a chance to their realationship.hope piya will say yes..thnx for the pm.contnw soon. 😛

Quote

Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: ririrararaatry
thnx for contnwing it 👍🏼 .btw really nice update.looks like abhay was trying to flirt with piya 😲 .i'm happy that abhay wants to give a chance to their realationship.hope piya will say yes..thnx for the pm.contnw soon. 😛

Thank u

I will